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MudTheWolf
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 8:30 am |
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Tiger gasped and stood up, shaking the dirt from his mane. "Aura, stay here with Shade. I'm going to go and help the others." He said, then ran out of the cave before she could protest. "But--" She began, but realised he was already gone. "But if you leave me here, then Shade and I are going to be vulnerable to attack." She whispered. "Darn it!" Aura hissed. Tiger gave a loud roar and pounced at the group of lionesses surrounding Jenia.
ooc: Since Kartur didn't do it, can someone else kill him?
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Shiro Grisha
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 4:46 pm |
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Kuna turned and saw Tiger, she growled, 'This is Aura's mate?' he doesn't look strong at all, Kartur could've killed easily,' Kuna then turned away from Goldmoon and charged Tiger, she pounced on him and grabbed his neck in her jaw's, shaking her violently. she wanted him dead now to make Aura suffer for her betrayal. She began to put more pressure into her bite. Kaneta who had ran to the fight came to a sliding stop, she looked around, all the pain and devastation around, she then caught sight of Shintara, shaking uncontrollably "Mom!!" she yelled, she got no response, "Mom speak to me, come on," Shintara could in fact hear everything, she was still i too much shock to even speak to anyone at this point, her eyes focused on the horizon they had a blank expression to it, Kaneta didn't know what to do, first she put her ear to Shintara's chest to listen to her heart, 'Still beating,' she then looked at Shintara's tummy, she then put her ear to it, 'Good the sound healthy,' "Mom come on snap out of it," she then slapped Shintara. The hard slap snapped Shintara out of her shocked state, "What happened?" she asked, "You were in shock," she then turned to Goldmoon, "Goldmoon help me take my mother away from here,"
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MudTheWolf
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 8:11 pm |
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Tiger was surprised by the sudden attack from Kuna. He choked out a cry of pain when she clamped her jaws around his neck. This lioness had incredible strength, she was stronger than the others. The world around him was slowly turning black, no matter how hard he tried to stay conscious, and then suddenly he felt his body grow limp, and the air fled from his lungs. Everything was completely black now.
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Shiro Grisha
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 8:49 pm |
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Kuna felt no life left within Tiger, even if he was still alive she'd just leave to bleed to death, once she dropped the body she craned her head towards Aura's cave, she smiled a twisted smile, and bolted off towards the cave, Kartur saw what his mother had done, he has had enough of the fighting what his mother told him, he finally saw what his mother truly was, a monster. "Don't even touch her," he sneered at his lionesses, he was referring to Jenia. He then also bolted of towards Aura's cave Jenia was stunned at what Kartur just said and did, Kuna got to Aura's cave with hate in her eye, "Well, looks like you have no one to defend you anymore," she cackled evilly her laugh echoed through the cave, "He is dead and there is no one to defend you," "Your wrong mother," Kartur said, as he walked in, "Ah Kartur glad you could join us now's our chance, Kill her kill her now," Kuna said as she smiled Kartur gulped he walked up to Aura and looked down at her, then wet behind her and stood over her, protecting her and Shade, "No," he said in a low voice, but his voice had a little fear in it. Kuna's eye shot wide open then went to anger, "You treacherous excuse for a son, I trained you to be the perfect killer, you were suppose to be like any other, you were suppose to be like me, a true killer, and now your protecting the one that not only betrayed my trust, but the love of your life went and mated with the one you were "suppose" to kill," Kuna just stayed in one place, "You were suppose to kill the three of them, Him, her and..." her gaze fell upon Shade, "And her," Kartur just stood in one place still having fear for going against his mother, "I don't care about that any more mother, you have lost your mind...I'm not going to let you hurt anyone else,"
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 6:04 pm |
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Aura almost burst into tears when Kuna told her that Tiger was dead, but she finally refused to believe it. She shook with fear when Kartur came in, but was surprised when he protected her and Shade instead of killing them both. Although he was protecting her, she still shook slightly and curled her tail protectively around Shade. She couldn't fight yet because she was still a bit weakened, but she would still show attitude. "Back off Kuna." She snarled, her voice shaking slightly. Never before had she been this scared, but something else was there too, was it courage? Or was it simply her mother's instint? She didn't know. Aura looked up at Kartur from the corner of her eyes. Why was he helping her? Just moments ago he'd wanted to kill her and Shade, but now he seemed to be rebelling against his own mother. Maybe he finally understood that Kuna had indeed lost her mind. "G-go back t-to your outlands. N-none of us w-want you here." She growled, her voice once again slightly shaky.
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Shiro Grisha
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 11:38 pm |
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kartur felt the fear in Aura, and heard what she said, "She won't leave he craned his head to her, "Don't worry Aura," he paused, "I'm sorry for everything," he gulped, "I just never realized it until now...I...I still loved you no matter what, I never forgot about you, you were always there in my dreams Aura." he then looked at his mother, "I will never kill her mother, your going to have to kill me to get to her." his head turned back to Aura, "I want you to run Aura take your daughter with you, when I have a hold on her run," "YOU WORTHLESS PEICE OF TRASH," kuna shouted, spit flying our of her mouth as she shouted, "WHAT MADE YOU TURN YOUR BACK ON ME YOU TRAITOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "Firstly you attacked Shintara while she is pregnant, you scare into shock, you may have damaged her cubs inside her, I run out from fear of Dragon because I failed to kill Tiger, and that fear made me realize I was going to die, then when you failed to kill Shintara you ordered the pride to kill Jenia, all because that lioness(Goldmoon Kartur doesn't know her name) stopped you from killing Shintara, and now your here after you killed Tiger, her only love," "YOU WERE JEALOUS OF HIM!!!!" Kuna shouted "Yeah I was jealous, I wanted Aura, I felt like I wasn't loved by anyone else other than you. But now I feel that you don't love me anymore, because you've been using me to get to Aura,"
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 1:30 am |
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A silent tear slid down Aura's cheek and fell to the ground. So Tiger really was dead? Aura tried to control her shaking, but found she couldn't. She was no longer shaking with fear, now the shaking was caused by her crying. Aura looked up at Kartur and nodded, she needed to run and she would. All the while, she listened to what Kartur was saying. She had no idea how much she'd hurt him by leaving and becoming mates with another lion who was not her betrothed.
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 4:33 am |
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Kuna growled loudly she hated her son now, she wanted nothing to do with him, "If you won't kill her then I'll kill you and the then her, but I'll only leave you half alive so you can watch her suffer," Kuna took a step forward,
Kartur took a step forward as well, "I will never let you touch her, even though i felt betrayed, I will let her live till the day she dies of age, she will see her cub grow up with this pride, she will grow up when Shintara has her cubs, you will leave, you, me and the others, but if you won't I'm afraid i have..."
"That's right you are afraid, you are afraid Aura won't forgive you at all, that's why you want to go back, your a coward."
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 1:50 pm |
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(intense. O.o")
Nika stopped as she came to the rest of the pride, her body aching from running so fast. "I-I...They're okay." She looked back at Dragon and at the pride "As far as I know, but we should stay here so if they are alive they can find us." Her mind was racing with things they needed, food, shelter, and water. She sniffed once and caught the scent of a stream nearby, east to be exact. Also she caught the scent of a wildabeast herd. "We need a hunting party, a small one, but we need to eat." She nodded to herself, she didn't know why but she felt as if she needed to take charge, but only for this moment. Maybe she could prove herself to the pride, that she was worthy of staying here.
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 6:54 am |
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Goldenmoon nodded "I will help you young one" Goldenmoon does not know Kaneta's name. Where is Shadow i thought he would be here already she thought to herself.
Shadow looked around no one knows how to kill anymore he thought seeing a lion (an unkown lion) from Kuna's pride he stelthly went into the shadows and pounced on him killing him instantly by biteing his neck. "This does not change a thing my neice i am only helping you this time but next time i will kill you" he said as he saw another lion and went in for the kill.
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 6:26 pm |
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Dragon ran up to Shintara and put her on his back and ran as fast as he could to a far a way den but before then, he asked Jenia to follow him and go back, so she knew where they were so she could come back and say whether or not the fight was over with and done. He ran to a very old place. Where Shintara had reunited and he set her down in the den by the watering hole then walked in and closed it off with rocks so they wouldn't know where they were except Jenia. He was breathing heavily now and he lay down beside Shintara with tears stinging his eyes. He was at his weakest point now, emotion wise, and it seemed that he couldn't go on any more because of how bad Shintara was hurt. The love of his life. Ever since they were cubs. They stuck together through it all, and now, now she was on the verge of having their first cubs, and was almost killed in the fight with Kuna. He then spoke to her,"Shinti, I'm so happy you're still alive." He smiled through his tears and nuzzled her. He then examined her stomache, and luckily not a scratch in site. He felt a wave of releife come over him as he knew his offspring was safe.
David ran up to Nika and nuzzled her. She was safe from all the terror and disaster that had happened. He was crying. He didn't know what was becoming of the pride. Almost all of them were dead.
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 11:36 pm |
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Shintara was still in a little shock but still able to talk, still shaking she said, "I thought I was going to die, I was so afraid, I thought I'd never you or anybody else again," tears running down her cheeks, "I've never been so scared in my life Dragon," she put her head to him, "And I thought I might've lost the cubs in me," then a sharp pain corsed through her body, she let out a scream of pain, "Dr...Dragon....AHH!!" another pain, "Dragon I think it's time," she said clenching her teeth, then another contraction,
Jenia was outside the den hearing everything, hearing her mother cry like that, what has happened to her it was horrible, she looked back out, she then began to go to the battle. But she left at the wrong time right when her mother giving birth.
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 5:10 am |
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Aura was still shaking, but looked up at Kartur. "Don't listen to her, I forgive you." She said, her voice just louder than a whisper.
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 10:30 am |
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Kuna just stared evilly at Aura, "She is toying with your emotions Kartur, you listen to her, she will only break your heart again and again, she will never love you, your a killer," she taunted at him, she was just trying to make Kartur attack her, "What are you waiting for Kartur, attack me,"
Kartur just shook his head, "She won't break my heart...because I'm not going to be ear her, because of me she almost got killed," Kartur took a step over Aura close to Kuna, "And I don't care anymore she can love anyone she wants, and she did, the one you killed, was her love,"
Kaneta who had helped her father was panting from exhaustion, "Thanks Goldenmoon, I appreciate your help, my name's Kaneta by the way," she said
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 6:37 pm |
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Dragon got beside her and soothed her as she was giving birth. He was so happy that they weren't hurt during the viscous battle. He smiled as one cub slowly arrived, then, another, and another and another! AN even bigger smile came across his face.
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