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 Post subject: Re: Bloody Battle [Advanced] *Remake*
PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 10:02 pm 
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Ryan now was certain no one wanted him there. Overhearing the conversation between the newborn and Shay, he could tell she was getting irritated with so many of them here. He took it upon himself to get out of the house area, and traveled deeper in the forest. His thirst was getting worse though, and he didn't know how much longer he could handle it. Hopefully, I'll spot a hiker or something... he thought.


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 10:16 am 
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Evelyn raised a eyebrow. The Head Mistress? and urgent? that doesn't sound too good. She had thought that the scent was familiar.....but who could it be? She still couldn't identify the scent. She rushed into the hallway and there stood her old friend, Cale. "Cale!" she exclaimed in surprise. "I thought you were killed by the Lycan"

Lucy heard many new voices and scents from downstairs. She wanted to protest, badly. She then realized that the Newborn the Evelyn had tried to coax before had disappered from the scene. She walked over to the window of her room and opened it. She knew that it was forbidden to leave the house, while they were still in training. But francly, she didn't care at the moment. She heard that Evelyn was busy talking with someone at the door, and paitently waited for them to retreat into the house.

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Cale shook his head and said "Tell her the head mistress told me to come. She'll know what that means."


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:52 pm 
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Cale smiled at Evelyn and said friendly "You shouldn't have brought an underling to address me my friend. I consider it an insult now-a-days. I came to you because I want to stay with you and your coven but I won't be a part of it. The Lycan should have killed me but it didn't. So can I stay with you Evelyn?"


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Name: Jennifer Anna Roberts
Age: 17
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Species: Vampire
Rank: Newborn Vampire
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Personality: She is very quiet and doesn't like to talk much. She likes to keep her head down and her profile on the down low. She doesn't get angry very easily but when you do get her mad, she holds a grudge. She won't admit it, but she'd give her life for her friends.
History: She had a great life. Loads of friends, a great family, the best boy in school. Until one day she was home alone. A vampire attacked her but apparently never finished. Then she turned into one. When she found out, she stayed away from people and her friends and boyfriend got tired of her never answering them.
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Test Post(write a paragraph at least 6-8 sentences): I was in my house, my mom was out of town with my dad on a vacation.Its 2:30 AM and my phone ringed from across the room. *sigh* I get up from my comfy red couch and turn off the tv. "hello?" There was no answer and the number was unknown. I blocked it and set down my phone, returning to my couch, turning on my tv again. Just when the picture on the tv was visible, my house phone rang. wonder whose calling? I get up and trudge over to the house phone on the kitchen table. "hello? Robert residents, Jenny speaking." Just like my mother always taught me to say. No answer. strange.. I decide its enough tv and i turn it off. I go upstairs to my room. Taking in a happy breath, glad to see my checkered walls, and nice colorful bed. I look over to my right, where my window is, and i swear i can see a white face in the window. "woah, i need some sleep." I change into my pajamas and curl up in bed. Then, im awakened with a sharp, painful bite on my neck. I am not able to scream, im almost unconscious, all i can see is a white, scary face. The face of maybe a 40 year old man, but red eyes. Next, it goes black, when i awaken my neck hurts, but im in my bed, unhurt, and no man in sight. "that was a strange dream, felt so real." I sit up, push the covers off myself and go into the bathroom, there, in the mirror, my reflection isnt me. Its somebody else. My face, my hair, but pale, and a scar on the right side of my neck. "what the-" as i lightly touch it, it burns ever so slightly. Then i realize, that wasnt a dream..
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 4:08 am 
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"of course, my friend. Step in" Evelyn stood aside and waited for him to go in before her.

Lucy sat on the window frame and watched as Evelyn let yet another creature into the house.

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In the forest... I'm starving! where are all the humans Out of the corner of her eye she see a boy. Hes maybe 18. She approach him with a smile. "Hi I'm Jenny. I'm sort of lost, mind showing me back to town?" He looked at her and smiled. He pointed behind her "right over there" She smile and took his hand leading him behind the bushes, licking her mouth on the way. "what- why are we-" He never did get to finish his sentence. She attacked him, throwing her hands around his head. She enjoyed every last drop of blood she could suck out of him. He got paler and paler. Then, she notice she coundn't suck anymore. Like drinking from a bottle with no more liquid in it. She threw him on the ground and got up. "thanks for lunch." She throw a branch on top of him to hide his body. She walk around the forest. Just then she saw another person. She approach him, not knowing he was Ryan, the vampire. "Hello i'm Jennifer" She studied him and he has the palest skin shes ever seen on a human boy.


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Ryan was suddenly confronted by another girl. His senses weren't as hightened as a vampire who might've been older than him, so this newborn's scent didn't really come through to him. She passed as a normal human girl. He fought his thirst and said,"Hey, I'm Ryan." Then he proceeded to walk past her, deeper into the forest.


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Cale walked into the house and looked around, studying everything that was inside. He took in a couple of scents, mostly vampire, and asked "How many vampires are under your control? Do you need some help from me to control them?" He turned to face Evelyn, looking right into her beautiful eyes, and said "You are as beautiful as ever Evelyn. Life's been good to you it seems."


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Evelyn beamed at his compliment. "I have three permanent members. But we have some new arrivals" She smiled again and before leading him intot he living room, sat down on one of couch's and asked him to sit "what are the urgent news from the Head Mistress?"

Lucy heard that door close and the unknow one and Evelyn disappear into the house then she landed swiftly on the ground and disappeard into the woods, in the direction that the guy "Ryan" had disappeard. She leaned to the ground and breathed in the scent, feeling powerful outside the house walls.


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Cale smiled and said "I told a lie because I knew the relatively newborn wouldn't let me see you any other way." He lied but he lied so cleverly that even if you knew him you wouldn't have known he lied because the wolf's magic made the lie undetectable. He sniffed the air when he heard a vampire jump down from a window or something and run off. He looked at Evelyn seriously and asked "Do you just let your vampires roam off without supervision? I detect no vampires except you around here. I think they are all in the woods but if they lose control then we could have a problem."


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Evelyn tensed and thought "Who was upstairs........Lucy!"Her disobedience were unacceptable, and rage welled up inside of Evelyn. One of her own, betraying her orders. "No, I do not" The strained anger in her voice was noticeable. "Shay!" She called to her Beta in the kitchen. "Fetch Lucy from the forest, and the other newborn too. If she refuses, you have my permission to do whatever it takes. Whatever it takes" She echoed, so she would truly get the hint.

"It's good to be free" Lucy mumbled slyly. She were grinning uncontrollably, it had been so long sense she felt the strong scent of pine and the fresh smell of outside air.


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Jennifer stayed in her exact position, frozen almost. She was deep in thought.He seemed pale, more pale than i have ever seen. It might have been a coincidence; although if he is one like me, i may be able to make a friend... If not, i kill him She smirked, letting her fangs out and turned around in a quick motion. She waled right behind him then tapped his shoulder, ever so slightly. "Ryan was it? Well, Ryan, do you believe in vampires?" At the mer mention of the word she shriveled a bit, she did not like who or..what she was. Jennifer stood there,silently, waiting for a reply. A no, and she would continue her life, a yes, and she might make a friend, or a victim.


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Ryan sighed and turned around. "Yeah. What's it to you?" He stood there, unsure why this girl was so interested in talking to him. He began to notice she was paler than a usual human, but he didn't think anything of it.


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A smile went across Jennifer's face. "So, if i were to tell you.." She paused, unsure if she should ask. "If i were to tell you that i was a vampire. Would you believe me?" She studied his face trying to determine what he was. He was pale, and he believed. Could it just be a coincidence? Will she have to take another life? She stood there, shifting from foot to foot clicking her tongue, like she always did when she was nervous. Jennifer didn't WANT to take another life, but if she didn't ask, the mystery as to if he was would burn in her head for as log as she lived. She didn't want to look directly in his eyes, she never did, mostly because she didn't want others to look into hers. She looked around, her arms crossed, her mind racing. Somehow, she kept a cool, collective look on her face.


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Ryan put on a quizzical expression and rolled his eyes slightly. "Yeah." He paused, trying to think of something else to say. "We done here? Cause I don't want to waste my entire day thinking about vampires and fairytales." He scoffed. Ryan soon went the opposite direction, rather pleased with himself for making it so believable that he was human. He kicked a few leaves and found a nice tree to lean on. He leaned on it and slid down to the floor. He then just sat and relaxed, flexing his back so that his weight was supported by the tree.


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