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PostPosted: Fri Aug 13, 2010 9:07 pm 
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I only posted a sad one, cuz it came naturally and I had to write it down. Otherwise, I wouldn't have bothered.

Nice poem, by the way. ^^ 'Kay, time for a happy one(well, the main message is, just one line is sad). The best poems are the ones that say the most in the very least, though this one is rather long.

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A friend once gave a note,
And as he gave it he said:
"Never do open this note, my friend,
Unless you are in true need of comfort,
Withered and grey.
And please, as a token, as a promise, a favor,
Keep it with you every day."
And so, though I thought it queer,
I put it in my pocket, and kept it that day.
And one day, old and alone, on my deathbed,
I felt as down as ever, I knew my short days wouldn't last,
And feeling the note, I gave a go at it, opened it, and slowly I read.
'May a heart as pure and good as this one never falter.'

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 14, 2010 12:35 am 
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An outcast is someone who's always alone
They don't bother to check emails or even the phone
Because they are aware of their status and can't seem to be phased
If they try talking to someone special, people are both shocked and amazed
Outcasts cannot make new friends, only hope the old ones stay
Unless all their old buddies slowly decide to fade away
From the vision of that one lonely soul
The one by themself must take the whole toll
It happens to few, but most seem to agree
It happens to those who were once filled with glee
When they seemed to be different, others pushed them down
Their happy smiles soon turn to just one frown
It's depressing and sad to see them fall
When the blame goes to the popular crowd and all
Who think they are better because of clothes or looks
But in the end they never realize the happy soul they took

Just a poem I decided to write. Yes it does have to do with things I (and my best friend) are dealing with in our personal lives.

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~Snowflake~ (there is a hidden message in this, hopefully you can see it ;])

I stare out the window
Watching the falling snow
Each flake as original as the last
Slowly but surely it's piling up
The once green ground is covered with a shade of white
A flake lands on the window
"Wow" I say starring at the intricate flake glistening in the light
I blink and sure enough it has melted away

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 1:58 pm 
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Dancer of Shdaows


Dancer of shdaows, rider of light, scar your divinity across the night, earn you wings in heavens blight dont let those tears run out of sight, let your heart burn without fright for its time to dance into the night.

Sing your hymn into the arts of sin, slayer of your demonic kin, trail the stars where are is thin we will dance threw thick and thin, angels always win while demons bleed there sins.

Howl of the full moon's children, the rapid beat of the wild, we all dance every once and awhile, let it in and sing it out, dance the night away you fate your hate let it all rest at edens gate.

We dance with the night we pray for dancing light and we dance the judgement away with the Dancer of Shadows.

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Metal Head Pup wrote:
A friend once gave a note,
And as he gave it he said:
"Never do open this note, my friend,
Unless you are in true need of comfort,
Withered and grey.
And please, as a token, as a promise, a favor,
Keep it with you every day."
And so, though I thought it queer,
I put it in my pocket, and kept it that day.
And one day, old and alone, on my deathbed,
I felt as down as ever, I knew my short days wouldn't last,
And feeling the note, I gave a go at it, opened it, and slowly I read.
'May a heart as pure and good as this one never falter.'


<3 That was beautiful. I seriously almost cried. ;_;


[I'm afraid I do not have a poem to post at the moment. I just really wanted to comment on that one.]

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:57 pm 
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As light as air,

As gentle as breeze.

As warm as sun,

As sweet as sap,

As free as a bird.

You are forever there for me.

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Short and random, yes. But I did come up with it on the spot.

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 9:14 pm 
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Thank you Nattikat. ^^ I did think it was a rather touching poem, I'm glad to see you took time to notice it. ^^

Anyways, how about another good poem? I get my best work from my friendships with people, here and offline. My motivation, you could say.
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The world may pass me by so quickly,
But without my comrades, they seem to go by too slowly,
I need someone to stand by me when trouble's caught me again,
I need someone to cry into when times get rough,
I need someone to laugh with when I've come up with yet another smart thing to say,
I want someone who can understand me, even if they can't relate,
I have to have someone to support me in all my decisions, whether they agree or not,
I need someone to be loyal, and stick to me like glue,
Someone who'll never leave for more than a heartbeat,
People say I might be shy when making friends,
In reality, I'm looking for the right ones.
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I started writing this after talking to one of my good friends, Hunter.
This goes out to her, and the other friends on here, and not on here, that I can honestly say, have met all my guidelines for a life-long friend. You know who you are. I wish you all the best in everything you do. <3

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:13 pm 
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This poem I've made below goes out to MHP whom I just talked to recently. Out of all the friends I've ever turned to, she's one of the only ones whose ever made my mood actually lift. So this goes out to her and all my other really good friends :]

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sadness, anger wrapping around me
Making it seem like the whole world's against me
Lashing out at anyone who speaks
Wondering which friends to lose and which are for keeps
But out of them all one stands out most
The one that stands by me through good and bad
The one who cheers me up when alas I was sad
It feels good, empowering to have such good friends
With them it feels like the world never ends

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 7:12 am 
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He thinks about her day and night, night and day, the smile of hers never fades away,

he lies awake wishing she was there in a paradise across a lake, his heart is hers to take, his heartbeat is hers to always listen to.

He knows with her theres not a single ray the moon cant get threw, his fantasy is hers he loves to cherish, without her his heart will parish.

His heart races when he see's her in lucid colour traces, that not even god could hope to erase, sounds of her laugh and song he knows this love can't be wrong.

Higher his dreams sore above the tallest midnight tower, the howl, the lunar song that can't be devoured, he hears there song threw bladed and ice cold winds, threw the pine the wolf's song is a melody that cry's all will be fine.

He breaths in her life and exhale's his, sealing his fate with a tender kiss knowing this time he won't miss.

So he asks of her as he rips his beating heart out of his chest and grabs her paw and says Wolfess of the night will you be mine under the twilight?

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 7:17 am 
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That poem would have been over twice as long but had to shorten it alot because wouldn't allow me to type anymore, but as one of my trademarks which most already know is the title of my poems are always ended by the title, this one being called Under The Twilight? saddly couldn't even put the title thats why I double postedXD

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 11:41 am 
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Ok this is called growing lightly.

I made the jungle deep,
Ever since my dreamless sleep
I've seen the Dusk
I've seen the Dawn
The feircest Roar
Is my littlest Yawn
I draw the shades
Even in the day
I sit there to cry
Wishing I'd blow away
I don't want to say goodbye
And I swore I wouldn't cry
There is no need for Suicide
I just need to keep my head up
Living World Wide


Okay this is another one I made up called The Waterfall.

Your life expanded
With every step
Just because
Through the water you lept
I watched you there
Day and Night
Brave and fearless
Without a fright
That waterfall makes you
Who you are
That waterfall
Will never be far

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 3:14 pm 
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Gypsey: Those were pretty good! ^^

Here are some I wrote...

Misunderstood

Sigh… why do things have to be so tough?
Happiness and progress just isn't enough…
I've been doing so well, going so far
Now dimming is that shining star
I was almost there, about to reach it
When all of a sudden, someone comes up and steals it
Everything I've worked for is in danger of falling apart
All because of one little issue, I'll have to return to the start
It stinks but I've realized that it's mostly my luck
It turns things around; it makes my life suck
I got angry at someone and a friend mistook it
I got angrier and angrier, my trust, they'd misused it
After acting as if to steal my new friends
It seems my old friendships must come to an end
After being betrayed I can't think any different
They turned against me, my trust flat out killing it
It might be just me, but I refuse to back down
Cause I've taken an oath to stay standing my ground
After venting it all, I remain with one question.
Wouldn't you please, learn from my lesson?
Friends can be evil, mistrusting, and shallow
It's the real ones that you please must follow
The ones who'll stand by you no matter what
They won't leave you, not for a million bucks
They'll never turn on you, they'll never insult
They'll never give threats; it's never your fault
There won't be any fights, you'll come to see
That this is difficult, not easy as it seems
But even I must step forward and say
Real friends, would never treat you this way
I think I've said everything, taught all I could
But one word sums this up. And that's misunderstood.


World Full of Strife

Anger and rage are all I ever seem to feel
It's not surprising at all
The happy moments just seem surreal
I wish I could end it
All the madness, all the pain
But lately this feeling
It's making me more insane
By the day, by the hour
It only gets stronger
By the minute by the second
It only lasts longer
Fights all the time
Arguments get worse
Give me a sign
Forget to coerce
But I fear this snarling feeling doesn't want to be freed
Im starting to wonder when they planted that seed
The one that enraged me more and more
The one that caused violence and made me sore
It aches, it hurts, and it's getting unbearable
It's bad, it's awful, just call it plain terrible
No one I know has ever felt this pain
They don't have to deal with it every day
It's worse than heartbreak, it's hard to forget
The choice is decided, made up, and set
I must deal with this forever
Never live down my regret
I can't do this anymore
Over and over upset
The same question appears
As I mull over it all
Why me? How come?
Whatever started the brawls?
It doesn't matter now
Cause I'm doomed for life
To feel this way
Doomed to a world full of strife


The Dark's Descent

The sun is bright
The sky is crystal blue
But watch out and run
Before the darkness grabs you
It lurks in this place
And stays always hidden
It comes out when you wouldn't know
The sinner's forbidden
Attacking the innocent
And murdering the weak
Will anyone stop it?
The brightness for seek
The sun has gone
The sky has grayed
The people are scared
The whole world is strayed
The darkness refuses
to stay still in the night
And just like it, we refuse
A human's desperate plight

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 12, 2010 3:54 pm 
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Thanks, Moki! Your's too!!!!!

This one is called The roar we shared

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This one is called Day and Night

Day comes
Night goes
Day shines
Night glows
Day is loud
Night is silent
Day's a shame
Night's Triumphant
Day stays
Night sways
Day passes memories
While night holds them

Okay this is the longest one I ever heard but here goes. It's called A Cool Drink On A Hot Summer's Day
You and me we are such friends
Friends friends that never end
We play today
But we don't know we're the day's prey
We slink around
And laugh our Sounds
We sip our drinks
As the heat rises below ground
A roar is heard a mighty roar
No longer do we share Galore
We fall and cry
We excpect to die
If we cannot live
Then why not just give
Our hearts come down
We slam to the ground
Our inguries
Cannot be heard
It was a tragedy
What accoured

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 5:38 pm 
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Gypsey: Those were pretty good! ^^

Here are some I wrote...

Misunderstood

Sigh… why do things have to be so tough?
Happiness and progress just isn't enough…
I've been doing so well, going so far
Now dimming is that shining star
I was almost there, about to reach it
When all of a sudden, someone comes up and steals it
Everything I've worked for is in danger of falling apart
All because of one little issue, I'll have to return to the start
It stinks but I've realized that it's mostly my luck
It turns things around; it makes my life suck
I got angry at someone and a friend mistook it
I got angrier and angrier, my trust, they'd misused it
After acting as if to steal my new friends
It seems my old friendships must come to an end
After being betrayed I can't think any different
They turned against me, my trust flat out killing it
It might be just me, but I refuse to back down
Cause I've taken an oath to stay standing my ground
After venting it all, I remain with one question.
Wouldn't you please, learn from my lesson?
Friends can be evil, mistrusting, and shallow
It's the real ones that you please must follow
The ones who'll stand by you no matter what
They won't leave you, not for a million bucks
They'll never turn on you, they'll never insult
They'll never give threats; it's never your fault
There won't be any fights, you'll come to see
That this is difficult, not easy as it seems
But even I must step forward and say
Real friends, would never treat you this way
I think I've said everything, taught all I could
But one word sums this up. And that's misunderstood.


World Full of Strife

Anger and rage are all I ever seem to feel
It's not surprising at all
The happy moments just seem surreal
I wish I could end it
All the madness, all the pain
But lately this feeling
It's making me more insane
By the day, by the hour
It only gets stronger
By the minute by the second
It only lasts longer
Fights all the time
Arguments get worse
Give me a sign
Forget to coerce
But I fear this snarling feeling doesn't want to be freed
Im starting to wonder when they planted that seed
The one that enraged me more and more
The one that caused violence and made me sore
It aches, it hurts, and it's getting unbearable
It's bad, it's awful, just call it plain terrible
No one I know has ever felt this pain
They don't have to deal with it every day
It's worse than heartbreak, it's hard to forget
The choice is decided, made up, and set
I must deal with this forever
Never live down my regret
I can't do this anymore
Over and over upset
The same question appears
As I mull over it all
Why me? How come?
Whatever started the brawls?
It doesn't matter now
Cause I'm doomed for life
To feel this way
Doomed to a world full of strife


The Dark's Descent

The sun is bright
The sky is crystal blue
But watch out and run
Before the darkness grabs you
It lurks in this place
And stays always hidden
It comes out when you wouldn't know
The sinner's forbidden
Attacking the innocent
And murdering the weak
Will anyone stop it?
The brightness for seek
The sun has gone
The sky has grayed
The people are scared
The whole world is strayed
The darkness refuses
to stay still in the night
And just like it, we refuse
A human's desperate plight

These are amazing! I loved these so much <33

*is wanting to post one but wondering if it's appropriate for this site, containing blood and all*

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 4:10 pm 
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Okay, here's a new one called Wolf Tracks.

The Wilderness
Is scattered Wild
The Wilderness
Hasn't been heard from in a while
There's Anger
But Hope
But still no one can cope
The Snow Frosted Grounds
Have the Right to be Cruel
But they don't have the Right
To Create Pain inside You
Those howls
Or roars
Aren't Nature's Galore
No Longer
No, Not any more

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