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OUTRAGE

Don't try to put me in a cage or i'll have an outrage not even being able to turn the page on the book i'm reading, i'll make you start bleeding no time for Feeding not even 1 second to start breathing, i'll be leaving this cage couse

C) you put in an outrage because you put me in a d**n animal cage where there is no escape because when my anger level from 1 inch to 153 i feel like going on a killing spree

I can't see my eyes are blerd with tears of pain and half from going insain i wish i could be normal and plain like everyone els how i wish i could get rid of this pain i wish i could calm down lower myself to the ground and crowl aeound listening to the sound of shots be fired new emplyes being higherd to take me out to put me out of all this *f*n missery it's not my foult i come out of the dark with alot of cureositty theres one person other then me with alot of generositty the only one with a chance of helping me couse

C)you put me in an outrage because you put me in a dam animal cage where there is no escape because when my anger level goes from 1 to 153 i feel like going on a killing spree.

The one whos is like me the one with alot of senserotty the one that helped me see the truth that was right in front of me thanks for your jenorositty thers a good possibility that we can become friends a bond that will never bend no time to pretend because this is not tne end couse

C)you put me in an outrage because you put me in a *f*n animal cage where there is no escape because when my anger level goes from 1 to 153 i feel like going on a killing spree.

Thanks for helping me see the true reality that was right in front of me.

ps There are alot of spelling erorrs in this song because i am dead tired studying all night and most of the afternoon for exams so don't mind all the spelling erorrs.


By Silver Wolf.

Hmm, very nice Silver wolf...

How does it feel? Tell me.

How does it feel? How does it feel? How does it feel to be so real? What is it like? When everythings alright...When everythings...alright...When you wake up to a beautiful sunrise shineing through your bright pink blinds. When you go to bed feeling fine...And you can't hear the sirens blaring over your screaming...Cause you've never been mad enough to scream...to scream...You've never fallen down on your knees...Sobbing and lying in all your self-pitty...I can tell you one thing-Your not like me! You don't scream, you don't sob, you don't ly in your self-pitty. You never cry, never cry, and your not afraid to die! How do you do it? How do you do it? How do you always feel-always feel alright! How do you stand up in the light? How do you feel-(oh!) How do you feel, so-real? Tell me...

**** that's good for me words can't discribe it but it's good but for now I have no songs that a first I think

I'm gonna try to write something...This is just random... With no name...

What have you done? What have we done? Tell me what has this become? Is it a dream? 'Cause that's how it seems...to be to me. Nothing is real in this world. Not a single thing is wrong. Is this where I belong? Before when I was living in the cold, the truth was never revealed or told. And now what have I done? Where is my soul? Truth be told, I sold my soul.

What have we done? Nothing is wrong...Is this a dream? Or is it just where I, belong? Before the world was cold and the truth was never told. What does this new world behold, for me? I guess I will just wait and see.


Eh...not really like this song...ah well...

It's good Blackwolf! But it sounds more like a poem then a song to me..no offence lol

None taken. ^,^ I was thinking the same thing... Just a lil' too long to be a poem.

haha yeah lol...You should become a poet! lol

Thankies. ^,^ I write poetry, but I is just a beginner. I need lots and lots and lots of practice...'Cause my words don't flow write.

Dudeness, those songs rock hybrid! Do you practice writing 'em?

here is another one.

none of the people know who I am for they never... seen me before but they do now for they seen me just last night at a party.

no one talked to me not even when when I talked to them they only egnored me all throught the night at the last minut I puled out my guitar and started to rock out and now they know me.

I'v been on the raod and it's been rauph but I take as it is at a concert singing the same old song( you will never catch me to night never) they always ask for more but are never saticfide.

So here is my story it's not a lie like I'v seen in my past all the days all the nights life is hard so take it head on! all together not just one person everbody has to help.


back in my home town my friend was geting picked on so I steped in to help her in her needs they never step of they never know how so i have to teach them so i did now everythings fine and good and normal thats of my story.



some of the parts run again

the song sucks but o well.

I also like "Holding Out For A Hero"
Listen to GreyKitty's music video.

http://www.zippyvideos.com/365317366325 ... *greykitty

This one is quite cool... I wrote my own 95% ORIGINAL verison for this one titled "Take Away My Pain" for my band witch I am going to post below!

ENJOY!

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( 15."Take Away My Pain" )

( Visions By: Evo-X )
( Dreams By: Evo-X )
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Take It
Just Take It
Just Take It
Just Take It

Take Away my pain
Take Away My Pain

Whenever You Go!!

Please End The Storm
This Storm From Hell
I've Lost Everything
That Has Ever Meant
Anything To Me

You Lie
So Many Cold Lies
Have Taken You
Far Away From My Redemption!


Now The Truth...
The Truth Has Been Burried
Deep Within This cold World

Tell me
what's This Life Worth?
I Feel I'm In Danger
Of Going Under
And Now There's Nothing
Here To See

There's Nothing
Nothing
Nothing
Nothing

Now Just a Lost Cause
Battered And Bruised
Scarred And Worthless
Lost and Useless
Weathered and Broken
Now I'm The Monster You've Created

Just Take It Away
Just Take It Away
Take It Away
Take Away My Pain

Just Please
Just Please
End This Constant Torment
I Can't Take It Anymore
And Now I Think
The Last Bit Of Innocennce
Has Faded Into The Deep Red Skies

Now You Just Try
To Pull Me Under

And Take It Away
Just Take It Away
Just Take It Away
Just Take It Away

Take Away my Pain
Take Away My Pain

Whenever You Go!!!


Take Away This Endless Sacrifice!
The Impetious Broken Feelings
That Have Haunted Me To No Return

I've Made Many Mistakes
Along This Deep Dark Path
And I Can't Take The Pressure
so Now In Return
I Guess I Got What I Deserved
My Life Has Been Taken From Me

And So Now
Nothing Remains
But A Savage Memory
Deep Emptyness
And a Constant Void

Now You Just Try
To Pull Me Under

And Take It Away
Just Take It Away
Just Take It Away
Just Take It Away

Take Away My pain
Take Away My Pain

Whenever You Go!!!

EDIT: I left out this interesting little bit for the DT fans I know because I rushed when I intially posted this here...

I would also like to point out the fact that I have included several Dream Theater Song and Lyric references in this song including

Lie
Panic Attack
Inocennce Faded
Just Let Me Breathe
Pull Me Under
Endless Sacrifice
Take Away My Pain
Peruvian Skies
Burning My Soul

and The entire Scenes From A Memory album

WOW!! That was alot better than mine! Looking back at mine, it's easy to see I've made over a million mistakes in it! (that sentence just gave me an idea!) AWSOME! ^.^

(I guess I'll write this in paragraph form since I don't know yet how to make it in the song writing form...)

All of my life, I've made mistake after mistake. Falling, falling out of place. Look at me I have no grace. I am such an insignifigance. I am very unworthy. Well I'm not your slave anymore!! And forever and forever I have been confined in this cage, in this dungeon I have to wait! But now, yes now for my own sake! I escape! I escape! It's been so long it feels like an eternity! That I have been cut off from the outside untill I die in old age. That I've been used as a punching bag, when, you, were, enraged! Now burning embers inside me rage. I seek revenge, and now I have taken my refuge! No longer am I endangered. And every memory brings back pain. And I will never speak, of, you, again!

This fiery ember burning bright, burns with all my rages might! And forever I must fight, back the memories!

Because, Of, You! This ember burns for all of eternity...

"Revenge" By BlackwolfWSP with Phrasing edits by Lowes4803

Song Reformating By Lowes4803

All of my life
I've made mistake after mistake
Falling
falling out of place

Look at me
I have no grace
I am such an insignifigance.
I am very unworthy
Well I'm not your slave anymore....

And Now forever
Forever
Forever
Forever............

I have been confined to this cage
in this dark dungeon I wait
But now for my own sake

I escape
I escape

It's been so long it feels like an eternity!
That I have been cut off from the outside
untill I die in old age
That I've been used as a punching bag

when you were enraged!
Always Burning My Soul
Now embers burn inside me like a raging Wildfire.

( CHORUS X2 )

Because Of You!
This ember burns for all of eternity...
Because Of You
Now I seek revenge
Because Of You!
This ember burns for all of eternity...

Now I seek revenge
and now I have taken my refuge!
No longer In danger
And With every memory brings back pain.

And I will never speak of you again!

Never
Never
Never
And I will never speak of you again!

These fiery embers
burning bright Within
burn with all my might
And forever I must fight
back these dark memories!

Because Of You!
This ember burns for all of eternity...
Because Of You
Now I seek revenge
Because Of You!
This ember burns for all of eternity...


( NOTE and a few encouraging words: I have made a few minor phrasing edits and have aslo added a chorus to bring some life to the song! aslo hope you liked the title I given to it "Revenge"

And with pleasure from one musician to a fellow musician I just would like to say you've been a HUGE inspiration to my group's music and sound.. keep it up dude! )

ENJOY and tell me what you think about the edits! PEACE OUT!

-Adriondack

Thanks so much! I LOVE your phrase editing! You totally fixed it up! ^.^ And I am honored to be somewhat of an inspiration, and I'm actually glad you took my song and edited it. ^.^ Sorry that my songs are always set up pretty cruddy. Plus, the extra words you add in their give me better ideas for words to use each day! Thank you again! ^.^

(And I'm a 'dudette')

i turned away
only to hear you scream
i wanted to return
only to find i was locked out of your heart
my love a vengeance
trapped inside my heart
and all i could do was hear you cry
not a d*** thing i could do
to reverse it all