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Lone Wolf_fanwriter
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Post subject: Second Chapter!  Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 12:48 pm |
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Okay, here, at last, is Chapter Two of Balto: Betrayal. I'm sorry it took so long. I know everyone hates waiting, but I've been pretty busy lately.
But enough about my life, on to the story!!
Just a note, I decided to have this story take place after B3. I'll write a story that connects B2 and B3 later. I think my old 'Steele's Revenge' idea would work well. What say you?
Anyway, enjoy and, if you feel like it, tell me what you think. Or, if you find any, bring errors to my attention. This would include gramatical, plot-wise, punctual, and any questions you have.
Enjoy! Balto: A New Life Chapter Six is on the way soon!
To save space on the forums, this fanfic was deleted. But you can read it on the site, in the Fan Fiction section!
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My five latest videos. Enjoy!
The Change - Balto
Two Worlds - Balto and Jenna
Wake Up America - Balto
Long Black Train - Balto
Balto - Go the Distance
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Kodi
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 1:11 pm |
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Another great chapter! I really enjoyed reading it and I can't wait to read more! 
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Ninetalesuk
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 3:26 pm |
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I'm sure we'll see more seeing as summer is coming! More! More! More!
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2005 5:52 pm |
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Wow, it just gets better. Nice writing!
How many books have you written?
They all must be good 
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Night Fox
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 3:24 pm |
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It just keeps getting better and better.
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Ninetalesuk
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 3:59 pm |
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Jenna is in trouble... and when is Balto gonna appear, hmm? In present time, that is...
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Ninetalesuk
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 5:21 pm |
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Heh... first of all, calm down with the suspense...
Second of all, give him time... he is stationed in Japan, ya know...
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Lone Wolf_fanwriter
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 6:09 pm |
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Sorry, I had coffee this morning. But anyway, I'm glad you all like it so far.
By the looks of it, this is going to be another short story. But don't let the length fool you, thus far, my short stories are short, but they pack a punch. Specifically the kind of fist that grabs you by the heartstrings and holds you there! Not daring to think! Not daring to BREATH!!!
Until it lets go at the end. 
Anyway, I won't hold my breath on Rotramel. A marine in Japan can get busy, I guess...
Chapter Four is in the works! If I'm lucky, it'll be done before next Wednesday! It shouldn't be too hard, but it will be heavy. Very, very emotionally heavy.
YAY SUSPENSE!!!
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My five latest videos. Enjoy!
The Change - Balto
Two Worlds - Balto and Jenna
Wake Up America - Balto
Long Black Train - Balto
Balto - Go the Distance
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Rotramel the Writer
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 8:50 pm |
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I'M BACK!
Yes, it has been VERY busy lately.
I got my next installment of the Talkeet trilogy about a 1/4 finished, and hope to get it done soon, maybe this weekend.
I think it's gonna be good.
THAT WAS AWESOME!
That was some of the best writing I've seen from you yet Lonewolf!
Keep it up.
You've got a great set up, and you've got ME wanting more, which is fantastic!
I do have a question for you....
You know how you made "playthings" (lol) out of the captured wolves in "A New Life"?
Would it be okay with you if I used the same idea in my second story?
I don't want to copy you, but I'm having trouble thinking of anything else "bad" they could do to them, (besides hurt them of course)
Reply with your answer so I'll know.
Until then, Keep up the great work, and NEVER, EVER give up!
SEMPER FIDELIS!
- PFC Anthony E. Rotramel, USMC
(Rotramel USMC)
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Lone Wolf_fanwriter
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Post subject: Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 7:42 am |
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Yo, Rotramel, you're back!
I can't wait for the next installment of the Talkeet trilogy. If its anything like the first it should be AWESOME!!!
Second, glad you like Betrayal. It may turn out to be another of my notoriously short stories, but maybe not. You never know. But my chapters are averaging about 3.5 pages in size 13 type. I dunno if that's bad or good.
Lastly, sure, knock yourself out. That's kind of a general thing, but sure, you can use it! 
Chapter Four is in the works! Chapter Six of A New Life should be done soon as well.
Stay creative, fight the boredom, and KEEP WRITING!!!
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My five latest videos. Enjoy!
The Change - Balto
Two Worlds - Balto and Jenna
Wake Up America - Balto
Long Black Train - Balto
Balto - Go the Distance
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