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WildcatsGal
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Post subject:  Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 3:47 pm |
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A white wolf walk on to a hill & howled
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!Balto!
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 3:52 pm |
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Max jumped to the sound of a howl and looked out the window and saw a wolf on a hill
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WildcatsGal
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 4:15 pm |
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The white wolf walked into the town
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!Balto!
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 8:14 pm |
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Max started to the door when he remembered Storm so he just forgot about what he saw and went back to sleep next to Storm
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Kalgorn
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 12:27 am |
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(hay, snuck on for awhile while my parents are out. Ok, yes you can join Aleu_roleplayer. Thanks for keeping the disease facts the same !Balto!. And ive got just one request to make. Could you try to make your posts longer?
Well i better get off now. C ya)
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Roxas
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 10:29 am |
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( we will try)
Storm was having a bad dream, it was the same wolf he had Storm pinned to the wall, the wolf grinned as his eyes went down storms body, Storm could see more wolves in the background all closing in, He struggled and tried to move, but the wolf was a lot stronger and he could barely move and he sobbed as the wolf moved closer and closer.
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!Balto!
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 1:23 pm |
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(i'll try)
Max saw Storm sobbing and shaking so he try to wake him up saying Storm wake up Storm your having a bad dream Max asked the others to help him as he tryed to wake him up by repeating wake up Storm your having a bad dream
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Anayu
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 2:37 pm |
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(!Balto! can you do me a favor and denote the speech your character makes with italics, quotation marks, or could you possibly bold it? It's hard to read when the words Max is speaking are just thrown in there at random and I can't always tell what's description and what's dialogue.)
Amongst the comotion from earlier in the day, Blitz had been ushered outside the hospital. Not wanting to leave her new friends, or at least the two she knew, Slyth and Storm, she had proceeded to curl up just outside the hospital door and still lay there napping lightly. Her ears perked forward and stood up on her head as she heard the wolf howl and her head rose from its position on her paws. She watched the white wolf padding quietly into the town and tilted her head to the side. 'Who's that? And why is she here?' she thought to herself.
The black and grey half wolf stood up and was just about pad to the white wolf, when inside she heard whimpers, sobs and shouts. She turned back the hospital, whimpering herself and then sat back down, pressing the side of her head and one ear against the door to hear what was going on. 'I hope he's okay.'
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!Balto!
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 3:53 pm |
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(sorry)
Max heard someone at the door he didnt know who they were so he went to the door and said "is someone out there" then thinking about the wolf he saw he yelled "if your the wolf plzz just leave this place only i have a sick brother who need to recover so plzz just leave this place alone"
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 4:06 pm |
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(It's ok, thanks!)
Blitz kept her ear to the door and then was rewarded with a voice from the other side. It was from the other male husky from before, Storm's other brother if she was correct in her hearing. But as he mentioned a wolf and asked more or less if it was her, she said in an upset, defensive manner, "I'm no wolf!" The sentence came out a little louder than she'd intended, for she feared the dogs of Nome finding out she was half wolf and so she cleared her throat and said a little more quietly. "Sorry I shouted. My name's Blitz. I met your brothers Slyth and Storm earlier. I got pushed out of the hospital and I just wanted to make sure Storm was ok. If you want me to go, I will."
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!Balto!
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 4:32 pm |
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Max thought for a sec. and remembered that Blitz was the dog he saw before with his brother Slyth and said "oh sorry i thought you were someone else you dont have to go but aint it cold out there i would let you in but the doors locked and watch out i saw a wolf coming into town not that long ago thats who i thought you were my bad"
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Anayu
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 4:48 pm |
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"No, I'm alright out here, it's not that cold." Blitz's ears swiveled around as she heard the white wolf seat herself behind her and wondered if she should tell Max that she was so near. She then shrugged it off and replied, "I figured the door might be locked. It's ok, and I don't think the wolf will bother me." Speaking of the wolf, she turned her head to see her and smiled in a friendly way, though didn't say anything to her. She'd never actually met a wolf before, but she figured she'd be alright because she was half and half.
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