In Her Parents Eyes

Jake Razor · **Posted:** Tue Feb 12, 2008 10:17 pm

Walto Disney wrote:

Lol! I know that feeling. Writer's block, the true evil. XD I think that's one reason I stopped writing for a bit. Maybe to just give my mind a break. XD

Well I don't know about you, but I've been on hiatus long enough. And then some, according to my readers. Lol.

Jake Razor · **Posted:** Sat Feb 16, 2008 10:41 pm

Steele is back and Jenna's parents are planning something? OK, that officially bumps my spider-sense to "off the chart."

Jake Razor · **Posted:** Tue Feb 19, 2008 7:55 am

Splendid!

Jake Razor · **Posted:** Fri Feb 22, 2008 7:49 pm

The plot thickens.

Jake Razor · **Posted:** Thu Feb 28, 2008 9:02 pm

To be perfectly frank, the part with Jenna and Greg just killed your ratings from me. It makes no sense- it just comes out of nowhere and moves too quickly to have any rational sense of flow. Unless you're going to have some plot maneuver like what I implemented in part ten of my own fanfic series (and even from an experienced perspective I can't see how that fits with her leaning toward him like that), I'd say this story just took a downhill turn, even setting aside my "prejudices," if that's what you want to call it.

Duma9 · **Posted:** Sat Mar 15, 2008 2:35 pm

Ah! PLEASE go on! The tension is killing me! And my hands are sweating! XD :lol:

saske italian wolf · **Joined:** Thu Dec 27, 2007 9:45 am **Posts:** 6491

awsome^^I hope to read more

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