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PostPosted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 1:45 pm 
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Im The one...

Im The one you turned away from,
I'm The one You still Ignore
I'm The one you should have Talked to
But You only pulled shut the door

Im The one you called a Freak,
I know what you sniggered behind my back
Im The one you always Sneared at
Im the one You always Held back.


No Idea where that one was going =P Iyt was written a couple of years back so eh.

Running

Running from my shame
running from what I have known
Never Looking back.

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I got one that I wrote for Language Arts class...

"The Jiggly Jello that Jumped"

The jiggly Jello felt pumped,
So the jiggly jello jumped.
It fell with a splat
And became very flat
When all over the floor it was dumped.



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All my pain, you take it away
Throw it across the valleys and plains
Never to see it again

But of course I'd go and fetch it back,
someway sometime somehow,
but when it becomes too much for me to bear
I ask you to come and you're here

To take it from me,
To put it on your own back
so that I won't have to carry it, and I thank you for that.


...I just wrote that poem in 26 seconds flat, sitting here at the computer. What do you guys think?

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Here's one I made up randomly.

Dew drops glisten.
Rain falls lightly.
The sun sheds few weak rays,
reaching thr ground only slightly.

The air is still,
No sounds echo,
In the forest.

Below, lava courses.
Through the rough ground.
Deeper down,
Rumbling sounds.

Up high again,
The sun shines,
Lighting clouds,

Flighting birds.
Making things grow and bloom.
On this home of mine.
Planet Earth.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:08 pm 
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so yeah, this A HUGE departure from my usual writing style as you can see, I think you guys will like this one and should we consider recording it as a single? thanks for your input everyone, it really helps!

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9.) The Gates of The Past
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Music By: Sonisphere
Lyrics By: C. Moore
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Verse 1

Into the storms of nothingness
Time wastes away with the winds
What's out beyond the ties binding us
I ask you now what's the value in life
Not knowing if there's something more
Out there beyond the boundless skies
Lies something much to this life
Than we all truely know right now

Bridge

Somewhere out there lies the truth
A rite of passage to find what life really is

(Chorus x1)

So much out there to uncover
Where did we come from
How did we come to be who we are today
Somewhere lies a rite of passage
That could unlock the gates
To our mysterious lost past
A link to the lost frontier of days long gone
And within it a key into the gate of the past

Verse 2

Yet without a real way out there
How will we find our own way
To setttle the mysteries unknown
To trace back to our very beginnings
I know theres something missing
That if we found could bridge the gap
Between history and solve life's mysteries
That to this point noone's ever really known

Bridge

Somewhere out there lies the truth
A rite of passage to find what life really is

Verse 3

Well worth the risk out there
Exploring so many worlds unknown
Thousands of years of mysteries
Buried deep within these lost walls
Civilization once lost within its confines
And the truth may be found within it
With risk comes great rewards sometimes
And this may be the most rewarding of all

(Chorus x2)

So much out there to uncover
Where did we come from
How did we come to be who we are today
Somewhere lies a rite of passage
That could unlock the gates
To our mysterious lost past
A link to the lost frontier of days long gone
And within it a key into the gate of the past

So much out there to uncover
Where did we come from
How did we come to be who we are today
Somewhere lies a rite of passage
That could unlock the gates
To our mysterious lost past
A link to the lost frontier of days long gone
And within it a key into the gate of the past


Somewhere out there lies the truth
A rite of passage to find what life really is (x2)

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 9:16 am 
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Betrayal

The small pinch in my stomach is nothing to care about, but it hurts so much

when people talk of what I might become, it hurts so much

You would think that its nothing to care about, I think so too

Just shrug it off

Dont let the worlds glue to you

Be independent

Dont let anyone get close to you

Cause they'll hurt you badly

It will hurt

As if they stabbed you with the dagger of hate

Right in your heart

I Know how it feels

Shrug it off, my friend

Believe me, its the best thing to do
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 1:38 pm 
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Yesterday

I'm lost in thought
Thinking about it.
It happened years ago,
People think its history but not to me,
Not to me.

It feels like yesterday,
That it happened,
My family was riped apart,
They feel distant and far away.

I was given a choice,
That i dint like.
Chosing between you,
I'll never be put in that position again,
never again.

When i see,
See where i stood,
When i made that final decision,
A flash of you,
Just your face,
Flashes before my eyes.

The memory of what i did,
Leaves a hole in my heart,
Remembering the people ileft behind,
Hurts badly inside.

It feels like yesterday,
That it happened,
My family was riped apart,
They feel so distant and far away.

I was given a choice,
That i dint like.
Chosing between you,
I'll never be put in that position again,
never again.


Random, i know XD next is more random though.

The Key

I have a key around my neck,
On a piece of string,
No one knows why i have it,
But me and me only.

This key is mine,
It's very special,
If I let you handle it,
You must be gentle.

You can't Buy what it opens,
You have to win it,
It isn't a treasure chest,
Or billions of puond in a safe.

This has way more value than that,
For this key leads to something special.
I hold it in side me,
It's always there,
Waiting for that special person to find it.

When the time comes,
I will give it away,
Like you may do with yours if you have one,
hoping that they will treasure this key for life.

When i give it away to him,
When the time is right,
The key will open something special,
For this key, you see,
Is the key to my heart.


Warned you. I know the next one is probably a little late cos the snow already been but still.

Snow

It's snowing,
It's dancing all around,
like little fairys in the air,
Dancing to there song.

They settle on the ground,
Forming a blancket all around,
The blancket says crunch,
as i step on it.

Sledging down a hill,
Is more fun than you'll believe,
Normally only once a year,
But this year every day.

The snow has been falling for days on end,
Making it hard to get to school(yippee)
Cars abandoned in the road,
Probably doesn't help.

People snowed in,
People stack up on food in case it gets worse,
Heating on full blast,
Hot co co in front of the fire.

The fairys still fall,
Over and over,
Dancing and fluttering i the breeze,
What a sight to see.

Its snowing,
Its snowing all around,
Like little fairys in the air,
Dancing to there song.


Well, thats all i have at the moment.


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PostPosted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 1:53 pm 
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Wasn't our snow in January Pook? xD

Anyways...I have one. We did and excersise on Feelings in English Class and this came to me (luckily we didnt have to write for the activity)

The Hole in my heart

The hole in my heart
Is exactly where you left it
Exactly where it was before
and exactly where it will always be

The hole in my heart
Stings more painfully
everytime I see you
every time I think of what you said

So next time please
think of that hole
Of how it grows bigger with every acid word
every snide comment.

Think of how
it slowly kills my spirit.

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 1:52 am 
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To clear any misconceptions up I am NOT I repeat NOT suicidal, this is just how I feel...

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All I want is to be loved
By: Me
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It feels like my clock has stopped ticking
Nothing within me is clicking

It feels like when I fall
Nobody is there to hear my call

I don’t feel despised or hated
I just feel closed and jaded

When the time comes for me to be lowered into the ground
Nobody will come to make a sound

I am nothing more than the average guy
But why won’t somebody want to hear my cry?

I am nothing more than an empty shell
That is wandering aimlessly through the bowels of Hell

When my time begins to wind thin
Will people just throw me into a trash bin?

I am now the man without a face
I will be gone without a trace

Nobody will help me fly
They won’t even care when I die

When people say I should just go
I want to be their friend not a foe

All I want is to see that dove
If I do I know I will have someone to love

But if I die before I wake
Just toss my body into a nearby lake

If I am found dead
Will my story even be read?

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:46 pm 
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Well here's my latest masterpiece guys. I spent all day writing and perfecting this yesterday afternoon after getting a rather huge wave of inspiration from Iron Maiden and I hope you all like!

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The Great Divide
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Music By: Agony of Fate
Lyrics By: C. Moore
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Verse 1

A fine balance
Known worldwide as mortality
Understanding
A fine white line
Between pleasure and pain
Futility of man
Another lost cause for the truth
Our immortal reason
Just another word for justifying
Our misleading ways

(Chorus x1)

The choice
The eternal question
Disturb the balance
The final frontier
Just beyond reach

Follow the blind deceiver
Or follow reality
And blaze an epic path
Straight to holy redemption

Or will you fall away
Deep into the devil's trance
And into an ocean
Of eternal suffering
Like nothing one will ever know

The question
Written on the walls
Of the great divide
Follow the truth and be free
Or follow the deceiver
And suffer for all eternity
Deep within Hell's grasp

It's your decision now
Between heaven and hell
It's your decision now
Which path will you take?
Or will you forsake?

Verse 2

Sometimes when the truth bends
And all sense of equilibrium is lost
We seek to justify our downfalls
And try to understand the reasons why
Trials and heavy tribulations
Blazing a path straight through hell
And out the other side
On a crusade for glory and redemption

Verse 3

In our frantic rush to find true freedom
We forget that balance
Is the keeper of all life
Equilibrium is lost beneath
The surface of future victories
And suddenly we're lost too far
To find a way home from hell now
Guess you should've listened
When the prophets spoke to you
And tried to lead you astray
From this hell you've known so long
Now you're lost and far beyond gone
And buried miles below in regrets


(Chorus x1)

The choice
The eternal question
Disturb the balance
The final frontier
Just beyond reach

Follow the blind deceiver
Or follow reality
And blaze an epic path
Straight to holy redemption

Or will you fall away
Deep into the devil's trance
And into an ocean
Of eternal suffering
Like nothing one will ever know

The question
Written on the walls
Of the great divide
Follow the truth and be free
Or follow the deceiver
And suffer for all eternity
Deep within Hell's grasp

It's your decision now
Between heaven and hell
It's your decision now
Which path will you take?
Or will you forsake?


Verse 4

Lust know's no limits
Hell and consequences
Nonexistent to none
In this deviant fool's world
Of misguided deception
Greed, envy, lustful pride
The only way here
Leading his blinded followers
Down a forsaken path to hell
Enter hell's gates
Never to see daylight again
To suffer for the remainder of time
Life of agony so undivine
The deceived become the *****
And the world's lost forever
Under miles of flaming chaos
And destruction beyond comprehension

Verse 5

Now abused, lost and out in the cold
A illuminscent light before you
To one side, To the other
The flaming gates of hell
Your decision is your fate now
No more second chances
No turning back now
Only the final journey
Through life's final frontier
The end, the great equalizer
The great divide lie ahead now
Now go, find your way once more
Now you must make the eternal choice
Which side will you fight the final war with
Who will you be in the future
Eternity calls just beyond the scepted isle
And your time is running out
Walls of the divide is closing in on you now
So much uncertainty and confusion
Between what's right and a life of conflict
Torn you fight with a passion like none other
Set this ******* world ablaze
And leaving the deceiver wrought
A violent death by the fires of hell
No free, eternally safe and free of regret and pain
You make amends with the giver of life
And become an eternal legend evermore

(Extended Chorus x2)

The choice
The eternal question
Disturb the balance
The final frontier
Just beyond reach

Follow the blind deceiver
Or follow reality
And blaze an epic path
Straight to holy redemption

Or will you fall away
Deep into the devil's trance
And into an ocean
Of eternal suffering
Like nothing one will ever know

(Repeat x3, format below)

The question
Written on the walls
Of the great divide
Follow the truth and be free
Or follow the deceiver
And suffer for all eternity
Deep within Hell's grasp

(Repeat x3)

It's your decision now
Between heaven and hell
It's your decision now
Which path will you take?
Or will you forsake?

The question
Written on the walls
Of the great divide
Follow the truth and be free
Or follow the deceiver
And suffer for all eternity
Deep within Hell's grasp

It's your decision now
Between heaven and hell
It's your decision now
Which path will you take?
Or will you forsake?

The question
Written on the walls
Of the great divide
Follow the truth and be free
Or follow the deceiver
And suffer for all eternity
Deep within Hell's grasp

It's your decision now
Between heaven and hell
It's your decision now
Which path will you take?
Or will you forsake?


The choice
The eternal question
Disturb the balance
The final frontier
Just beyond reach

Follow the blind deceiver
Or follow reality
And blaze an epic path
Straight to holy redemption

Or will you fall away
Deep into the devil's trance
And into an ocean
Of eternal suffering
Like nothing one will ever know

(Repeat x3, format below)

The question
Written on the walls
Of the great divide
Follow the truth and be free
Or follow the deceiver
And suffer for all eternity
Deep within Hell's grasp

(Repeat x3)

It's your decision now
Between heaven and hell
It's your decision now
Which path will you take?
Or will you forsake?

The question
Written on the walls
Of the great divide
Follow the truth and be free
Or follow the deceiver
And suffer for all eternity
Deep within Hell's grasp

It's your decision now
Between heaven and hell
It's your decision now
Which path will you take?
Or will you forsake?

The question
Written on the walls
Of the great divide
Follow the truth and be free
Or follow the deceiver
And suffer for all eternity
Deep within Hell's grasp

It's your decision now
Between heaven and hell
It's your decision now
Which path will you take?
Or will you forsake?

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I have a few, but some are very cheesy I'm afraid xD I'll post one or two though ^^

This was for a contest, was supposed to match with the song and I chose Hero by Enrique Iglesias.

~Hero~

Heroes are heroes and thats how its always been.
But heroes can come in all shapes and sizes, wear a frown, wear a grin.
But what about a hero, that thinks differently?
What about someone else? Someone like me?
I kiss away your pain; I wipe the tears off your face
And all I want in return is your love and your embrace.
I can be your hero, through thick and thin.
I dont care about your looks, I care about whats within.
Although patience can ware, I still stand by your side.
Because I love you, because you are mine.

And this one was to vent some feelings:

~Feel This Way~

I can't bring myself to say
That this will all go away.
These feelings I feel
They just shouldn't be real.
How could people so strong,
Be brought down by losers so wrong?
It just doesn't make sense,
Just doesn't add up.
Life shouldn't be something so tough
As this. These feelings inside
Are awful indeed.
I wish it'd all go away.
Just let me be freed!
But with just loss and regret,
All I have to say..
Is no one, NO ONE,
Should ever have to feel this way....

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~People~

As I sit on a bench and watch people passby
Nobody has the insentive to stop and say hi
They all have their heads held low
Rushing to where they have to go
Thy all look just the same
They are all just people without a name
Some drive cars others ride bikes
While some will yell at you to take a hike
Some people are stopped and talking
While most just keep on walking
Every now and then there is that one nice guy
That will stop by and just say 'hi'

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Trying to fly on broken wings,
Finding amusement in stupid things.

Listening to someone, feeling okay,
Speaking to no one, started to stray.

Listening to music in your warm bed,
Listening now to the voice in your head.

Trying new things you shouldn't do,
Then again, who cares about you?

Rushing through life, it's only your first,
Never gets better, it's still getting worse.

And the days they drag on, you without a care,
If only the world could see the burden and scars,

That you have to carry, and you alone...

So try to fly on broken wings,
Find happiness in landing,

I'll be there to catch you.

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No, I'm not depressed, just a poem. Not my favorite of mine. I guess it's okay for a kinda sad poem. Didn't expect to make it happy, bet ya weren't expecting that either. xD

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Everyone's posting sad poems...I think I'm going to interrupt that. ;)

Hope

A light in the dark, shining from afar.
A mere glimpse, enough to lighten my heart.

People say it's in your head, but I know the truth.
It's in your heart, where it needs to be.

With you everyday, making the steps easier.
It exists all around, in the air, in the trees.

You have to give it a push, then you'll find it there.
Have a wish, have a dream, that's where hope's gotta be.

Keep on trying, never give up.
Quicken your pace, keep it in your heart.


Small, but I just came up with it on the spot.

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