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Cobaltié · **Posted:** Sat Nov 17, 2007 12:31 pm

Balto_freak wrote:

Haha, I can see that, Cobalt.

Must be the insomnia, but enough useless chitter-chatter, you have work to do XD

Balto_freak · **Joined:** Tue Oct 23, 2007 5:11 pm **Posts:** 369

slayguy86 · **Posted:** Sat Nov 17, 2007 12:42 pm

Balto_freak wrote:

Ah ha!!! So you are interested. LOL!!!!

More interest then any of my fics get :roll:

I dunno why I bother.

Balto_freak · **Joined:** Tue Oct 23, 2007 5:11 pm **Posts:** 369

ShebaDove {wolf} · **Posted:** Sat Nov 17, 2007 3:47 pm

Great Story so far, and its great how you brought old caracters in especially Doc and the trio.
I look forward to the next installment

On suggestion how about writing it more like 'book style' i.e. "leave my son alone wolf boy" said Steele instead of 'play style' i.e.
Steele: leave my son alone wolf-boy

Maybe its just me but I find 'play-style' hard to read.

Sheba

KomodoVistas · **Posted:** Sat Nov 17, 2007 5:16 pm

I like how you put Doc in there. He's sort of a forgotten character.

But I need to see a plot to start developing. All I'm seeing is the Balto and Steele families hating each other and not much deeper than that.

Balto_freak · **Joined:** Tue Oct 23, 2007 5:11 pm **Posts:** 369

Cobaltié · **Posted:** Sat Nov 17, 2007 6:04 pm

Balto_freak wrote:

Ah ha!!! So you are interested. LOL!!!!

Sarcasm?

slayguy86 · **Posted:** Sat Nov 17, 2007 6:47 pm

Cobalt wrote:

Balto_freak wrote:

Ah ha!!! So you are interested. LOL!!!!

Sarcasm?

Nah... you're too direct for that

Jake Razor · **Posted:** Sat Nov 17, 2007 9:31 pm

slayguy86 wrote:

Balto_freak wrote:

Ah ha!!! So you are interested. LOL!!!!

More interest then any of my fics get :roll:

I dunno why I bother.

Patience, my friend. You'll get there eventually. Remember, every writer on this site starts with zero favorites, zero comments, etc. And consider, some of literatures greatest writers were barely recognized at all until after their deaths.

On a note to the author, you should post this on the main site when it's through (or just post it as a serial). Stories on the forums don't get much recognition.

Kelev · **Joined:** Thu Jan 12, 2006 10:13 am **Posts:** 331

I really like the idea of where this is going, but you really ought to change it to a storybook style where it isn't do hard on the eyes. Script style is hard to read, and harder to imagine the scenes as a whole. Still, I like what you're doing so far. :wink:

slayguy86 · **Posted:** Sat Nov 17, 2007 9:42 pm

Dragon Tamer wrote:

slayguy86 wrote:

Balto_freak wrote:

Ah ha!!! So you are interested. LOL!!!!

More interest then any of my fics get :roll:

I dunno why I bother.

Patience, my friend. You'll get there eventually. Remember, every writer on this site starts with zero favorites, zero comments, etc. And consider, some of literatures greatest writers were barely recognized at all until after their deaths.

Thank you

Jake Razor · **Posted:** Sun Nov 18, 2007 6:43 am

Kelev wrote:

I really like the idea of where this is going, but you really ought to change it to a storybook style where it isn't do hard on the eyes. Script style is hard to read, and harder to imagine the scenes as a whole. Still, I like what you're doing so far. :wink:

Same here.

slayguy86 wrote:

Thank you

You're welcome.

Balto_freak · **Joined:** Tue Oct 23, 2007 5:11 pm **Posts:** 369

xXFamous Last WordsXx · **Posted:** Mon Nov 19, 2007 3:59 pm

Balto_freak wrote:

I will probably translate the whole story into a story format once the script format is completed, so don't worry because you're all going to get what you want HAHA!!!!!!

Yeah, a lot of people (as you have probabaly figured out) like the story format a lot better than the script. Basically, because it makes the story easier to read and more interesting, such as: "What?!" said Balto with a suprised expression, etc. Good luck with the writing and I can't wait until the next part!