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(sorry guys, ill try my best to jump in.)

Nika lightly limped over towards the sound of voices where she saw Katur, his mother, and Jenia. Of course she was not close with many of the pride members, but Jenia was sweet, motherly, loving. She couldnt die. The thought made Nika's eyes sting but she swollowed down the salt water and kissed David before leaping over the rock, her jaws outstreched as she landed Kuna. The young lioness had danced with witches and kissed monsters, she had fought with the best and Kuna was just that, but beyond. Nika braced herself as she covered Kuna's face with her paws, claws sinking in to her face.

(how far into the fight am I aloud to go?)


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(Not to far, we want the others to join in)

Kuna didn't know what hit she opened here eye's looking straight at Nika, she growled, "You are alone, think about you kill me they kill you," she said, "Go ahead, do your worst girl,"

Kartur was stunned, his mother was knocked onto her back and pinned, "Get off of my mother," he said as he circled around Nika, Kartur then lunged at Nika, but before he had a chance he was knocked out of the air by Jenia, she had him pinned,


"Nika get out of here, get the others hurry!!!" she yelled to Nika


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Aura glanced over at Shintara. "Do I really have to leave? What about the others, the ones who are going to be hurt because of me?" She asked. But she soon sighed and picked up Shade by the scruff. She looked over at Tiger. "I know what you're going to do...You're going to fight aren't you?" She muttered.
"Yes. Yes I am." Replied Tiger with a small nod. "I promise I won't die out there." He told her.
"Don't make promises you can't keep.." She whispered, then went to follow Shintara.

ooc: It's alright to kill Tiger. I don't have much more use for him.


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Nika nodded and motioned for David to follow her, she had a plan. Nika took off in teh wrong direction to confuse Kuna and Katur so they wouldn't find them.

(haha, I love how youre so nonchalant about killing him xD && where exactly are they?)


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David saw the look that Nika had given him, and he bolted after her. He then realized, half way through the run, what she was planning to do. He caught up with her and realized that this was the place where he had tripped over the stupid rock and had fallen and gotten hurt. He then got annoyed as he leaped over the rock and landed on all four legs and oppened his eyes for he had closed them bracing himself for the pain that was yet to come to him. He then realized that he was alive and well and not severely injured like the last time he had jumped over the rock. He smiled and gave Nika a look that ment to go in one direction and he would go in the other so the lions would get confused as to which to chase and go the same ways.

Ooc:// Yay!! I did it! I replied w/o wb!!! I'm so happy :D


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David saw the look that Nika had given him, and he bolted after her. He then realized, half way through the run, what she was planning to do. He caught up with her and realized that this was the place where he had tripped over the stupid rock and had fallen and gotten hurt. He then got annoyed as he leaped over the rock and landed on all four legs and oppened his eyes for he had closed them bracing himself for the pain that was yet to come to him. He then realized that he was alive and well and not severely injured like the last time he had jumped over the rock. He smiled and gave Nika a look that ment to go in one direction and he would go in the other so the lions would get confused as to which to chase and go the same ways.

Ooc:// Yay!! I did it! I replied w/o wb!!! I'm so happy :D


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Nika nodded and motioned for David to follow her, she had a plan. Nika took off in teh wrong direction to confuse Kuna and Katur so they wouldn't find them.

(haha, I love how youre so nonchalant about killing him xD && where exactly are they?)


XD I couldn't really care less about Tiger now. If I kept him in the rp, then he would just be a boring character with just the role of 'dad who appears only a few times'. I figured it'd be better if Shade grew up without a dad.


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Jenia looked at Nika going the other way and was shocked she was suppose to warn the pride, then she was kicked by Kartur, and was sprawled on the ground,
"You little whelp how dare you do that to me, you will know your place," Kartur raised his paw and brought it down hitting Jenia,
Jenia let out a scream of pain
Shintara's ears perked up at hearing a faint scream, "Aura you can stay but I want you to stay here and protect Shade," she then ran out of Aura's den. She knew she would be putting herself and her cubs within her in danger, she ran out and saw Jenia being beaten by Kartur, she bared her teeth in anger and charged Kartur but before she could even get close to Kuna lunged in front of her,
"Shintara nice of you to finally join us, where is Aura?" she asked, "She is not coming nor will she ever join you. Let my daughter go, and take me instead." Kartur had let up his hits to turn and see what his mother was going to do,
"MOM NO!!" Jenia shouted, "DON'T DO IT!!!!"
Shintara looked in Jenia's direction, "Jenia if I don't do anything then who will?" she asked,
Jenia looked away, "I don't know...maybe Huar..."
"DON'T SAY IT!!!!" she shouted earn a bit of a terrified whimper from Jenia, "Jenia I'm sorry I just can't trust him he did things that he shouldn't be proud of, he left for who knows how long, we all thought he was dead,"
Kuna let out a growl she jumped at Shintara and pinned her to the ground, "Kartur leave her worthless daughter alone she is too weak to even move, go and find Aura and kill her," Kartur nodded and then took off, he found Aura's den, he just stood there at the mouth of the cave, and leaned against the wall, "Well looks like I've found you Aura, after our little meeting we had awhile ago, it's been to long, hasn't it," he said as he then began to walk forward, "Now how about we make a little deal, you either cooperate or I kill you personally. Which will you choose?" he asked.


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Tiger glared at Kartur and then roared in his face. "You leave her alone!" He growled.
"Tiger, no..Don't." She whimpered, but he didn't hear her. Aura put a paw around Shade to try and hide her a bit and try and protect her. She spoke louder this time. "My place is here Kartur, can't you see that? Or are you really as stupid as you look? I came here as an outlander spy, true, but they forgave me and Shintara raised me alongside Kaneta, Snowy and Tiger. I am content here, this is my home now. To me, this pride is my true family, not the outlanders. All the outlanders ever did for me was...Well..NOTHING! After my parents' death, which is the fault of the outlanders FYI, I became angry, mean, feared, sometimes even a bit depressed...Something I wasn't meant to be. Here, I can be my true self. And, all this pride has done for me is heaps compaired to the outlanders. This pride took me in, showed me their ways, let me hunt with them, let me talk among them, shared their food, looked after me when I was a cub, trained me how to fight properly, and a lot more. I belong here Kartur, not with the outlanders..." She growled, her voice just barely reaching a whisper at the end of her sentence.
All the while, Tiger still stood protectively in front of Aura.


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Kartur moved back a bit when Tiger yelled at him in his face, "You think I'm going to back down," he then noticed Aura hide something. He then heard what Aura said, "Fine then have it your way, I'll end Tiger's life, then yours and then your precious little daughter!!!!" he then lunged at Tiger pinning him, "I thought you'd be much stronger than this," he laughed wickedly, he stared right into Tiger's eyes, "Any last words you want to make before I end your life in front of your mate and your daughter?" he asked,

Kaneta was watching the the fight between Kartur and Tiger, she knew she could fight Kartur and win but she knew somebody who could, she ran off to to find Dragon, "Dad!!! Daddy!!!" Tiger's in trouble, Kartur is going to kill him."


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Tiger bared his teeth and growled, but knew he couldn't win this fight, Kartur had him pinned to the ground. He said nothing, but made a last attempt to attack Kartur, which failed. He was definately going to lose.
Aura watched with horror. She knew she couldn't fight, and if she left Shade to help Tiger then Shade would be in danger.


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Kartur laughed at Tiger's attempt's Kartur was only hit a couple of time's by Tiger, "I'll admit you are putting up a good fight, but I overpower you, I gave you a chance to say your last words, and this is how you choose to make them, but if you don't want to say anything to your mate, then i guess it is your time to go," Kartur's jaw's inched closer to Tiger's throat his teeth sharp and ready.
Kuna looked at Shintara then back at Jenia, then here eyes rested back onto Shintara, "Well, look's like I have no choice if Kartur fails to bring back Aura I'll kill your daughter," Kuna said,
"You've lost your mind Kuna, all because Aura betrayed you, if you want someone this badly, then you could've picked another spy, not just to go all out and kill the ones that harbored and protected her, if you think for one second that I'll let you do anything to hurt this pride, I'll kill you on the spot, you harm one fur on Jenia, Aura, or her cub, I'll tear you to pieces!!!!" Shintara shouted the last part,
Kuna laughed, "You kill me? don't make me laugh, you could never kill me, you've never killed a lion or a lioness in all your life, We had that battle when I killed your mother, and you didn't fight me to protect her, you didn't do anything...you just let her die, you had your chance when I was fatally wounded, but you just watched as I limped away, standing over your mother all you did was cry like a little cub fresh into the world, wanting to drink their mothers milk. All you did was cry and cry, you did nothing," Kuna taunted
Shintara shook her head, the memories flowing back to her the fight the whole event:
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"Oh don't worry Kodan, my real target is Shangili her mother made us do all her dirty work finind the ones that murdered her mate, i want her daughter dead, i want Shangili dead!" KUna lunged at Shangili, both rolled on the ground roaring and clawing, "You are to old Shangili," Kuna roared,
"I may be old but i am stronger than you are,"
"We shall see," Kuna then stopped them from rolling, she ended up under Shangili, she then placed her back paws on SHangili's stomach and kicked her off,
Shangili wobbled to the edge of pride rock, she coughed to get some air back after being kicked in the stomach,
Kuna got up and laughed evilly, "Keep them at Bay," she told her lionesses to keep Kodan and he others away from her and Shangili, she then attacked again, once again they rolled but down down pride rock, two bodies that seemed mangled lay at the bottom,
Shangili lay on the ground next to the beaten up body of KUna both still alive but badly injured, she got up but fell again, most of her bones broken from the fall, 'I am not dying, not here,' she then began to crawl up pride rock,
Kuna's eyes shot open, she got up wobbling from side to side, she walks up to Shangili and smile's evilly with one eye completely closed, blood dripping down over it do to her head injury, "This is where you die," she said, Kuna rose her paw and began beating Shangili claws extended,
Shintara watched in horror as her mother, her only mother getting killed mercilessly, "Mom!!" she screamed, She stood up and charged through the lionesses that blocked her and Dragon, she swiped and clawed at them, she then got to her mother knocking kuna on her side, Shintara stood over her mother, growling at Kuna, "Get out of the Pride Lands, Now!!!!!!"
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Shintara came back to reality tear's in her eyes, then she bared her teeth, "Shut up."
"You didn't do anything, I keep remembering her screams of pain..."
"Shut up,"
"The blood on the ground,"
"I SAID SHUT UP!!!!!" Shintara charged Kuna pinning her on her back, "I TOLD YOU TO BE QUIET!!!!!" she shouted again, "NEVER US MY MOTHERS NAME!!!!!!"
Kuna not phased by Shintara's shouting, just chuckled, she then kicked Shintara in the stomach, causing Shintara to fall back and collapse on the ground, 'The cubs,' she said to herself frightened that they might be hurt inside her.
Jenia lay on the ground, "Someone help, someone help us," she pleaded,

OOC:// Sorry if this is too long, i was feeling creative. and paused until the other's can reply


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Dragon ran to Aura and Tiger's den and pounced on Kartur knocking him over on his side and pinning him down to the ground, his strongest paw on his throat not choking him too much to the point of dying, but certainly leaving him gasping for breathe. Dragon shook his head and snickered, "When will you learn to leave a pride of lions, obviously out numbering you and your filthy mother, alone?" He started to snarl at the lion, "Well, ANSWER ME!" He pushed down on his throat more.


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Kartur gasped for air, "I will succeed in my goal," he gasped for more air, "It is my response..." he then realized that his rage has blinded him so far, "It was my responsibility," he then pushed with the last of his strength and pushed Dragon off of him, he got to his feet and walked out the cave but then he stopped, and turned to face them, but mainly turned to stare at Aura, "I'm...sorry," he then walked off,
Kuna noticed Kartur walking away, with no blood on him, "Kartur what happened?" she asked angered
"I failed, I'm not going through with this, not anymore."
Shintara still slightly dazed, began to walked away, the pain grew worse and worse, 'No not now, not at this time,' she said to herself, 'I've got to get to Dragon,' she began to walk eve further,
Kuna growled I'll deal with you later Kartur, but first I'm dealing with Shintara she is about to have her cubs, I'm not going to let it happen!!!" Kuna lunged at Shintara, pinning and landed on her back, rolling Shintara onto her back, and then she put a claw to Shintara protruding tummy, laughed evilly her on eye actually seemed like it had an evil flare to it, "Time for you and your cubs to die, you've tortured me and my life for far too long, because of you I've never seen much anymore, I have only one bloody eye because of you, and your wretched family," she then began to slowly move her claw up, not yet make any bodily damage, "I want to see you squirm, and scream like your mother did, you will feel the pain she did, and I would love to her them again,"
Shintara closed her eyes, feeling the claw slowly move up and down from her stomach to her chest, "Help," but it was only a whisper,
Kuna just chuckled, "Yes that's the sound...KEEP GOING!!!!!!" she said,
"Somebody help me," she said only a little louder,
"Hehehehehe, the sound is so amazing, it is music to my ears,"
"SOMEBODY HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!" she screamed at the top of her lugs,


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Goldenmoon heared Shintara scream and ran towards her jumping strate at Kuna knocking him off Shintara "what do you think you are doing" seeing the shape Shintara was in "i hate it when some one attacks another who is pregnent" Goldenmoons voice had become low and menicing and she lunged at Kuna...


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Shintara's eyes opened her breathing heavy, extremely heavily, "Dragon," her voice barely a whisper, "Dragon!" a little louder, 'I can't move, to scared,' tears in her eyes she was shaking with fear, 'I almost died, I wouldn't see Dragon Kaneta, Snowy, Jenia, all my friends and family.'
(Shintara's in shock so that's why she didn't thank Goldmoon,)
Kuna growled, "You meddling lioness," she said, her only eye was trained on Goldmoon, "I am not one to mess with, I will succeed in Killing her and her cubs and Aura and her cub...my son failed at his job and so now I'm ordering my pride to kill her," she points to Shintara, "Precious daughter," she the gives a short roar, her lionesses circling around Jenia, (Who is still a little exhausted from being hit to much by Kartur, the lionesses got closer and closer
Kartur couldn't handle it anymore, he jumped into the middle of the lionesses and stood over Jenia, and roared at the lionesses that were closing in, they stopped suddenly, "Mother, this isn't going the way we planned, you just want revenge on Shintara and Aura, all I wanted was for Aura to love me again, she was the only other cub that understood the way i felt in the world, we were a lot alike, this isn't the way it was suppose to go, I thought we would just come here and Kill Shintara and bring Aura back not kill everyone we see, Shintara's right you have gone blind with power and rage,"
Jenia's eye's closed but then opened as she heard a fierce roar above her, it was Kartur? 'What was he doing?' Jenia asked herself, her eyes still widened.
Kuna growled louder, "Once a plan always fails you go to plan B, kill everything in your path, if Plan B doesn't work go to Plan C, then you run but Plan B is working so far, and her mother is the reason why I'm like this," she points to Shintara again, "I will not stop until she and Aura are dead, and out of my life, they will always be in my life until their gone," she growled,

(Oh yeah and for some of you who don't know something about Kuna, she has only one eye, she got it from a fight from Shangili, Shintara's deceased mother)


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