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YumiGoneMad
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 11:14 am |
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Nika watched as Aura leave ad she turned to SHintara "Its..more complicated than you think." She murmmered, looking up towards the lioness.
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Shiro Grisha
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:14 pm |
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Kartur walked but felt like he was being followed, but who would follow him? who would be brave enough to do so..."Aura," he smiled
SHintara looked at Nika, "Why would it be more complicated?" she asked, "I've been there and done that," she said, "Like I said before, I trusted Aura and brought her into my family, my old friend Sasha disagreed with me, by taking her in, but I did anyway, everyone changes, no matter how cold they are," Shintara was going to walk away then turned back to Nika and said, "You and I and everybody else, creates their own life, but I made my choice by taking her in and she made her choice of choosing me as a parent," she then paused, "Where's Aura?" she asked, Shintara had been to busy talking to Nika about Aura being a good lioness, she just has a funny way of showing it.
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YumiGoneMad
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 5:23 pm |
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Nika looked upwards towards the lioness "No, I love Tiger and Aura knows that, so now she is all over him and whenever I walk by her and him she smirks and glares at me, she knows that it hurts, I just don't think she understands how much." She stepped back a little, unsure.
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 8:32 pm |
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Aura stopped in her tracks and glared at the lion infront of her. "Kartur." She growled, her voice dripping with hatred. Ever since Shintara had taken her in, she despised outlanders, especially Kartur. She dug her claws into the dry earth beneath her paws and bared her teeth at him.
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Shiro Grisha
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 1:28 am |
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after my post we will wait for Clouded
Kartur laughed slyily, "Aura, we both know that you are no match for me," KArtur said, stepping toward Aura with his eyes peircing through her. Kartur was born menacing, cruel, and down right minipulative, his smile was of something evil. "ONe step at a time Aura, you are weak you went to someone that was more of a mother to you, and that shows weakness, showing compassion for another pride is weakness, the only compassion you get is from your own pride, and since you betrayed, your pride was the outlands," he said taking another step closer, "If you think they will listen to you, you are wrong beyond belief," he then stood still keeping his peircing gaze upon her, "Tell me Aura, what made you go to that wretch of a lioness you called your mother, when you left us?"
"Nika, I'm telling you I've known TIger and Aura since they were cubs, they were inseperable," Shintara said, "I"m sure that you will find one, and if I"m not mistaken, and blame my age if I'm wrong, Wasn't there another lion around here, that asked you to go out with him?" she asked.
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YumiGoneMad
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 2:45 pm |
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Nika nodded slowly "Yeah, but he moves a little to fast for me." She sagged her shoulder a little bit, thinking the male was just desperate and she was the only lioness left.She looked around and caught sight of David then Tiger, her spine shivered.She looked back down at her paws "I just don't know what to do Shintara." Her bangs covered her eye that a small tear roled down from.
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 6:18 pm |
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David over heard their conversation and walked up to them both hurt, " Nika, I thought you liked me too, and, just for the record, I wasn't desperate. I actually loved you." He sighed and ran off in the other direction brushing his shoulder against hers hard as he started to run off. Tears stung his eyes as the wind blew across his face and he ran into Aura and Kartur and just kept running. He ran so far he lost track of where he was going (The pride lands).
Ooc:// Just thought I'd let you guys in on something, Sasha is David's mother.
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YumiGoneMad
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 7:14 pm |
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Nika snarled at herself "David no...I didn't mean it like that!" She felt her heart clench again as she felt the world around her become blurry.the sky turned over and the sun turned black as all light dissapeared from the world.The white lioness felt a strong impact on her body as she hit the ground, and then everything faded away."No-N-N-No...I can't..do this." She muttered feebly, her paws twitching slightly as she laid there, half uncounsious.
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Shiro Grisha
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 7:54 pm |
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Shintara sighed "My god,"
Jenia came running to her mother, "Mom what's wrong?"
"Nothing just stay with Nika, and if yuour father asks where I am tell him i got a message from the Pride Lands, or just make anything up," she then ran after DAvid, also running passed KArtur and Aura,
Kartur was confused, two lions just ran passed him and didn't even bother to atack, Kartur sat down waiting for Aura to answer his question, Kartur just sat there smiling, a grin of evil, "YOu will tell me why you treat that lioness like a mother,"
Shintara finally caught up with David, "DAvid..." she said in between pants and heavey breathing, "David wait,...I'm sorry for what you heard, but it isn't what you think," Shintara's chest moving up and down while she breathed, "I'm not as young as i used to be," She then slowed her breathing and began to talk, "DAvid, she didn't mean what she said, she loved Tiger, then Aura did to, her and Tiger knew each other quite well it isn't your fault," Shintara stopped and stared Shintara stared into DAvid's eyes they looked familiar to her like someone she met as a cub, "YOur eyes seem familiar to me, they look like their from someone i met a long time ago," she said, trying to figure it out, "Now that i mention it, they seem very familiar," Shintara then walked around David inspecting him, "YOu wouldn't happen to be from The Pride Lands would you? your fur is so clean, like that of all the Pride Lands lions,"
Jenia was trying to wake NIka, "Nika come on wake up, don't do this, it isn't very lady like to lie down in the dirt," she said
Kaneta lay next to her father, cuddling him, she lightly purred, she missed her father so much,
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 5:15 pm |
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For once Aura was at a loss for words, she didn't know why she chose Shintara over Kuna. "I-I don't know..I truely don't know why I chose Shintara over Kuna." She replied, staring at the ground. She felt like she was betraying Shintara because she was talking openly with Kartur, she felt like she was betraying her real mother for not even having the respect to say goodbye one last time, and she knew in her heart she had already betrayed Kuna and didn't need to feel it to realise it immediately. Maybe she had betrayed everyone? And also betrayed their trust. For the next five minutes, Aura felt like a back-stabbing Outsider again, having betrayed all who trusted her.
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 5:34 pm |
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David stopped immediately when he heard Shintara's voice. Obviously you could tell he had been crying for the five minutes which seemed like hours and absorbed what she had told him, " Yes. I am. But, why did it sound like she meant it that way? Look, I wasn't trying to go too fast. If she didn't want to be with me for a while she could've just told me. I don't know why she didn't, but that's just foolish. Now, if you want to meet my mother, come with me." He said walking, " Maybe we could talk more about it along the way." He said sitting with his body turned toward her direction.
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YumiGoneMad
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 5:48 pm |
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(Sorry about Nika's random fainting x) I had writers block and that happened to me in mysleep so I decided to use it ^.^)
Nika felt her ears ringing with a voice of a lioness but she couldn't make it out, her eye lids twitched a little before opening slowly.Finnaly she could manage to hear Jenia.The lioness hissed a little "Well its not my fault, I didn't plan to fall on a rock and become half unconious!" The blow she had received from David when he ran off had pshed her to the ground, making her hit her head a hard rock.She felt a little trickle of warm water, she placed her paw on where it was coming from and looked at it, blood."O-Oh great." She looked around, her head throbbing in pain.
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Shiro Grisha
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 10:50 pm |
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Jenia stood absolutely still, "Well excuse me for caring for your well being," she said,
Shintara smiled, "I would like to meet your mother," she said, "Whom ever rules the lands now should be respected, no matter who it is," she sighed, "It's been awhile since i've been here, so many great and terrible memories," she looked straight ahead, "I've meet good friends, and lost my mother, and when i took in Kaneta, and Aura," she sighed again, "I don't know but sometimes i wish i've never ran away from the Sun Pride, but sometimes I'm happy when i did,"
Kartur laughed, "YOu are lost for words, your parents, Kuna, you pride," he laughed again, his cold voice stinging the air, "Don't worry, if we have to fight i promise, we will go easy on you, we on't want to hurt the little precious lioness that is loved be a filthy lioness like Shintara," he said getting up and walking away
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 3:03 pm |
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Ooc:// Yumi, David just brushed her shoulder. He didn't knock her over :/ Plus, wb  ((
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Post subject: Re: The Lions Within (Re-write upon request) Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 3:11 pm |
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Ooc:// sorry for double posting David smiled in his tears and said, " Yeah, she's a nice lioness. She told me a lot about you actually. That's how I found you guys." He smiled they talked some more and finally got there. He roared and his mother came out. It was Sasha.Sasha squinted her eyes and realized it was David, and Shintara. She ran out to Shintara and stopped and nuzzled her, " It's you! Why are you here? I can't believe it! How are you? I thought you would never come back to see me." She said and coughed. She had gotten old since the last she saw her, " But Shintara, I think, in a couple of weeks, I might die. I'm so sick, I don't know what do do with myself." She said.
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