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All of Nome was outside. There was tons of activity, because today, the dogs of Nome will finally return from the Iditarod. A shot was sounded, and everyone looked up desperate to catch a glympse of the race. Balto and his team were running toward the mountain crevise. Balto was excited to be in the lead. But just as he slowd down, he caught a very scary scent. Roxy. And if he smelled Roxy that meant Steele was close."Easy Balto!" The musher shouted." Balto didn't obey. In fact he tried to run faster, but his team was tired, and wouldn't keep up. "Catch him Steele!" Balto heard Roxy shout out. She was tired also, but wouldn't dare slack and let a hybrid win a race against her mate. Steele knew something was wrong, he saw that Roxy was trying to hard, and was wearing herself out. Steele and Balto were now neck and neck. Balto was shocked at how fast they caugth him. "Balto, slow down! If you don't, Steele's gonna trip us!" Kaltag knew from expierience, he'd seen Steele throw a stride before. Steele kicked up his pace, and so did Roxy, but now Nerra was slacking, and Roxy was furious."Nerra move your slow ***!" Roxy yelled at her." I can't go any faster!" she cried. Nerra, 2 days before had been with Kaltag, and ever since she had been slacking. By now,Steele was a sled ahead of Balto,having gone through the mountain first, and was still increasing distance. Balto's team was slowing."Come on guys!" he shouted. He tried to go faster, but he was to tired himself. He wasn't used to running this way, and in the end, it cost him the race, he was 2nd and Steele had been long ahead of him.

Jenna walked over, and she tried to comfort him. Then Roxy and Meca showed up. "Get a look at the racing wonder now!" Meca said. Roxy walked right up to his face"Balto, did you REALLY think you could beat trained purebreds?" "Roxy get out of his face." Jenna said nervously."this doesn't concern you Jenna." Roxy spat...

i'll finish it later.

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hey! it's updated

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thanks, I will try to work on that ok?

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That's a little way off, were just getting to the height of the story!

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HEY! why do I have to remind you, READ IT!

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still waiting....

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oh, I'm not, I just like to do this when I think... I'm trying to figure out what to write next, but I don't even know why I made that post, you know?

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Sorry I took a small leave from the this and the forums. I love this story! Nice! Go! but if the read it's are getting sort of annoying sorry to say, but I can't wait to hear more! :D

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The new part will be up tommorow!

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Why did you say that, time suddenly slows down when they say that! lol

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I know, sorry, Iv'e been sick, but I'll do the new part today!

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Wel due to some issues on the board, everyone is going to have to wait a while longer, I have to alter some of the MOST important parts of the story because of the new rules.

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Yep the new rules are like that, but they still work. I'm just going to have my more graphic ones on another site. WAITING......

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New part( you had to wait a long time didn't ya?)

A few weeks after the Iditarod race...

Jenna was walking over to Roxy's home. She was nervous. Recently, she had noticed that Roxy and her teammate Meca, another pregnant female, had not only been keeping thier scent around thier house , but also fighting with Nerra, another teammate that spent far too much time with Kaltag, Nerra was carrying his pups, and not they nor Nerra's brother Ronnie approved. Ronnie had attacked Nerra, and they were in a huge fight, that Jenna knew may have cost Nerra all of her unborn pups' lives. Jenna knew that she had to tell Roxy about her pups now, even if it caused a fight, which is why she didn't wan't to upset her sister by bringing Balto. If she didn't tell her soon, Roxy may try to kill her pups, and there wouldn't be a thing she could do. Roxy was raised by thier mother, and had been taught to dominate her Jenna. So she would have to approach her sister with care.

"Ok, this is it. Oh my god please let her understand. Maybe she won't try to fight, she been pregnant for almost a month now." Jenna walked slowly up to the porch and went through the dog door. "Just my luck, her owners aren't here in case she tries to fight with me." Jenna said with dissapointment. "Jenna, I've been waiting for you." Jenna startled and turned to see her sister, with a very scary look that used to bring Jenna to faint. Roxy walked, without hesitation, around Jenna who was watching her like a hawk. "His scent is on you. I hate it. You should have been bleached before you came here." Roxy said with carcasm, but holding the intensity in the room. Jenna sighed, "Roxy, I have to tell you something." Jenna said nervously. "I bet you do." she spat. "Roxy...I-I'm having Balto's pups. I knew what was going to happen if I didn't tell you, so I am, but I want you accept it. I-I don't want you hurting them." Jenna was shaking now. She had been as submissive as she could. Her tail was tucked, her ears were back and her head was down, but Roxy wasn't going to relent, and she new it. Roxy stood right in front of Jenna. "He put these ideas into your head, you little traderous RAT!" Roxy attacked Jenna without warning. Her fangs beared, she was biting and tearing at Jenna's back legs and her stomach. Jenna screamed and bit Roxy on her shoulder. Jenna tried to bite at Roxy's neck, but couldn't grip past her collar. Roxy dragged Jenna running and crushed her into the wall. Jenna shrieked in agony. Her sister bit into her lower stomach, making Jenna cry out afraid to move at risk of tearing her stomach open. Roxy let go of her, having to come up for air from having Jenna pressed into her nose. Jenna then bit her front leg. A big mistake. Roxy put her teeth to work on Jenna's throat, pinning her to the ground. Jenna shreiked and had tears running down her face. But before Roxy could kill her sister...

HA! I'm not telling yet, and man are you gonna be shocked!

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