Wolflover10, if you struggle to get a paragraph length then just a small tip, try explaining what is around your character and what your characer may be feeling or thinking at that point ;]
Argo: Deep, liquid gold eyes stared from behind, as she watched the wolf form that had taken prey in these lands--something not tolerated lightly. The wolf moved, closer and closer, silence her biggest ally. Argo went to finally emerged as the beast consumed the meager his last lap of water, as she drew to her full hieght. With a cold, wintery tone--something which seemed so out of place in the cool summer enviornment---the Beta was to made her prescence well known only to be stopped by another behind her.
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Good mornin, Jafar" no more than a few steps later an icy breeze rushed past, nipping at her nose; it was strong enough that she had to shut her eyes, and she folded her ears back, trying to press on through the wind. However the gust only intensified, and the wolf turned her head, taking the chill with her shoulder. But just as suddenly as it rushed through the trees, it continued about its way, as if running after Phenex whom disappeared from their sights now. It was clear he had cught our prescence and had cleared off. But, was this a good thing?
Grunt came swiftly from the large laws of Phenex, prescence of the female had come clear to his sences. Anger filled the body of this beast and sure enough the urge from blood come over him. One thing you should never do and that is tracking Phenex down. From studden stillness of the trees around him had only just about stopped him from turning his form to such a low life female, He know who it was and had few incounter before with this Arden beta but the scent of another male hitting his sence... he had not choice but to swiftly move off over the water to clear his scent. Only this would stop then from tracking again.
Dull, marmalade fur rippled surprisingly vibrantly between the ashen trees of Arden. For all the camoflague the other wolves had in the territory, the Alphess and Beta had the unluckiest pick of the lot - dark fur admist a flurry of chrome and black. It was like a photoshopped picture, all it needed was some fancy words and a splattering of blood, and there, there she was, the ***** Alphess of Newfound lands. A scraggly rabbit fell limp from this land, the only thing Newfound's could manage to find in this forsaken run down patch of land. Eugh, Alphess would have to get the others to scout the edges of the territory for something bigger for a change. Even if it was to be on Arden's grounds.
Snarl passed through the lips of him, as large strides where made from such a large wolf as himself into the only claimed area of New foundland, a large dirt patch of nothing, and towards his Apless. He was the highest and most trusted to her in his mind, others may of thought different but it seemed they did not dare to emit it out loud.
"Error..." That was the only word to emit from his male, the pure dead of the Alphess name. It was life threatering but strong.
