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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 6:58 pm |
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Joined: Fri Apr 27, 2007 9:36 am Posts: 947 Location: With Jerome under a cherry blossom tree, sleeping.
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The Calling:
As I lie there on the cold soft bed I can hear voices inside my head I gripped my blankets and hide my face Hiding my eyes from the darkness
I can feel that me time is coming too an end Before dawn comes I will surely be dead
I hear the front door open with a bang, My father is home and he sounds very mad
I can hear him coming closer and closer My heart pounds with each creek of the stairs
The door to my bedroom opens with a bang I can feel fear well up inside of me
But why? The life I am about to leave behind Will be better than the one where I tricked and lied
I hear the sound of metal against cloth and my fear rises I feel the pain in my ribs and then the sound of laughter
And I hear no more laughter, but voices, voices... It is the calling of death I feel no more pain... I feel peaceful
My eyes sip closed and the light dies from my eyes I feel pain no more in fact I feel something else...
I feel freedom....
This was the most random thing I ever wrote! But I like it.
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:06 am |
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Joined: Tue Dec 26, 2006 1:46 pm Posts: 905 Location: somewhere on venus
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two that i wrote at school
Creation a blank canvas, edges neat bursts colours red and blue This is creation You have the front set See the sunlight baking through
The woollen carpet, stained green sprouts forests of paintbrush wood This is creation You have the front seat I would sketch it if I could
Dazzling creatures fill the earth like a collage on the papers face This is creation You have the front seat Smell the flowers of acrylic lace
The artist smiles, a masterpiece The jigsaw of the earth This was creation You had the front seat Of this worlds first birth
The class of room 14 Blindfolded they babble on relentlessly reflect their vanity in smiles Hatred is closed within them as their bags untip, minds empty a landfill of sums doom over drones doodles and dints they turn to the wrong page Whilst their own book bites a haphazard remark. Paper planes launch the tribes clash in communication Clock ticks and the rain drills all ignoring life’s important lesson vectors and trigonometry last for yawn stretching minutes it attacks with dangerous angles they tap out a message in Morse code The bell sounds like a hunter’s horn the herd billows out of ancient doors Onto vast tarmac landscape Tomorrow blindfolded they will babble on
these poems are (c) to me.. you CANNOT copy them as theyar currently being submitted along with my other 15 poems in my own book of poetry
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 3:59 pm |
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Joined: Fri Jan 05, 2007 3:46 pm Posts: 1086 Location: England
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Tani - that is lovely. Poor Meg. I wrote this two years ago: Tribute to Homework I really, really hate homework It bores you to the bone! We should be out in the sun, Not doing work at home! I never get the questions right; Usually they’re all wrong! It is morbidly pointless, And it always takes too long! They say that homework’s useful ‘Cause it keeps you from getting dumb. But they could make it more interesting And make it much more fun! Why must we learn fractions? Or who was Sir Francis Drake? We could be throwing wild parties, And stuffing lots of cake! So let’s demolish homework! And with it our mind and skill. Death to all homework! Kill! Kill! Kill!
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 5:41 pm |
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Joined: Tue Jan 15, 2008 7:35 pm Posts: 198 Location: tennessee
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(Inspired by MC's Hero XD)
There's a friend if you look inside my heart, you can tell me the pain which you feel. > I'll be there when you feel alone, and the emptiness in your heart, I will heal. > > And then within lies a friend, who will be there to the end, > Now you don't have to cry, since you know you'll persevere, > In the harshest moments of life, learn that i'll be here, > And that emptiness you felt will disappear in time.
I wrote this to a friend of mine, and he told me it was very moving
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Wed May 28, 2008 1:27 pm |
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I wrote this a long, long time ago:
Against a darkening amethyst sky, the leaves do fall and trees will sigh, the grass moves slightly on the hill, then He appears and all is still. He moves like lightening, yet stands alone, keeping safe by staying prone then like quick silver He is off against the darkening sky so soft...
He wanders everywhere, field and gulf, and fears nothing: He is the wolf.
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 10:14 pm |
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Joined: Sun Apr 22, 2007 7:35 pm Posts: 1625
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Here's something I was forced to write for school [don't tell anyone, but I had a ton of fun with this <3 [I had to take out a line, though, 'cause it didn't comply with the rules of the site]
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The feeling you get when you’re dreaming of joy The warmth inside when you sit by the fire on Christmas Eve The glimmer of the moon on a cloudless night sky The smell of fresh rain that just battered the pavement clean The color of the sky when the sun begins to set The wonderous sight of an eagle taking flight The sound a wolf makes when he howls in the darkness of the night The way a river runs through a thick, dense forest, no one to stop it from reaching for it’s destination. The freedom you feel when you run through a grassy meadow Holding no fears in the world The happiness you get after your parents surprise you The green leaves of the evergreen, To the rush of the ocean’s blue and white waves, To the marshy lands of the swamps, The purple colors of lilacs in spring, And the relaxation you get after you’ve finished a long year at school The purring of your cat, asleep on your lap The rustling of your pet rats scurrying in their cage The sound of the fan blowing air around the room, The sight of new life around you when you step outside A puppy racing back and forth across a lawn Riding horses in the summer breaks The sound of the birds chirping outside your cabin window The feeling of cold water cooling down your tired body when you go for a swim The satisfaction of learning how to draw a new creature The sweet taste of fresh fruits When you eat the bread your grandma just baked The way you feel when you’ve finished a book The way you feel when you get obsessed When you feel excited to learn a new thing Or learn an old thing, but get better at the skill The feeling of rest, The feeling of comfort, The feeling of joy, The feeling of hope, The feeling of success, The feeling you get at the end of a day spent with your family The thing that now makes you want to reach that final goal The thing you seemed to be missing in life The thing that people can’t live without: The feeling of love.
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 11:18 pm |
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Say hey!! I found this little treasure buried underneath all those dead threads, and I thought I'd like to revive it with a few thought-out poems of my own contrivances. It's been a while since we'd had a very deep and well thought-provoking thread on here, so I'd appreciate it if we could start this back up again... This first poem, a select few might've heard from me over the shout boxes, but I do believe there's something strangely ominous about it, yet insidiously compelling to read. For all of you who don't know the story, an unnamed woman from a couple of my dreams told me this rhyme. I woke up actually muttering the words out loud, and the words stuck since. Warning of a SpriteMind the thought nunce as the Banshee wails once and the spume of the mind bubbles red.
Luck of the dice as the Banshee wails thrice but prepare for tears bitter be shed.Another spontaneous moment where words simply seem to just come to me... War PrayerSet thy strength, I ask it now I pray thy might to me endow. When fires in thy belly grow, unleash thy wrath upon my foe!I'm sure I got more somewhere, but I'll post them later. 
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Post subject: Re: write your poems here Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:40 pm |
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Joined: Thu May 11, 2006 9:19 pm Posts: 1761 Location: Canada
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Enki wrote: Wow nice poems you guys! i'll have to post some new ones I so second that^^ and I think I might to but im not sure the world can handle my new Ecliptic style of nocturnal and euphoric poetry^^XD but I will gladly think about it the next time my mind drifts into slumber of epic divinity^^ Keep up the great work those who have the heart of a poet the ultimate seduction in a matter of abnormal words and phrases^^
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