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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire ((ALL WELCOME!!!)) Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 7:53 pm |
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Featherkit crept cautiously through the shadows. She was determined not to miss a minute of the importat "grown cat" stuff, let alone risk Tigerkit brag about how [i]he[/i] knew more about the situation. She had already taken the precaution of rolling in a nearby stream, and later, a pile of dirt, streaking her creamy white fir with mud, "dying" it to a dull brown. She had just reached the base of the rock wall where Bramblestar's den existed, far above her tiny head, when a shadow loomed overhead.
"What are you up to this time, Featherkit?" sighed Sunspots.Featherkit squeaked.
"Uh-umm... n-nothing, nothing at all."
Sunspots struggled to restrain a purr of amusement. "Did Tigerkit force you into a puddle again? You're a wreck!"
"It's my warrior disguise!" the kit snapped, icy blue eyes glowering.
"Featherkit, don't be a mouse-brain! You're more consicuous with mud streaked through your fir. Now come along, time to fix you up before your mother does, and I can't guarentee that her tounge will be more gentle than mine once she discovers what you've been up to."
Featherkit grudgingly allowed herself to be lead away by Sunspots's tail. Sunspots supressed a sigh of relief; this kit was proving to be a pawful, and she wasn't even her mother! Her thoughts wandered guiltily back to Onyx; she had left her and Sunpaw unguarded from whatever dangers Bramblestar suspected awaited the kittypet.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire ((ALL WELCOME!!!)) Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 8:47 pm |
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Sunpaw watched as Onyx dosed...keeping watch while Sunspots went off. She respected the she-cat greatly even though she was so new to her warrior duties. But Sunpaw, being akin to her by name, could sense that great things were in store for her.
Turning back to Onyx she whispered, "I hope you stay..."
Onyx dosed, her scorched pads numbed and stiff from lack of movement. She flexed them slightly and hissed softly until the strange sap Sunpaw used eased her pain. She sighed softly.
During their time, Sunpaw had told her the story on how Firestar came to be... and if she did stay with ThunderClan, what would they name her? Blackkit? It would certainly suit her. Granted her pelt was matted and filthy from the smoke and fire, but she was sure with a good wash she'd look half decent.
Sunpaw snickered, seeing Featherkit. "Got tossed in the mud puddle again, Featherkit?" she teased her gently, knowing to be in good humor.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire ((ALL WELCOME!!!)) Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 9:36 pm |
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"Sure, when hedgehogs fly!" Featherkit retorted on her way back to the nursery, wrinkling her nose. Her skin still smarted from Sunspots's rough tongue against her fur, and some clumps of mud still remained matted into her beautiful white, leopard patterned fur. For a moment, she allowed herself to imagin that she was the great Leopardstar of Riverclan, one of the great leaders that ruled the forest in another age. Her daydream came to an abrupt hault as Tigerkit flattened her into the ground outside the nursery. So much for flying hedgehogs, she groaned to herself.
"Rawr! I am the great Tigerstar! Fear me, pathetic creature!" Tigerkit hissed, unsheathing his claws and raking her flank. Featherkit yowled in pain, but long experience taught her not to fight back against her brother.
"Ouch, Hedgehog-brain!" she spat. "You know it's forbidden to playfight with claws, let alone playfighting as Tigerstar!"
"Oooh! I'm shaking inside my fur! Waddya gonna do about it, mouse-brain?" he taunted.
Featherkit narrowed her eyes and shrugged him off; it wasn't worth squealing about to Sunpaw, let alone her mother, who favored the violent kit, especially when she knew Tigerkit would win any dispute. She curled herself up dejectedly on a fresh bit of moss, idly licking her wound and attempting to free the remaining mud before finally dozing to sleep.
*** Sunspots hurridly raced over to the medicinecat den immediatly after sorting out Featherkit. She relaxed when she discovered that Onyx was dosing and Sunpaw watching her sleeping form intently.
"Tigerkit hasn't tried to torment her again, has he?" she asked, slightly embarrased that she left Sunpaw to sort out the rebellious kit.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire ((ALL WELCOME!!!)) Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 10:06 pm |
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Cloudedfur knew already the gesture Bramblestar had made but didnt return it after all why should he? He was far older than the oldest of the clans elders. And to him Bramblestar was but a kit "Cloudedfur" he gruffed not bothering to show respect.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire ((ALL WELCOME!!!)) Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:53 am |
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Bramblestar was quiet for a moment, he flicked his tail and lead his warriors into the den. Silvertail nudged Cloudedfur also inside and sat beside him, tail kindly brushing against his shoulder.
Bramblestar sat down before the cat. "And what brings you this far into ThunderClan?"
Onyx cracked opn an eye, hearing Tigerkit and her fur bristled. Something about the kit just made her... edgy. Her tail lashed once, seeing Featherkit.
"Sunspots... is Featherkit going to be okay?" she asked, a rare soft side comming out.
Sunpaw had been gathering some herbs together to make sure their stock was set for the next half moon when she and Jayfeather went to the Moonpool. She shivered slightly, excited to meet with StarClan again, wondering what news they'd share with the clans.
It was close to Sun high when a hunting patrol came in, each with a bountiful catch of their own.
Soreltail and Rainpaw carried two mice each, a thrush and a vole; Rosethorn dragged in a rabbit; Witewing with a few plump voles and a starling; and finally Winterstep with a fat looking vole of her own that nearly took up all of her jaw space.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire ((ALL WELCOME!!!)) Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 8:57 am |
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"Hunting in Shadowclan territory" he said calmly "And I left my squirrel back there too" he growled a razor edge to his voice "I'd prefer to go get it then head to my den" the razor edge dulling slightly at the thought of his warm little cave he'd fournd nestled by the lake
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire ((ALL WELCOME!!!)) Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 9:10 am |
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Bramblestar leaned back slightly, flattening his ears. "I'd rather you not, Cloudedfur. ShadowClan will be very hostile now that Russetstar has seen you."
"Why not?" asked Stormfang, hissing. "If he wants to go, fine! Let him! He's no business of ThunderClan!"
Silvertail looked harshly at her brother. "The warrior code says to help any cat in need! Firestar made that clear in his leadership."
Stormfang flattened his ears. "And the warrior code says to chase away any rogues that threaten our clan! Dont talk to me about the warrior code! I know it like the back of my claws. I say the Rogue goes!"
Cloudtail looked sharply at the young blue cat. "Enough. That isnt your decision, Stormfang and you know it."
Bramblestar nodded once to Cloudtail for his support. The cat had been Firestars apprentice before him and when he died they came together on a mutual agreement to put their differences aside, dispite their worst disagreements about birthrights and turned to Jayfeather.
"Jayfeather, what say you?"
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire ((ALL WELCOME!!!)) Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:59 pm |
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"Why? Why wouldn't she be? Oh..." Sunspots's eyes wandered in the direction Onyx indicated, barely in time to catch Featherkit dissapear stiffly into the nursery. Her whiskers twitched. Tigerkit's eyes gleamed maliciously after his sister until he realised he was being watched. He quickly switched to feigning innocence, a skill he had polished to a shine.
Sunspots quickly looked away, eyes blazing. Like Featherkit, she knew that it was useless to consult Dawnfeather, blinded by love for her son as she was. It was situations like these that made Sunspots question her significanse as a warrior; she couldn't even chastise a kit effectively! She longed for the day when Bramblestar apprenticed the kits to whatever mentors they ended up with; maybe then her status as a warrior would carry more weight with an unruley apprentice.
*** Jayfeather remained silent, deeply contemplating the situation, weighing both arguments. Unlike most cats of the living, he couldn't probe Cloudedfur's mind. It wasn't that Cloudedfur raised a barrier; he didn't need to. His mind was simply as slippery and cloaked like that of the most powerful cats in Starclan. Finally, Jayfeather spoke.
"Unless this cat can provide a valid reason why he should stay, chased away from the forest he need be. He is not a cat in need; Cloudedfur can clearly effectively defend and hunt for himself; your warriors paid witness to that. However, he is obviously well aquainted with the laws of the Warriorcode, and chooses to disregard them. Such a cat is dangerous, regardless of whether or not he joins a clan."
Jayfeather fell silent, allowing his words to sink into the still air, an effect that he relished.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire ((ALL WELCOME!!!)) Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 8:49 pm |
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"I DO NOT DISREGARD THE WARRIOR CODE!" he yowled swinging to face Jayfeather "I dont have to follow it due to the fact that you are all but KITS to me "he spat venom replacing the razor "I refuse to be insulted in such a way!" his rage was immeasurable he had since he was a kit had the code beaten in to him "I know the warrior code far better than any of you!"
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire ((ALL WELCOME!!!)) Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 8:58 pm |
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Bramblestar flattened his ears and hissed. "You will not disrespect any of my warriors nor my medicine cat while you are within my camp Cloudedfur! No one means to insult you nor will I tolerate insults from you!
"Silvertail, escort Cloudedfur to a place where he'll be comfortable. I will decide what to do with him after the apprentice cerimony. It's almost sunhigh and I've already promised Dawnfeather to apprentice her kits."
Silvertail dipped her head, touching Cloudedfur with her tail, she lead him out of the leaders den. Bramblestar snapped around his counsel. "Dismissed!"
Immediately, the counsel disbanded, a few muttering amongst themselves, each having an opinion about the newcommer... whether he will stay or go.
Bramblestar didnt like doing this... he just felt that there wasmore to Cloudedfur than met the eye. He sighed softly.
This was a long day. Going out to the fresh kill pile, he picked out a plump vole and stopped, surprised to see Onyx approach him.
Onyx kept a steady pace, her paws swathed in cobwebs to help her walk temporarily. She had made an important decision...
"Bramblestar, I would like to accept your invitation to join ThunderClan... if you see it fit. I have no home to go to and I have no way of surviving. Your clan sounds like a good place to be and I beleive this is where I'm meant to place my paws."
Bramblestar blinked, surprised by how wise the kit sounded. He nodded. "Very well. How old are you really, Onyx?"
"Almost six moons."
"Fair enough. Today, we will have three naming cerimonies! Sunpaw, will she be fit enough to attend?"
Sunpaw, whom had been watching carefully from the medicine den shook her head. "She can get around camp fine but there will be no hard training or patrolling. She can begin with helping around camp. There's no way she's going out with her burnt pads!" She growled out, sounding almost like Jayfeather for a moment.
Bramblestar purred softly, nodding. "Very well." he bounded up the ledge and called out. "Let all cats who are old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath Highledge for a Clan meeting!"
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire ((ALL WELCOME!!!)) Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 10:09 pm |
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Featherkit squealed with excitement, causing her scraped side to ache all the more. A flash of hatred surged through her veins as she thought on how Tigerkit ruined her good looks; he had to have known that their naming ceremony was today before her. Her injured pride suffered all the more when she saw him and Dawnfeather take their places towards the front of where the cats were gathering in a crowd, his pelt gleaming like bronze and amber eyes looking more powerful than ever. Sunspots caught her eye before joining the others.
"Why aren't you ready yet?" the warrior demanded.
"Umm, well... Dawnflower had to spend extra time helping Tigerkit, so-"
Sunspots shook her head. "Nonsense. Hurry,let me finish cleaning your fur. It will be better than nothing, and this is one of the most important events that will happen in your lifetime," she replied, her tone sharper than what she intended.
Sunspots's rough tongue quickly removed the remaining dirt from the kit's pelt and smoothed it until it gleamed almost as brightly as that of Featherkit's brother. To the kit's astonishment, the warrior was so gentle when cleaning around her wound that she barely felt the pull against her matted fur. Within moments Featherkit's fur was smoothed to a shining gause.
"Now, hurry! You don't want to be late!" Sunspots ordered the kit, giving her a headbutt against her rump, sending the kit forward beside her brother.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire ((ALL WELCOME!!!)) Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 7:40 am |
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Sunpaw got up after re-swathing Onyx's paws with fresh cobweb. She found that she could walk well with the medicine and the webbing... so long as she didnt over do it. Hearing Bramblestars commanding yowl herpelt fluffed with excitement.
"This is it! Here, let me help," she began helping wash Onyx down her pelt, wincing at the acrid taste of smoke and ash. Soon, the she-cats pelt was glossy and clean. She sat back, awed slightly... she had the soft pelt of a kittypet, but her eyes... she could see something in them that definately was NOT kittypet.
Onyx got to her paws, dipping her head in a gesture of thanks. Her mind whirled over the past day that had happened. She agreed to become a cat of ThunderClan! Excitement surged into her paws and stepped out into the clearing, watching so many other cats comming out of holes and through the entrance. She blinked...
She saw Brightheart and flinched, seeing the scars. If this she-cat were a warrior, she must've been very powerful. She shook herself and looked around. She saw pairs scooting together, one in particular watching Featherkit and Tigerkit and her excitement plummeted.
Catching Bramblestars eye, she shook off her anxieties and emotions... trying to get into the clan life. This is what she's going to do. This is what she's going to dedicate her life to. She took a breath and stepped out, the clan parting slightly and whispers immediately tearing through the clearing.
Bramblestar flicked his tail and silence fell over the entire clan. Looking up at him. He lifted his head, his voice ringing out with the ancient words.
"By naming apprentices, we show that ThunderClan will survive and remain strong!" Cats dipped their heads in agreement.
Flicking his tail towards Featherkit and Tigerkit and Onyx, he gestured them foreward.
"From this moment on, until he earns his warrior name, this Apprentice shall be known as Tigerpaw."
Tigerpaw lifted his head, amber eyes gleaming with pride.
"Stormfang, you are now ready to take on an apprentice. You will be mentor to Tigerpaw. Stormfang, you have shown yourself to be a warrior of Courage and Discipline. I'm sure you will pass on all you know to Tigerpaw."
Stormfang, surprised at his mentorship so soon, stood proudly, his blue/gray coat gleaming from fresh grooming. He stepped foreward and touched noses with Tigerpaw, eyes shining.
Bramblestar nodded, turning to Featherkit. "From this moment on, until she earns her warrior name, this Apprentice shall be known as Featherpaw. Sunspots, you are now ready to take on an apprentice. You shall be mentor to Featherpaw. Sunspots, you have shown yourself to be a warrior of Bravery and Integrity. I'm sure you will pass on all you know to Featherpaw."
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire ((ALL WELCOME!!!)) Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 4:03 pm |
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Sunspots's eyes snapped open in shock; she was to be a mentor? She had barely started her third month as a warrior! She glanced quizzically at Bramblestar before placing a hesitant paw forward. She heard Clawfoot snicker behind her. THAT was more than enough incentive for Sunspots; her movements became deliberate, almost stubborn, as she moved forward to touch noses with Featherpaw.
Featherpaw's eyes glinted mischieviously as she touched noses with her mentor. I told you so, Sunspots, she thought.
Sunspots's rolled her eyes; she'd never hear the end of it unless she enforced an iron paw.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire ((ALL WELCOME!!!)) Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 4:28 pm |
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Bramblestar nodded and beckoned to Onyx with his tail. The clan had already heard of the kittypet comming to ThunderClan. Most, now clanborn cats, looked with surprise and apprehension. They remembered Cloudtails run in with the Twolegs, nearly giving up his life in teh clan for the soft, easy life of a kittypet. Though their previous leader was a Kittypet, they looked on... not entirely trusting.
"Onyx, I wish to welcome you fully into ThunderClan. Do you wish it to be this way? You realize, that even if your Twolegs survive, there is no putting a paw in two worlds. Ever. Your loyalty must be completely to ThunderClan." His eyes turned hard, that of a calm and collected leader.
Tigerpaw stared scornfully at the kittypet and coughed loudly. "Kittypet. Soft..." he hacked. A few cats looked pointedly at him, but no one joined in his jeers. He quieted, hissing slightly.
Onyx ignored Tigerpaw and stared at Bramblestar. "It is my wish," she announced as formally as she could, her paws tingling slightly.
Bramblestar nodded, a light gleam comming to his eye. He looked up to the sky, the sun passing its highest point. The sun blazed in the sky, almost as if Firestar was present, showing his approval.
He looked out at the clan. "Do any of you have any objection to this?"
Stormfang stared hard at the kittypet. He knew that if kittypets really put their hearts into it like Firestar, they could be highly respected.
"Do you know what you're getting into, kittypet?" he meowed loudest. The crowd around him parted, his tail flicking from his paws as he stood. "do you know the hardship of leafbare? The bloody battles? Are you really willing to give up the comfort and food of kittypet life? Never having to worry about borders or where your food will come from? Are you not afraid of the hardships you'd face if you give up all that's so dear to you?!"
Onyx stared at Stormfang, intimidated. She stood, looking at him... a small collar on her neck, singed from the fire. She lashed her tail out. "I give up all kittypet life. I reject it!" she announced, though her voice shook from staring at the blue-gray cats peircing b lue eyes.
Stormfang got up and stared down at her. He raised his paw and clawed swiftly, accurately at the collar, snapping it.
Bramblestar couldnt've felt prouder. Stormfang was known for being a very hard and gruff warrior. He breathed a sigh of releif as Onyx turned back to him sitting respectfully.
"From this moment, until she earns her warrior name, this Apprentice shall be known as Scorchpaw. I, Bramblestar leader of ThunderClan, will mentor her myself."
A collective start of surprise went throughout the clan as Bramblestar bent and touched noses with Onyx... Scorchpaw.
Scorchpaw couldnt beleive her ears. Her leader was also her mentor?! She lifted up and touched noses with him, just as she saw Featherpaw and Tigerpaw did with their apprentices.
Scorchpaw... it felt right. Like it suited her.
The clan lifted their heads yowling in union. "Featherpaw! Tigerpaw! Scorchpaw!" over and over, several cats comming together to congratulate them... more Featherpaw and Tigerpaw than Scorchpaw, she being a newcommer...a stranger.
She knew she ahd much to prove in such a short time. Scorchpaw only wished she could prove that she can be dependable as Bramblestar had named her to be.
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Post subject: Re: Warriors: Rise of New Fire ((ALL WELCOME!!!)) Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 7:21 pm |
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Cloudedfur watched silently he didnt seem to care when Bramblestar allowed a kittypet an apprentice position after all his mother had been a kittypet and he'd had his life saved several times by kittypets if anything this kittypet was more worthy of the position than that Tigerpaw somthing about that kit made Cloudedfur feel uncomfterble like the kit wouldnt hesitate to kill him on a moments notice
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