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Ecliptica wrote: Orion-BSP wrote: Aristotle-AFP wrote: Good poem Orion! Everyone has been writing good poems!  I look forward to seeing more.  You think it's good? Thank you! I'll tell you one thing, it's a trillion times better than the first poem I posted, awful! *shudders* He's right, they are all beautful, so do not stop writing them GRR!! lol keep it up^^ ........................................................................................................... Lonely Slumber Of SilenceA sound
A wave crashing agenced a darkned cliff
The ocean cold and dark
The moons praise and reflection
Can be seen in the sky and on the darkend water
Cold as ice
The water becomes at night
Colder and colder
The sound of the forest
The creatures
The plants
The life
Every sound so beautful and so pure
Full of happyness
Full of mystery and wonder
Minds get lost in ancent forest of dreams
They wonder and wonder
They look one way
They see life, they see love and much more
Emotions of positivity lingers through every tree
In every body of water
Through the blades of the grase
Through the morning drop of of silver water
That the storm left the night before
The full moon high in the sky
One look up
Your mind wonders through the constilation and planetes
Through the entire universe
You creave for adventure
Your heart fills with curiousity
You run and chase your dreams
You chase and satisfy your creaving for the unkown
Everything seems so perfect
So beautful
So vibrint
So sering and splashing with happyness
Splashing the happyness all around
Like a kid and a paint brush
But as you look
As you wonder
You lose something
You lose your voice
You lose yourself
You lose the very beauty that keeps you going
To some
They may never lose there grasp
To many they do
Without a voice
Without the dancing rythom of the forest
Without the voice inside
Telling you to fight
Insted
The voice tells you nothing
The voice fades
Then your heart will fade
Then your soul
Then finaly the grasp
The gravity that pulls your life to earth
That pulls your soul and conects it to
Your heart
Your mind
Your body
Shatters
The tears begin to fall
The freeze into sering ice
Then shatter to ice dust
Winter has finaly arived
Each breath you take
You see a warm mist
You see your life
You look back
You remember
That when the voice faded
You wrote in the sands of time
That you loved that special one
But a tear falls
And that was all you could do
Now later on through time and space
Winter has fallen upon your world
It's saying is
Your world is done
The new world begins
Broken inside
Your fiber and every part of you
Shatterd like a glass rose
Another tear falls and turns to dust
You look at the train tracks
The snow falling upon you and coating the world with ice and the saying
You walk along the tracks
Surrounded by trees
That fade before your very eyes
You keep walking
More and more begins to fade
You look back
And you know in your heart and soul
That there is no turning back
The walk continues but never ends
More and more fade
Till there is nothing exept
The Lonely Slumber Of Silence..................................................................................................................... I love poems based on truth, but this one to me is painfull, I wrote it because I lost my voice and cannot speak, I try and want to, but can't, so I can't say anything to anyone, not even a love one, I don't know when my voice will come back, but I don't think anytime soon, so for that, this poem is what I feel right now, and probably for along time..... Apart from some grammer mistakes, that was the best poem I ever read! Bravo! Bravo! *makes monkey noises*
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 2:26 am |
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Orion-BSP wrote: Ecliptica wrote: Orion-BSP wrote: Aristotle-AFP wrote: Good poem Orion! Everyone has been writing good poems! I look forward to seeing more. You think it's good? Thank you! I'll tell you one thing, it's a trillion times better than the first poem I posted, awful! *shudders* He's right, they are all beautful, so do not stop writing them GRR!! lol keep it up^^ ........................................................................................................... Lonely Slumber Of SilenceA sound
A wave crashing agenced a darkned cliff
The ocean cold and dark
The moons praise and reflection
Can be seen in the sky and on the darkend water
Cold as ice
The water becomes at night
Colder and colder
The sound of the forest
The creatures
The plants
The life
Every sound so beautful and so pure
Full of happyness
Full of mystery and wonder
Minds get lost in ancent forest of dreams
They wonder and wonder
They look one way
They see life, they see love and much more
Emotions of positivity lingers through every tree
In every body of water
Through the blades of the grase
Through the morning drop of of silver water
That the storm left the night before
The full moon high in the sky
One look up
Your mind wonders through the constilation and planetes
Through the entire universe
You creave for adventure
Your heart fills with curiousity
You run and chase your dreams
You chase and satisfy your creaving for the unkown
Everything seems so perfect
So beautful
So vibrint
So sering and splashing with happyness
Splashing the happyness all around
Like a kid and a paint brush
But as you look
As you wonder
You lose something
You lose your voice
You lose yourself
You lose the very beauty that keeps you going
To some
They may never lose there grasp
To many they do
Without a voice
Without the dancing rythom of the forest
Without the voice inside
Telling you to fight
Insted
The voice tells you nothing
The voice fades
Then your heart will fade
Then your soul
Then finaly the grasp
The gravity that pulls your life to earth
That pulls your soul and conects it to
Your heart
Your mind
Your body
Shatters
The tears begin to fall
The freeze into sering ice
Then shatter to ice dust
Winter has finaly arived
Each breath you take
You see a warm mist
You see your life
You look back
You remember
That when the voice faded
You wrote in the sands of time
That you loved that special one
But a tear falls
And that was all you could do
Now later on through time and space
Winter has fallen upon your world
It's saying is
Your world is done
The new world begins
Broken inside
Your fiber and every part of you
Shatterd like a glass rose
Another tear falls and turns to dust
You look at the train tracks
The snow falling upon you and coating the world with ice and the saying
You walk along the tracks
Surrounded by trees
That fade before your very eyes
You keep walking
More and more begins to fade
You look back
And you know in your heart and soul
That there is no turning back
The walk continues but never ends
More and more fade
Till there is nothing exept
The Lonely Slumber Of Silence..................................................................................................................... I love poems based on truth, but this one to me is painfull, I wrote it because I lost my voice and cannot speak, I try and want to, but can't, so I can't say anything to anyone, not even a love one, I don't know when my voice will come back, but I don't think anytime soon, so for that, this poem is what I feel right now, and probably for along time..... Apart from some grammer mistakes, that was the best poem I ever read! Bravo! Bravo! *makes monkey noises* Wow.... im speachless! well thanks^^.......*still remains speachless* lol, yeah I didn't have to time correct it lol
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 8:13 pm |
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wow..it took me a while to read but AWESOME poems everybody!!!! I loved them all, I only wish I could write one, xD someday I will..this is my all time favorite poem, you guys might understand it..you might have to think for a while..or you might not get it at all..xD
The Rose That Grew From Concrete by Tupac
Did you hear about the rose that grew from a crack in the concrete?
Proving nature's law is wrong it learned to walk with out having feet.
Funny it seems, but by keeping it's dreams, it learned to breathe fresh air.
Long live the rose that grew from concrete when no one else ever cared.
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 8:28 am |
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DarkHusky-WereWolf wrote: Ecliptica, I love your poems! Keep em comming! <3 Your last one made me sad...Anyway good job!
Thanks^^ and I will^^
@ Everyone: KEEP WRITING MORE!!! THEY ALL AWESOME!!^^
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Post subject: Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 7:19 am |
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Dakotah wrote: wow..it took me a while to read but AWESOME poems everybody!!!! I loved them all, I only wish I could write one, xD someday I will..this is my all time favorite poem, you guys might understand it..you might have to think for a while..or you might not get it at all..xD
The Rose That Grew From Concrete by Tupac
Did you hear about the rose that grew from a crack in the concrete?
Proving nature's law is wrong it learned to walk with out having feet.
Funny it seems, but by keeping it's dreams, it learned to breathe fresh air.
Long live the rose that grew from concrete when no one else ever cared.
Wow, that is amazing^^
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 4:24 am |
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DarkHusky-WereWolf wrote: No one
The more I see
The more I understand
I see whats inside
No one knows
Or even understands
The feelings I hide
Deep inside
within my heart
So deep
So pure
So uncertian
Scared
Alone
No where to go
No place to call home
No wings to fly
No chance to soar
Simple and complicated
til the very end
Insecure
and
Relentless
As rough as can be
One day
A smile turns to a frown
A life turned
All upside down
(c) 2006=Tylva
Completely beautful, me loved it, and I hope this helps, this fallowing poem is a posible answer and maybe guidence to someone who can, so please read it.
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Someone
You may see
You may understand more to each curious glimpse
But each life filled glimpse tares you up on the inside
Your fiber begins to decay from the pain within your heart
You feel scared
Lost
And alone
Look deeper
See that flame that kept your heart beating
Find that light that you once called yourself
Find it
It may be deep within your heart
It may be lost in a realm of darkness
But everything tainted in darkend pulse
Can be healed
Can be restord to it's natural beauty
Like this earth or a flower
Before the sun comes up after last nights storm
A drop of pure life sparkles with the sun's reflection
The prizim of colors
Like the northern lights within you
Splashing sering happyness into your heart
With each beat
It's thanking the Aurora for understanding
This Aurora may be hard to find
But look deep
Find it
It will guide you to your heart's desire
You may think your alone
You may think no one understands you
But your wrong
For many reasions
But I will only say one
I understand you
I am always with you even though I may not be right beside you
It's like the wind
Even though you cannot see it
Doesn't mean it's not there
If you need help finding yourself
If you let me
I'll be that aurora
I'll help you find yourself
I'll be there and never turn away
I will help guide you to yourself
But you must have the desire to want to find it
No matter how deep within your heart you must wonder
No matter how much pain you go thgrough to find yourself
I know you can
But more importantly
I know you can
Now hopefully you know now
That your not alone
You may be scared but not for long
You will find yourself
And that I will be your Aurora to help you find who you are
You may not want to belive there is no one
But im telling you now
That there is someone
There may have not been someone along time ago
But there is someone now. . .
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Sorry for all the spelling and grammer mess ups, but I needed to let you know that there is someone and I hope that this poem will help in anyway, if not, please come talk to me when you have time so I can try harder to help^^. . .
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 5:46 pm |
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I remember writing a sequel to Yellow Jell-o, but I can't find it anymore. I remember it being something like. . . Yellow Jell-o died. . . Or something.
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 4:04 am |
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DarkHusky-WereWolf wrote: Ecliptica wrote: DarkHusky-WereWolf wrote: No one
The more I see
The more I understand
I see whats inside
No one knows
Or even understands
The feelings I hide
Deep inside
within my heart
So deep
So pure
So uncertian
Scared
Alone
No where to go
No place to call home
No wings to fly
No chance to soar
Simple and complicated
til the very end
Insecure
and
Relentless
As rough as can be
One day
A smile turns to a frown
A life turned
All upside down
(c) 2006=Tylva Completely beautful, me loved it, and I hope this helps, this fallowing poem is a posible answer and maybe guidence to someone who can, so please read it. ........................................................................................................... Someone You may see You may understand more to each curious glimpse But each life filled glimpse tares you up on the inside Your fiber begins to decay from the pain within your heart You feel scared Lost And alone Look deeper See that flame that kept your heart beating Find that light that you once called yourself Find it It may be deep within your heart It may be lost in a realm of darkness But everything tainted in darkend pulse Can be healed Can be restord to it's natural beauty Like this earth or a flower Before the sun comes up after last nights storm A drop of pure life sparkles with the sun's reflection The prizim of colors Like the northern lights within you Splashing sering happyness into your heart With each beat It's thanking the Aurora for understanding This Aurora may be hard to find But look deep Find it It will guide you to your heart's desire You may think your alone You may think no one understands you But your wrong For many reasions But I will only say one I understand you I am always with you even though I may not be right beside you It's like the wind Even though you cannot see it Doesn't mean it's not there If you need help finding yourself If you let me I'll be that aurora I'll help you find yourself I'll be there and never turn away I will help guide you to yourself But you must have the desire to want to find it No matter how deep within your heart you must wonder No matter how much pain you go thgrough to find yourself I know you can But more importantly I know you can Now hopefully you know now That your not alone You may be scared but not for long You will find yourself And that I will be your Aurora to help you find who you are You may not want to belive there is no one But im telling you now That there is someone There may have not been someone along time ago But there is someone now. . . ........................................................................................................... Sorry for all the spelling and grammer mess ups, but I needed to let you know that there is someone and I hope that this poem will help in anyway, if not, please come talk to me when you have time so I can try harder to help^^. . . WOW! everything today just turned EVERYTHING around! YAY!!!!!!!!! XD Thank you SOOOO much! Your welcome^^ and im so glad to know your happy^^ sa Hi to your big brother for me^^
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2006 12:32 pm |
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Jewels of Life
Emeralds from Mountains
Sapphires from Seas
Rubies from the Sun above
Opals from Moons
Topaz from Trees
Diamonds from Stars in the heavens
Amythems Dragons
Onyx Night Skies
Aqua marine animals
-Wolfanna
The jewels of life was inspired by a song, it helped me see the beauty of life in a whole new perspective.
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2006 3:58 pm |
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GreyWolf101 wrote: This one I wrote after my friend died in an accident...  Livin' A LieYou and me... we lived a lie Together throughout the months You serious yet calm and rich While I brave and poor It seemed that our differences would never let us get along And yet we accomplished that But we've been livin' a lie The day you broke the record The day you broke our promise The day you broke our friendship That one day... I felt like hurting you More than you could hurt me More than the words I spat at you And more powerful than the ones you spat over the phone But now it was too late to save you From the cruel fate that swallowed you The day you died... I felt so lost Because you were my friend It's said to be livin' a lie A lie that I broke to you The night before I vowed that we would be friends But that vow was broken the next morning Tears stream from my eyes, thinking about you Your smile, the way you blurt out excuses When you forgot your homework You made me laugh and cry and live a good life But now you left me in a deep depression How I wish you walked with me that day And how I wished we had never gotten into that one fight That one fight... if it never happened we would be friends But that fight changed our lives forever... Very beautful and very well done, im sorry to hear about your friend. . .
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one I did a while ago
Going Head Too Head
Gotta keep the fire burning...
Head too Head
Gotta keep the water flowing....
Head Too Head
Free the tiger within
Head Too Head
Let the storm begin....
Its time to face the facts
The end is near
Unleash your ultiamte fear
As your dreams are crushed
In an instant
As you use all of your might
You try and keep up the fight
You fight too remember the name
You fight for the spirit of the game
Going head too head
Its Do or Die
Head Too Head
Let your dreams fly
Head Too Head
Look too the sky
Head too Head
And remember why
You fight too win
Let the struggle begin
Only one will stand
Proud and tall
Never be the one who falls
Going Head Too Head
Its all for the fame
Head Too Head
Its the way of the game
Head Too Head
So Remember the name
Head Too Head
This is called 'Fight For Your Light'
Inside the darkness is where I sleep…
Lost for all eternity…
No more than a memory…
A faded piece of what I used too be…
I never wanted too give up…
I never wanted too give in…
But there was nothing at stake…
So I just walked away….
There was no light
No reason too believe
That tomorrow would be brighter
And the dark would be lighter
So I was lost for eternity…
Lost in my misery...
Walking down the city streets
The rain of darkness on my face
Others walked by, but as shadows too my eyes
Then I saw something more,
I saw something better
A Bright star in the city of dark
I didn’t think it could be true
I saw you
A fallen angel in my eyes
As you simply walked by
You could not see me
As I was of the dark…
Never too see your smile
Never too hear your laugh
Lost for eternity…..
Looking back I realised
How I had so much at stake
And I through it away…
Now I need a victory
Because you mean the world too me
And there is something that I have too changed…
I have too fight,
Fight the dark that took my heart
Fight for the ones I love
Fight for the ones above
I open my eyes for the first
No longer blind by the dark
I will never give up
I will never give in
Because now there is something at stake
So I won’t walk away
My heart is at stake
I have too see your smile
I have too hear your laugh
Or I will forever too be locked in the dark
Fight for the Light
Never Give In
Fight with All Your Might
Don’t Ever Look Back
My Future Can Be Bright
Never Forget
This Feels So Right
Never Give Up
You Are My Light
As I stand in the street
The shadows surround me
Ready Too fight
But without a weapon
What will I do?
Then I look up
And I see you on a roof
You smile at me
And Now I Believe
My Weapon Is My Heart
And My Power Is My Love…
My Love For you
And this is another
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Insolent boy
This slave
of fashion
basking in your
glory
Ignorant fool
This brave
young suitor
sharing in my
triumph
Angel I hear you
Speak
I listen
stay by my side
guide me
Angel, my soul was weak
forgive me
enter at last
Master
Flattering child
you shall know me
see why in shadow
I hide
Look at your face
in the mirror
I am there
inside
Angel of Music
Guide and guardian
Grant to me your
glory
Angel of Music
Hide no longer
Come to me, strange
angel
I am your Angel
Come to me Angel of Music
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 3:53 am |
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JazzyWolf wrote: That is not your poem, those are lyrics from Andrew Loyd Webber's Phantom of the Opera. That is not cool at all. That kinda thing just doesn't fly here at all. Anyone who doesn't know the lyrics, look it up, it's in the first act, I believe the song is titled "Angel of Music". What you are doing is stealing the work of Andrew Loyd Webber and claiming it as your own, and I'll let you know, this is the last place you want to steal someones elses work.
Oh my god I love that song^^
And anyway I don't think he or she was trying to steal, I think they were trying to show that those lyrics are in a poem form.. but I could be wrong^^
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Post subject: Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 10:18 am |
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Moonflower
The air is chilld by the winters silk upon the earth
The sky becomes dark as the botom of a stardust ocean
Glitering its illuminus glow that can be seen from high beyond the silver tainted mountian tops
The only light shedding it's silver platnum glair
Was the pericing beauty of the full moon
The wind wistels it's wild tune through the trees of dreams
The wolves raise there heads and begin to howl the mellody of the forest
The wild, and the fire that burns in there hearts
They creatures of complete mystery howl loud and strong
Like the bond between one heart and another
Or when a new heart became alive with it's own beauty
Deep in every dark tainted corner of this earth
There is beauty waiting to be born
The wolves still bay at the illuminus complexity of the full moon
To witness something special
Something incresingly virbtrint and mysterious
A sacred mountian hiden by all who is blind to themselves
Who is blind to what or whom they are
Those who want to find out there story
They travil to Moonflower Sanctuary
To see at the very top
A pure white faountian that glows only on the night of the full moon
In the stone of this beautful fountian
Has the way of the wolf engraved in carvings all around it
The second the moon is full laying it's radiant beauty upon all life
The fountian that was once empty
Springs to life with silver water
With the power of healing
And showing the lost, there path to destany
The silver water is the purist of all
For it is the tears of the moon
If this prizmic silver water
If filled with tears of pain
Then the world will suffer the result of a pain more powerfull then any
If this Fountian is filled with tears of pure happyness
Then the in the middle of water
The legendary flower of the Moon will sprout
Shedding its illuminus beauty so vibrint and pure
Upon this earth as thanks for happyness
The silver water will flow over the fountian and the falls
Will ignite in blinding beauty
As it's water will be the same as the tears of the moon
The flower will sprout higher and more mygestic each second
All the wolves come from everywhere to witness this moment
This moment of being one with each other
For that is the only way for the tears to be happy
Is for everyone and everything's heart's beat as one
The land all around that grased on our earth's serfuss
Will bloom will radiants and life
The dead trees and plants
Will sprout into a maze of beauty
With the petals of blossemed trees and roses
Will sleep on the winds of time
Like riding upon a dream
Through every city
Through every patch of land
The sent of each blossem that passes by ones eye site or sent of smell
Will be clensed and feel life for what it really is
Moments later the blossems will glow with silver flame
And seire into your heart and soul
This flower that everything has been blessed with, goes by the name
Moonflower...........
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This poem is one of my most favorited creations, and I think I may have made up a few words, but to me, that shows more then what I could imagin, so I hope you all like it.. and sorry for being horrible at spelling and grammer^^
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