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Metal Head Pup
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 9:07 pm |
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I only posted a sad one, cuz it came naturally and I had to write it down. Otherwise, I wouldn't have bothered.
Nice poem, by the way. ^^ 'Kay, time for a happy one(well, the main message is, just one line is sad). The best poems are the ones that say the most in the very least, though this one is rather long.
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A friend once gave a note, And as he gave it he said: "Never do open this note, my friend, Unless you are in true need of comfort, Withered and grey. And please, as a token, as a promise, a favor, Keep it with you every day." And so, though I thought it queer, I put it in my pocket, and kept it that day. And one day, old and alone, on my deathbed, I felt as down as ever, I knew my short days wouldn't last, And feeling the note, I gave a go at it, opened it, and slowly I read. 'May a heart as pure and good as this one never falter.'
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 12:35 am |
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An outcast is someone who's always alone They don't bother to check emails or even the phone Because they are aware of their status and can't seem to be phased If they try talking to someone special, people are both shocked and amazed Outcasts cannot make new friends, only hope the old ones stay Unless all their old buddies slowly decide to fade away From the vision of that one lonely soul The one by themself must take the whole toll It happens to few, but most seem to agree It happens to those who were once filled with glee When they seemed to be different, others pushed them down Their happy smiles soon turn to just one frown It's depressing and sad to see them fall When the blame goes to the popular crowd and all Who think they are better because of clothes or looks But in the end they never realize the happy soul they took
Just a poem I decided to write. Yes it does have to do with things I (and my best friend) are dealing with in our personal lives.
_________________ “Some old wounds never truly heal, and bleed again at the slightest word.” - George R.R. Martin Sorta dead user on AS; If you want to reach me, feel free to contact me via one of the other sites I'm on (below). DeviantArt ; Youtube ; FanFiction Hey, what could this be?[/center]
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 1:43 am |
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~Snowflake~ (there is a hidden message in this, hopefully you can see it ;])
I stare out the window Watching the falling snow Each flake as original as the last Slowly but surely it's piling up The once green ground is covered with a shade of white A flake lands on the window "Wow" I say starring at the intricate flake glistening in the light I blink and sure enough it has melted away
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 1:58 pm |
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Dancer of Shdaows
Dancer of shdaows, rider of light, scar your divinity across the night, earn you wings in heavens blight dont let those tears run out of sight, let your heart burn without fright for its time to dance into the night.
Sing your hymn into the arts of sin, slayer of your demonic kin, trail the stars where are is thin we will dance threw thick and thin, angels always win while demons bleed there sins.
Howl of the full moon's children, the rapid beat of the wild, we all dance every once and awhile, let it in and sing it out, dance the night away you fate your hate let it all rest at edens gate.
We dance with the night we pray for dancing light and we dance the judgement away with the Dancer of Shadows.
_________________ Heaven is said to be the most euphoric happyness, but so is love, what if there one in the same? if so then lovers die together in a second heaven^^

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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:54 pm |
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Metal Head Pup wrote: A friend once gave a note, And as he gave it he said: "Never do open this note, my friend, Unless you are in true need of comfort, Withered and grey. And please, as a token, as a promise, a favor, Keep it with you every day." And so, though I thought it queer, I put it in my pocket, and kept it that day. And one day, old and alone, on my deathbed, I felt as down as ever, I knew my short days wouldn't last, And feeling the note, I gave a go at it, opened it, and slowly I read. 'May a heart as pure and good as this one never falter.' <3 That was beautiful. I seriously almost cried. ;_; [I'm afraid I do not have a poem to post at the moment. I just really wanted to comment on that one.]
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 9:14 pm |
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Thank you Nattikat. ^^ I did think it was a rather touching poem, I'm glad to see you took time to notice it. ^^
Anyways, how about another good poem? I get my best work from my friendships with people, here and offline. My motivation, you could say. ---------------------------------------------------------- The world may pass me by so quickly, But without my comrades, they seem to go by too slowly, I need someone to stand by me when trouble's caught me again, I need someone to cry into when times get rough, I need someone to laugh with when I've come up with yet another smart thing to say, I want someone who can understand me, even if they can't relate, I have to have someone to support me in all my decisions, whether they agree or not, I need someone to be loyal, and stick to me like glue, Someone who'll never leave for more than a heartbeat, People say I might be shy when making friends, In reality, I'm looking for the right ones. ------------------------------------------------------------ I started writing this after talking to one of my good friends, Hunter. This goes out to her, and the other friends on here, and not on here, that I can honestly say, have met all my guidelines for a life-long friend. You know who you are. I wish you all the best in everything you do. <3
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:13 pm |
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This poem I've made below goes out to MHP whom I just talked to recently. Out of all the friends I've ever turned to, she's one of the only ones whose ever made my mood actually lift. So this goes out to her and all my other really good friends :]
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Sadness, anger wrapping around me Making it seem like the whole world's against me Lashing out at anyone who speaks Wondering which friends to lose and which are for keeps But out of them all one stands out most The one that stands by me through good and bad The one who cheers me up when alas I was sad It feels good, empowering to have such good friends With them it feels like the world never ends
_________________ “Some old wounds never truly heal, and bleed again at the slightest word.” - George R.R. Martin Sorta dead user on AS; If you want to reach me, feel free to contact me via one of the other sites I'm on (below). DeviantArt ; Youtube ; FanFiction Hey, what could this be?[/center]
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Ecliptica
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 7:12 am |
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He thinks about her day and night, night and day, the smile of hers never fades away,
he lies awake wishing she was there in a paradise across a lake, his heart is hers to take, his heartbeat is hers to always listen to.
He knows with her theres not a single ray the moon cant get threw, his fantasy is hers he loves to cherish, without her his heart will parish.
His heart races when he see's her in lucid colour traces, that not even god could hope to erase, sounds of her laugh and song he knows this love can't be wrong.
Higher his dreams sore above the tallest midnight tower, the howl, the lunar song that can't be devoured, he hears there song threw bladed and ice cold winds, threw the pine the wolf's song is a melody that cry's all will be fine.
He breaths in her life and exhale's his, sealing his fate with a tender kiss knowing this time he won't miss.
So he asks of her as he rips his beating heart out of his chest and grabs her paw and says Wolfess of the night will you be mine under the twilight?
_________________ Heaven is said to be the most euphoric happyness, but so is love, what if there one in the same? if so then lovers die together in a second heaven^^

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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 11:41 am |
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Ok this is called growing lightly.
I made the jungle deep, Ever since my dreamless sleep I've seen the Dusk I've seen the Dawn The feircest Roar Is my littlest Yawn I draw the shades Even in the day I sit there to cry Wishing I'd blow away I don't want to say goodbye And I swore I wouldn't cry There is no need for Suicide I just need to keep my head up Living World Wide
Okay this is another one I made up called The Waterfall.
Your life expanded With every step Just because Through the water you lept I watched you there Day and Night Brave and fearless Without a fright That waterfall makes you Who you are That waterfall Will never be far
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 3:14 pm |
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Gypsey: Those were pretty good! ^^
Here are some I wrote...
Misunderstood
Sigh… why do things have to be so tough? Happiness and progress just isn't enough… I've been doing so well, going so far Now dimming is that shining star I was almost there, about to reach it When all of a sudden, someone comes up and steals it Everything I've worked for is in danger of falling apart All because of one little issue, I'll have to return to the start It stinks but I've realized that it's mostly my luck It turns things around; it makes my life suck I got angry at someone and a friend mistook it I got angrier and angrier, my trust, they'd misused it After acting as if to steal my new friends It seems my old friendships must come to an end After being betrayed I can't think any different They turned against me, my trust flat out killing it It might be just me, but I refuse to back down Cause I've taken an oath to stay standing my ground After venting it all, I remain with one question. Wouldn't you please, learn from my lesson? Friends can be evil, mistrusting, and shallow It's the real ones that you please must follow The ones who'll stand by you no matter what They won't leave you, not for a million bucks They'll never turn on you, they'll never insult They'll never give threats; it's never your fault There won't be any fights, you'll come to see That this is difficult, not easy as it seems But even I must step forward and say Real friends, would never treat you this way I think I've said everything, taught all I could But one word sums this up. And that's misunderstood.
World Full of Strife
Anger and rage are all I ever seem to feel It's not surprising at all The happy moments just seem surreal I wish I could end it All the madness, all the pain But lately this feeling It's making me more insane By the day, by the hour It only gets stronger By the minute by the second It only lasts longer Fights all the time Arguments get worse Give me a sign Forget to coerce But I fear this snarling feeling doesn't want to be freed Im starting to wonder when they planted that seed The one that enraged me more and more The one that caused violence and made me sore It aches, it hurts, and it's getting unbearable It's bad, it's awful, just call it plain terrible No one I know has ever felt this pain They don't have to deal with it every day It's worse than heartbreak, it's hard to forget The choice is decided, made up, and set I must deal with this forever Never live down my regret I can't do this anymore Over and over upset The same question appears As I mull over it all Why me? How come? Whatever started the brawls? It doesn't matter now Cause I'm doomed for life To feel this way Doomed to a world full of strife
The Dark's Descent
The sun is bright The sky is crystal blue But watch out and run Before the darkness grabs you It lurks in this place And stays always hidden It comes out when you wouldn't know The sinner's forbidden Attacking the innocent And murdering the weak Will anyone stop it? The brightness for seek The sun has gone The sky has grayed The people are scared The whole world is strayed The darkness refuses to stay still in the night And just like it, we refuse A human's desperate plight
_________________ “Some old wounds never truly heal, and bleed again at the slightest word.” - George R.R. Martin Sorta dead user on AS; If you want to reach me, feel free to contact me via one of the other sites I'm on (below). DeviantArt ; Youtube ; FanFiction Hey, what could this be?[/center]
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 3:54 pm |
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Thanks, Moki! Your's too!!!!! This one is called The roar we shared
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The roar you hold Is made of gold How can you roar You'd be quiet You swore It's a revolution Just because of that roar It's a revolution Just because it's war This one is called Day and Night Day comes Night goes Day shines Night glows Day is loud Night is silent Day's a shame Night's Triumphant Day stays Night sways Day passes memories While night holds themOkay this is the longest one I ever heard but here goes. It's called A Cool Drink On A Hot Summer's Day You and me we are such friends Friends friends that never end We play today But we don't know we're the day's prey We slink around And laugh our Sounds We sip our drinks As the heat rises below ground A roar is heard a mighty roar No longer do we share Galore We fall and cry We excpect to die If we cannot live Then why not just give Our hearts come down We slam to the ground Our inguries Cannot be heard It was a tragedy What accoured
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 5:38 pm |
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Moki Hunter wrote: Gypsey: Those were pretty good! ^^
Here are some I wrote...
Misunderstood
Sigh… why do things have to be so tough? Happiness and progress just isn't enough… I've been doing so well, going so far Now dimming is that shining star I was almost there, about to reach it When all of a sudden, someone comes up and steals it Everything I've worked for is in danger of falling apart All because of one little issue, I'll have to return to the start It stinks but I've realized that it's mostly my luck It turns things around; it makes my life suck I got angry at someone and a friend mistook it I got angrier and angrier, my trust, they'd misused it After acting as if to steal my new friends It seems my old friendships must come to an end After being betrayed I can't think any different They turned against me, my trust flat out killing it It might be just me, but I refuse to back down Cause I've taken an oath to stay standing my ground After venting it all, I remain with one question. Wouldn't you please, learn from my lesson? Friends can be evil, mistrusting, and shallow It's the real ones that you please must follow The ones who'll stand by you no matter what They won't leave you, not for a million bucks They'll never turn on you, they'll never insult They'll never give threats; it's never your fault There won't be any fights, you'll come to see That this is difficult, not easy as it seems But even I must step forward and say Real friends, would never treat you this way I think I've said everything, taught all I could But one word sums this up. And that's misunderstood.
World Full of Strife
Anger and rage are all I ever seem to feel It's not surprising at all The happy moments just seem surreal I wish I could end it All the madness, all the pain But lately this feeling It's making me more insane By the day, by the hour It only gets stronger By the minute by the second It only lasts longer Fights all the time Arguments get worse Give me a sign Forget to coerce But I fear this snarling feeling doesn't want to be freed Im starting to wonder when they planted that seed The one that enraged me more and more The one that caused violence and made me sore It aches, it hurts, and it's getting unbearable It's bad, it's awful, just call it plain terrible No one I know has ever felt this pain They don't have to deal with it every day It's worse than heartbreak, it's hard to forget The choice is decided, made up, and set I must deal with this forever Never live down my regret I can't do this anymore Over and over upset The same question appears As I mull over it all Why me? How come? Whatever started the brawls? It doesn't matter now Cause I'm doomed for life To feel this way Doomed to a world full of strife
The Dark's Descent
The sun is bright The sky is crystal blue But watch out and run Before the darkness grabs you It lurks in this place And stays always hidden It comes out when you wouldn't know The sinner's forbidden Attacking the innocent And murdering the weak Will anyone stop it? The brightness for seek The sun has gone The sky has grayed The people are scared The whole world is strayed The darkness refuses to stay still in the night And just like it, we refuse A human's desperate plight These are amazing! I loved these so much <33 *is wanting to post one but wondering if it's appropriate for this site, containing blood and all*
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 4:10 pm |
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Okay, here's a new one called Wolf Tracks.
The Wilderness Is scattered Wild The Wilderness Hasn't been heard from in a while There's Anger But Hope But still no one can cope The Snow Frosted Grounds Have the Right to be Cruel But they don't have the Right To Create Pain inside You Those howls Or roars Aren't Nature's Galore No Longer No, Not any more
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