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i have. and its rather short. (no offense)

I know, they get shorter and shorter, but I'll make a long one soon

is the FanFic canceled? or just noone there?

MAJOR SERIOUS UPDATE!

"Yeah, I'm fine." Jenna said desperatly trying to hide her fear and hurt. She hadn't been dominated by her sister like that in years, and it hurt her, because some part of her worshiped the ground her sister walked on. "Jenna, maybe you should tell Doc about this, Roxy could have serioumendously hurt ya." Dixie said(she's always blending words) "Jenna, I can't believe I'm saying this, but I have to agree with Dixie on this one." Sylvie said. "NO, I can't. I won't! Roxy is just tempermantal that's all." "Tempermental, Jenna Roxy just tried to make you a carpet. That's not tempermental, that's BURNING RAGE." Balto said worried. "Will you stop?! Balto you, you just don't understand!" Jenna yelled, again totally out of character. They were all shocked even Jenna."Why am I acting like this?" Jenna said to herself, but loud enough for them to hear. "Your just upset is all, this has been a rough day." Balto said calmly. "Come on let's go home" Balto said.

(Later that Night)

Jenna was restless. For some reason, she had a dream of the past. Of Steele. She couldn't stop thinking of him, being with her sister. " This shouldn't matter to me, why do I care if Steele is going to be the mate of my sister. Oh my god that makes us relatives! But why would he go to my sister? Did he know she was my relative? Did he care? Probably not, since she's so much like him." All these thoughts were running through her head, then she had an idea. "Maybe I should go to the boiler room, before I wake Rosy and her parents." Jenna said. She walked through her dog door, and made her way to the boiler room. But Jenna wasn't the least bit prepared for what she was going to see in there...

Ha, I got ya! next part will be up this week, I'm gonna have to start regulating my updates.

Nice so far get a part up soon please. (if you wait a week b4 any post the topic should not be posted on (see forum rules))

pay attention! I updated it like everyone wanted! silly, just read it.

New Part!

WARNING: THE NEXT SECTION CONTAINS MATURE CONTENT! VIEWER DISCERTION IS ADVISED! DON'T SAY I DIDN'T WARN YOU!

Jenna wasn't the least bit prepared for what she was going to see in there. She saw Roxy, sliding under Steele. Steele was grinning, as Roxy came up under his chest. She started to lick his face. Jenna held her breath, frozen where she was. She watched as Steele chased her around the boiler room. Jenna was shocked. He'd never acted that way, not even with her, and some how, she felt jealousy rising inside her. She watched Steele attempt to grab her sister's waist, but Roxy kept running, forcing him to work at catching her. She finally stoped, and to make sure that she wouldn't run again, Steele quickly and tightly grabed her waist. Roxy started to laugh, but the pain of what he was doing to her turned her laugh into a painful shriek. Several whines and cries, that shook Jenna close to her limit. She was jealous, of something that she rejected, that her sister now happily possesed. And did she realize? She swore she never wanted Steele, and now she was jealuos that her sister Roxy, was mating with him. When Jenna finally snaped back to normal, she saw her sister, had relaxed was grinning in the most seductive way, as Steele slowly let go of her. Roxy gave a small whimper, as if she wanted him still.
Steele lay down on the floor, and smiled as an exuasted Roxy lay down beside him. He then put his paw over her, just as he had that afternoon, and Roxy put her head on his other arm. Jenna wathced the 2 of them fall asleep, both completly satisfied. Jenna stagereg back, and ran of into the night. She ran through the darkness, back to her home. She jumped through the dogdoor, and ran to her bed. She put her head in her paws, and cried herself to sleep.

well that was long, I'll make the next part soon! By the way, if you want to see a pic of Roxy, go to the fanart section on the forums and look for my gallery!

read it!

I read it hours ago, I'm just speechless

ohhh look what you can't have, Jenna. hahaha. Good job, this is nice. I can imagine how she feels. Gosh that's gotta hurt. . . .and make her freakin' mad. lol finish up!

the new part will be up this week. and why are you speechless?

Because after reading that chapter, I just don't know what to say

Next Part!

(4 Days Later)

All of Nome was outside. There was tons of activity, because today, the dogs of Nome will finally return from the Iditarod. A shot was sounded, and everyone looked up desperate to catch a glympse of the race. Balto and his team were running toward the mountain crevise. Balto was excited to be in the lead. But just as he slowd down, he caught a very scary scent. Roxy. And if he smelled Roxy that meant Steele was close."Easy Balto!" The musher shouted." Balto didn't obey. In fact he tried to run faster, but his team was tired, and wouldn't keep up. "Catch him Steele!" Balto heard Roxy shout out. She was tired also, but wouldn't dare slack and let a hybrid win a race against her mate. Steele knew something was wrong, he saw that Roxy was trying to hard, and was wearing herself out. Steele and Balto were now neck and neck. Balto was shocked at how fast they caugth him. "Balto, slow down! If you don't, Steele's gonna trip us!" Kaltag knew from expierience, he'd seen Steele throw a stride before. Steele kicked up his pace, and so did Roxy, but now Nerra was slacking, and Roxy was furious."Nerra move your slow ***!" Roxy yelled at her." I can't go any faster!" she cried. Nerra, 2 days before had been with Kaltag, and ever since she had been slacking. By now,Steele was a sled ahead of Balto,having gone through the mountain first, and was still increasing distance. Balto's team was slowing."Come on guys!" he shouted. He tried to go faster, but he was to tired himself. He wasn't used to running this way, and in the end, it cost him the race, he was 2nd and Steele had been long ahead of him.

Jenna walked over, and she tried to comfort him. Then Roxy and Meca showed up. "Get a look at the racing wonder now!" Meca said. Roxy walked right up to his face"Balto, did you REALLY think you could beat trained purebreds?" "Roxy get out of his face." Jenna said nervously."this doesn't concern you Jenna." Roxy spat...

i'll finish it later.

hey! it's updated

thanks, I will try to work on that ok?