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BlackwolfWSP
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 8:12 pm |
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(Another song...with no name...lol)
Stop...(stop...stop...) Stop the pain...Please...quit the rain...The rain of shame...I have no name! Hello! My name is lies...Lies will hide...the truth...The truth has been burried beneath the earth...Tell me...what is my life worth? I feel like I'm nothing...I'm just worth nothing...Stupid and useless...and broken and stupid...Stop...stop...the pain...Please...please...stop the shame...I don't want your pity I don't want any fame! Just please...get rid of my endless pain! The impetious...perpetual...broken feelings...All of my life I have been stealing. And I guess I got what I deserved... My life was stolen from me...Nothing's left of me but broken feelings and emptyness...
Stop...please...please...stop-the-pain!
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Grhaeh Lit
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 8:38 pm |
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XD, the song gives me the impression of gasping for oxygen....
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Grhaeh Lit
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 8:52 pm |
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Depends....do you like breathy songs?
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Grhaeh Lit
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 9:23 pm |
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I like depressing songs also, but the fact is, it is really easy to write depressing emo songs, its harder to think of a song thats happy and not love based XD, try it, its not easy.
BlackwolfWSP wrote: And is there even a such word as breathy? 
 When will learn not to question my grammar....
breath·y [bréthee]
(comparative breath·i·er, superlative breath·i·est)
adjective
1. with sound of breathing: with a discernible sound of breathing accompanying spoken words
2. music lacking good breath control: without proper control of the breath, which creates an uneven or weak vocal or instrumental sound
-breath·i·ly, adverb
-breath·i·ness, noun
Microsoft® Encarta® Reference Library 2005. © 1993-2004 Microsoft Corporation. All rights reserved.
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BlackwolfWSP
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 7:52 am |
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Alright alright!!  And first of all...if you could not hear my song...how could you call it breathy??
Breathier? Breathiest???????
And first of all..it would be a miracle if I could write one happy song...  And I don't exactly like happy songs...But I guess there are some that I like...that are about something I have no clue what they are about...XP If I try to make a happy song...it'll be so terrible you'll die!  And oh yeah...weren't you going to write a song? Hmm???
(and last, what the hell is emo?????!) 
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Spark
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 9:02 am |
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I don't understand why somebody would call that song breathy? It's only text.
Heres another song I wrote.
Our friendship is melting like ice in a warm house. Slowly melting and watering our eyes. Peices are breaking away and melting. They're filling up the land between us with water. We walk away, abandoning each other. We make new friends, forget our old friendship. Only a trace of our friendship remains deep in our hearts.
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Grhaeh Lit
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 11:35 am |
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Grhaeh Lit wrote: XD, the song gives me the impression of gasping for oxygen....
Typical.... Argue with me about my vocabulary, forget the whole point of it, go back and argue with me again.
I said it gave me the impression of Breathy voicing.
I never called it breathy.
1) I tell you it make me think of gasping for air
2) you ask me if its good or bad
3) I switch to a "real" song and desribe "real" songs, no longer talking about text, we are talking about sounds people make when singing.
4) You question my grammar
5) I show you my grammar is valid.
6) Now that you know what it means you think i am calling yor text that..., and misunderstand that I said your song was breathy
7) You complain
8 ) i waste my time telling you i never said your song was breathy.
In short, i said your text reminded me of gasping for air, with all the ..........'s
You text made me "think" of breathy qualities.
Songs you hear "can" have breathy qualities.
Simple.....
Emo is short for "emotional" i think, it means songs where theres lots of i hate myselfs, i am dying, love, etx, evanescense is very emo, and goth XD.
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BlackwolfWSP
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 11:47 am |
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Oh, ok. And I never complained...I simply asked you what emo was, and also, I had read the definition that you posted of breathy, and when I read it and went back to when you said that mysong gave you that impression, I was confused. Because even if you say that it just gave you the impressiong of it being breathy, it really doesn't make much sense to me...But whatever...I still don't see how I complained...Maybe now I am complaining...but I don't care...
Oh yeah, as far as the .....'s, those are just pauses...I have a habit of using them...
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Grhaeh Lit
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 12:00 pm |
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BlackwolfWSP wrote:
No, because some people here are soooo ...... >_> that i'd be yellin gal day if i didn't refrain from it.
Also, i don't really show my art anymore, cause most of the time people ruin my topic.
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BlackwolfWSP
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jan 28, 2006 12:28 pm |
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Sorry...I guess.  But anyways....whatever...it's obviously your choice. And don't think that your the only one that has to restrain themself from exploding on half of the people on this forum...Because it's hard even if it is on a forum...  :hinthint: Obviously I meant me... 
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