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Thankz, I just don't think I did the back right

The back looks too small compared to the front. Try making the back bigger.

Okay everyone, I worked REALY hard on this.....

Great improvement! It looks a lot better, the main problem is that the head still looks a little big and the legs look too thick near the base.

You did a great job on that paws, hun

How's this?

Both hocks(joint connecting thigh to lower leg) on the first wolf are far too round...it distracts from the rest of the picture. I see you've been working on your paws, but have ignored my advice on the head shape and ear positioning. Angles of the bodies are something that can only be perfected with practice, so in that area I would say you just need to keep at it. The eyes may be a bit large...Also, the neck on the first wolf needs to have maybe a longer line to show where it is turned, and also some longer cheeck fur to heighten the affect.

And one more thing to add onto what WWM said- the tail should be higher up and level with the body, because the tailbone connects to the spine. Here is what I mean:

Okay, this one took me a bit...

getting better, however there are a few areas that are a little "strange:
the red circles indicate the "problem areas"
I think you should show both sides of the mouth like this:
http://cache4.asset-cache.net/xc/WL0034 ... 0B0D811297

Okay, I completly love how this one came out, whattda ya think?

absolutley adorable! excellent anatomy! big irresistable puppy eyes X3 who could ask for anything more? what an improvement!

Not bad zasha, not bad =) as Shadow's said, I see a lot of improvement ^^ I think you made the head part very good, it has an adorable expression 83 but I see something that can be fixed ;D