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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 8:58 pm |
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I have some more XD!
Change
Change My heart made me rearange And I am on the Wings Of Change Which is what happens when you Step into That Range. It hurts my heart It hurts my soul I have been there When thunder roars Thunder is change And change is War.
Okay, this one is called...
Loops
Looping, Looping, Up and Down, Looping, Looping, All around, Looping, Here, Looping, There, Your shoe is Untied, Loop it, At the Loop Fair!
_________________ You must understand why I understand. You understand why the understanding of me is to understand you. And that is because of understanding you. Are you understanding this?
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2011 6:53 pm |
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I wrote this song for a past friend of mine. It's called 'Stranger'. Enjoy!
<Chorus> Why would you leave me here, Enveloped in my fear? How could you walk away, from the memories we made? Why should I take the blame for the stranger you became? Why did you have to change? Why did I let you go away?
<Verse 1> Back in the day, everything was always great. To each other we were open books, read cover-to-cover. We were like bread and butter; a sister, a brother. We stood by each other no matter what it took. We had our own nicknames! We had our own club! Just what tore our friendship up?
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<Verse 2> You see me every day, but never go out of your way to "Hello." or "Hi." or even "Did you do the homework last night?" You seem like you're avoiding me, but what did I do to make you dislike me? Do I know you? No, but you did. Back when we were both good kids. And I thought I knew you just as well, but there was no clear way to tell when we would go our separate ways without even a goodbye wave!
<Verse 3> You know, I still think about you all the time, that's why I'm layin' down this rhyme. But I hope you find out one day who dedicated this song to you. I hope our paths cross once again like before our close ties were slain. If it's goodbye forever, forever don't have to be long. In fact, forever could take just the length of this song. But I'll be strong. You may never know who wrote these words, but I promise if you heard that I'll be waiting, I won't be hating, so please don't be a stranger. I won't be far. In fact, I believe I'm still right near your heart.
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~Fade out~
NOTE: PLEASE DON'T STEAL! I'm planning to put music to this, so I'm trusting you guys to just read, enjoy, and respect my property. Thanks!
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Ahura
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2011 2:17 am |
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Cold Tomb
by Ahura
Sinking farther. The sunlight shimmering like sapphires on the water. The coldness of the abyss. The embrace of solitude. It is here that I have come. The quiet does me some good. But the loneliness. Is a most bitter fruit to swallow. The chains of the past. Still hold sway. Long have I fought them. Like an old illness. It plagues my soul. Justice was never received. While I sink further into darkness and the cold. I cannot help but feel this is my own hell. One from which, I cannot escape.
_________________ "We humans fear the beast within the wolf because we do not understand the beast within ourselves" -Gerald Hausman “For the strength of the Pack is the Wolf, and the strength of the Wolf is the Pack”- Rudyard Kipling
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2011 7:31 am |
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A Thousand White Rose's
My brother of snow, I'm yours of shadows, You played my heart string like a celestial violinist with a bow across silver strings I thought would be forever in rust, that your divinity turned to dust.
My brother forever bound did not screetch acrose, but a hymn from being lost then to being found. Forever we will be bound, In life and in death The memories I will forever cherish, no matter how much it rains acid from crimson skys, those memories will never fall beneath.
They will sore even when the shadows start to pore, your name ingraved in heavens score. The bolted mirror masks that countless lives wore, reflecting to others what they wanted to see, you shattered time and time again, to instead of seeing steel they would see me Setting mine and many souls forever free,
Under the shade of your wingspan spawns flora and a tree with leaves of zircconian, Opening the gates to an eden's dominion, no matter how harsh the storms of opinion you gave more then you got in mine,
For you I lay A thousand white roses, one for you to Rest In Peace, the others for those you set free,
My brother of snow, yours of shadows will always cherish you and your heart, not afriad of dying anymore for I know you will be waiting in heavens meadows.
From your brother of shadows, I give mine of snow
A Thousand White Rose's
(Written a few minutes ago free hand and pure, found out a little over an hour ago that my best friend and brother passed away at 9:10 pm last night.... And this poem is deddicated to him and will be read at his funeral... Will be turning it into a song later on, but if I seem not myself, down or ultimately lost that's why.
Weirdest thing is I woke up last night at that exact time feeling incomplete like a big part of me was missing and lost and didint figure out why till his dcotor told me.)
_________________ Heaven is said to be the most euphoric happyness, but so is love, what if there one in the same? if so then lovers die together in a second heaven^^

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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 11:05 pm |
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====================================== Brave New World (Living Hell) ======================================
Verse 1
From the dawn Of time as we know it The roots embroidered in lunacy From the dawn Of your darkest new day Malice and malignace pave the way Running out of options Where's your hope gone now?
Verse 2
Living out a lie Of contempt and complacence In the unrelenting fear Of a unseen, violent plague Each day, putting on a brave new face Only to be broken again By the bloody checkmate's ace
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In this brave new world We're never free Only slaves are we Never free, never be In this brave new hell There is no right or wrong Only human pawns Slaves in the plans To raise a living hell This brave new world
Verse 3
Deprived and deranged Falling astray under The wrong destructive Corrupting new influence The leaders you believe They all preach a lie Living with this complacence A life of violent decadence
Verse 4
Never a constant thing To react, lashing out At abandoned, naive realism Never to be seen again Worlds apart and miles below Surrendering thought In cold, violent precision This mortal indecision The end of morbid aggression
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In this brave new world We're never free Only slaves are we Never free, never be In this brave new hell There is no right or wrong Only human pawns Slaves in the plans To raise a living hell This brave new world
Verse 5
But still the spiral Winding down as hell Self destructs, killing all Chaotic, narcotic is the fall Living deep in a season of wither Never a chance in hell The prophets knew too well Now suffer your sins But don't cut your losses soon For it will bring our black doom
Verse 6
In the gloom And cryptic malice Of the new world We are intergalactic slaves Frozen somewhere in time This constant living hell Living like a martyr Deep in a black pit of sin
(Chorus x1)
In this brave new world We're never free Only slaves are we Never free, never be In this brave new hell There is no right or wrong Only human pawns Slaves in the plans To raise a living hell This brave new world
Outro x2
To raise a living hell This brave new world To raise a living hell This brave new world
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2011 11:57 am |
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I've come up with a few in the past:
Fantasy
In the middle of fantasy There none of my reality No fights, no bloody wars No cold-blooded bestiality There’s no hate, no pressing worries No risk of a catastrophe And everyone lives cooperatively With a peaceful mentality
In the middle of my fantasy Love comes almost supernaturally And we always turn to each other In a constant state of sanity We’re all loved as we love We didn’t know bestiality And everyone lives together In constant state of harmony
What if My fantasy was real What if Its glory was revealed What if Reality turned around What if My lost fantasy was found
And the world dismisses my fantasy As they all continue irrationally And no one seems to care That it could happen, but actually The glory in my fantasy Could wipe away reality Until nothing of the world remains But our kind hospitality
What if My fantasy was real What if Its glory was revealed What if Reality turned around What if My fantasy was found
And few can know the benefits Of my alternate reality Until they turn away From man’s bestiality What would they do If they knew my mentality Would they decide to agree with me Or dismiss it as insanity Will they support my fantasy Where love comes supernaturally Will they come and join the loving grace That I live in so eternally Will they choose to remain trapped In their aggressive neutrality
What if My fantasy was real What if It’s glory was revealed What if Reality turned around What if My fantasy was found
And I will fight for my fantasy So there is none of my reality I will battle for my fantasy Even if it’s the end of me I will fight for love to come supernaturally I will fight to instill my fantasy On this paralyzed reality I will fight until the end of me For my fantasy
Yesterday
Living yesterday Was like being up all night I wonder what kind of way Could let wrong become all right
Was sitting in my fantasy Then normalcy turned to look at me Rushed back to reality And there I sat in disbelief The darkness washing over me Unstoppable atrocity Wants to get the best of me Try my best no to let it win
The reason I know I fell asleep Was why I’ve still managed to keep My sanity for all this time The reason I know I’m still alive Is simply my will just to survive And ignore the loss of light
Think about my yesterday And wonder what will follow So I’ll try to do my best today And hope for a better tomorrow Think about my disbelief And try to let it burn Try to maintain the best of me Took me far too long to learn
The horror of the world Is like living in a waking nightmare The flag of death unfurled I’m petrified and standing there
Soon enough I remember Seeing your consciousness’s smoldering embers Said you just want to get there Give anything not to suffer I’ll tell you I remember Your touch was so tender I loved you forever Then you left me standing there alone
The reason that I know I loved you Is because forever was never enough for you To give me all your passion and faith The reason I wish you were still alive Is forever would never have been enough time For me to ever stop asking for your grace
Think about my yesterday And wonder what will follow So I’ll try my best today And hope for a better tomorrow Think about my disbelief And try to let it burn Try to maintain the best of me Took me far too long to learn
Seems I’m the only one left Only one not to suffer though death Only one left with good in the world Only one longing for you to hold me Only one wanting a better life Only one willing to save others from strife Only one wishing for your love and grace Only one willing to show them your loving place
I see the false and artificial hands Making the hurting ones think they can stand And I know it’s always the same Always the temporary release from the pain And it makes me want to burn That towering pile of paper strife And I wish they would learn That power’s not the key to life
And I want to do something To pick the hurt ones up But they make me feel like nothing Refuse to show what little love And I wish I had your strength Wish I had your love and grace And I wish I had your faith I long for you to give me faith
I long for you to walk to me Just to hear you talk to me To free me from them mocking me And keep these seas from rocking me I feel the darkness stalking me I feel the blackness mocking me I wait to see you walk to me I long to hear you talk to me
The reason that I still know truth Is that my mind keeps returning to you My memory gets me through this day The reason that I still know love Is that your presence was enough For me to live in this today
Think about my yesterday And wonder what willl follow So I’ll try my best today And hope for a brighter tomorrow Think about my disbelief And try to let it burn Try to maintain the best of me Took me far too long to learn
And still a part of me remembers Seeing your consciousness’s smoldering embers You told me you just want to get there You’d give anything not to suffer And I tell you I remember Your touch was so tender I love you forever Then you left me standing there Alone…
The Break Of Dawn
I stare up at the midnight sky And see a hundred thousand stars Like a hundred thousand Glowing, flaming bullets And you know I won't deny That I've fallen so far But what could I have done To deserve this
I look up ans see a flying comet Lighting up the endless black Like a glimmer of hope In eternal darkness And soon the comet fades and dies And any progress imad is thrown back Back to the beginning Back to blackness
The sliver in the midnight sky Drifts slowly as the night drags on I've been in the dark for far too long And I await the break of dawn
I stare up at the midnight sky And hear the howls of wolves in the night The mournful, graceful sounds Of outsiders And I wish that I was with them At leas they don't know the hate The pitch-black void that Comes from the inside
The sliver in the midnight sky Drifts slowly as the night drags on I've been in the dark for far too long And I await the break of dawn
I remember when the sun was shining Casting its light over the earth But even through this night I'm finding That even now I have some worth And I know the light will soon be blinding As I await the break of dawn
For a second it seems the light is fading Illumination down to an empty void Internally my mind is breaking Internally my feeling's gone All I hope for is just to awaken And still I await the break of dawn
The sliver in the midnight sky Drifts slowly as the night drags on I've been in the dark for far too long And I await the break of dawn When morning breaks this unbridled fear Will be exorcised, will disappear Into itself until it's gone And still I await the break of dawn
Bite Beneath The Surface
Somewhere deep inside me I know there's a monster Waiting just to bite Everything that comes near Every single time I try to find the monster That's when I realize That it's been trying to find me
Every single day I try to run away And still I can't escape The vicious fiend within Just when I've had enough I feel it waking up And I'm immune to love But still it happens again
I tried to let it go Still I can't help but let it show I feel it rising up But too much just can't be enough I shudder, try to hide But still I can't lock it up inside It seems the monster has just one purpose I feel it crawling just beneath the surface
My efforts get me nowhere I feel it taking over I feel the bite inside me I know it's futile fighting
Somewhere deep inside me I know there's a monster Waiting just to bite Everything that comes near Every single time I try to find the monster That's when I realize The monster's finding me
Please, just let me go I just need someone to let me know That I can have freedom from all this insanity Just as long as it doesn't leave me Broken, empty, standing here But still the evil entrances me
I feel it rising up inside I feel it living, never dying I feel the monster gnashing its teeth I feel the painful bite beneath
All I want is freedom Freedom from the monster That stalks from the inside Freedom from the hate that lies inside Now I feel the monster Piercing my boundaries Rising up inside me Cutting through my arteries
I'm bleeding, dying....
All poems (c) Baltorigamist I have been asked several times where I get the inspiraion for my poems. The short answer is that I draw them from what I see of the world around me. These are only a few of the many I have written, and I will post more soon.
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If you don't like something I said, ignore it. If you don't know how to ignore it, feel free to complain and I'll show you how.
If ignorance is bliss, you all are filled with happy souls.
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Ahura
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 4:10 am |
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The silence of a disquieting worry pervades the soul and sets the world askew. All that which was the norm is now awry, for there is no peace here for those who seek the tempting fire of ritual and all those things that stay the same. The feeling can be pushed to the farthest reaches of the psyche but it will always remain like an itch that cannot be scratched. All feel it, and either choose to deny in blissful ignorance or acknowledge the reality that not all is right with the world.
_________________ "We humans fear the beast within the wolf because we do not understand the beast within ourselves" -Gerald Hausman “For the strength of the Pack is the Wolf, and the strength of the Wolf is the Pack”- Rudyard Kipling
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 7:37 am |
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The Florist's Garden
There was once a florist Whose many gardens grew, But he started off this meadow with two--one pink, one blue.
Now, these flowers were not the daisies that You'd find in any store; The grew and spoke and felt like us, Just anchored to the floor.
Pink blossoms, shade of blush, Were kind and sweet and fair, To their each seed and budding plant They provided tender care.
Blue petals, brightest hues, Were strong and brave and just, In their eyes giving to seeds Simply was a must.
Their strengths combined, the pink and blue So complimented one another, Yet apart, they were but lowly halves; Neither was one without the other.
The florist praised the pink and blue For working as a team; Planted their seeds 'round his feet, Filled the garden's every seam.
Beams of sun and drops of rain Coated flowers as they grew. Each and every one was different, Some were pink and others blue.
But each color found another, Each pink and blue a pair, That is, until the weeds moved in And caught some in their snare.
Now, as these weren't your average flowers. These weren't your average weeds. They were jealous of the blossom's beauty, As was shown up trough their deeds.
Who needs the pink? A weed told blue, For you are strong and brave. Must you really heed the pink As though you were a slave?
You're right, the blue plain mumbled, I have no need of her. With that, the weed's repulsive roots Around the blue plant's were.
Now the pink began to tremble At the blue's harsh attitude. Her trust began to wane And the softness left her mood.
Why so glum? Asked a weed the pink. You do not need the blue. You have other pinks around, how much better they would treat you!
You're right, replied the pink plant, I have no need of blue. And the weeds triumphantly Took the pink's roots, too.
With that the tensions spread And the flowers mocked their hues. They started pairing up Pinks to pinks and blues to blues.
And when the florist noticed, How very sad was he That the flowers had no care For what he would have them be.
So he addressed the flowers, Saying, This pairing is not right! A pink with pink or blue with blue would never be complete, But a pink a blue together are sure to find the light!
Some of the flowers listened And found their joy in whole, But others denied, "a pair is a pair!" For weeds their souls had stole.
And so the pairs of pink and blue Were joyful just the same, The florist saw their happiness And knew their souls were tame.
But the halves with other halves That would never be complete Got swallowed the the dirty weeds, True joy to never meet.
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