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Post subject: Re: Forest Angels *Mine and Angel12349's rp* Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 10:57 am |
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(Ok. I don't know about Trooper, it could make a very sad scene in the fic if we let him die, but it is up to you as he is your character)
Shar glanced at her sister, feeling that she didn't really want to be spoken to right now, but speaking might be the best thing. 'Darla, maybe we should talk about this, I can't believe our brother is dead either, but you can't block yourself off from the world' she whispered, but her throat was so dry it came out as more of a squeak.
Karba stumbled to a halt beside Dawn. The grin that he had worn on his face while he had been running flickered slightly, but he kept it going. 'I suppose, maybe we could head back and stay hidden, it has been a long time hasn't it?' he said, wondering if it was a good idea. 'What the heck, come on let's go!' he shouted after a few moments of thought, and whipped round to face the other way.
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Post subject: Re: Forest Angels *Mine and Angel12349's rp* Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 3:50 am |
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(That's O.K, I don't want to rush you, take your time)
Shar had to avert her eyes from Darla's stare, feeling as if her sister was digging right into the depths of her soul. She looked up when Darla turned away again, and looked at her with pleading eyes, hoping that somehow Darla could see how she was feeling too. She looked at her paws and heard the distant rumble of thunder and the sudden patter of rain outside. At those sounds Shar stood up and walked outside, allowing her tears to mingle with the rain.
Karba walked almost happily beside Dawn, but he could sense that something was worrying her. 'Dawn, is everything O.K, are you alright?' he asked, but didn't stop walking. He heard the thunder rumble and felt the first drops of water on his nose.
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Post subject: Re: Forest Angels *Mine and Angel12349's rp* Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 1:35 pm |
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Shar turned to look at her sister, thankful for the rain hiding her tears. She took a few hesitant steps towards her siblings, unsure as to how she was going to tell them that Trooper was dead and Jaka was more or less missing. She opened her mouth, but shut it again when she found that her mouth had become very dry. She looked up at the sky again, feeling the raindrops hit her fur and making it even wetter.
Karba decided not to press Dawn's anxious expression and continued silently beside her. As they drew close to the den he spotted Shar standing outside getting soaked in the rain. He heard Dawn call for his sisters and Jaka, but no reply came. He noticed Shar's disdraught look, and how red her eyes were. What could have happened to make Shar cry, or is it just my imagination he wondered, but didn't voice his thoughts outloud.
Jaka raised his head to the oncoming rain. Trooper was dead, there was no doubt about that, but he still couldn't find it in himself to accept it. He shut his eyes and mourned in the only way he could, the only way he had since the death of his sister. He opened his mouth a howled, a sound full of pain, regret, but most of all anger. Anger at himself and at those who had hurt the ones he loved.
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Post subject: Re: Forest Angels *Mine and Angel12349's rp* Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 11:49 am |
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Jaka turned to Dawn slowly and then stood up with a vacant expression on his face. "Follow me, I'll show you" he said, his voice level and devoid of emotion. He turned aroud and began to walk back towards where the hunters had claimed a much loved life.
Shar saw Jaka begin to move off and in the same emotionless way she followed. She kept behind Dawn with her eyes staring blankly ahead. The wind lashed the rain against her face, but even then it couldn't disguise her tears.
Karba's mouth dropped open as he saw the beginnings of a small procession start. He had no idea why it had formed, but he felt a strange longing to join it, as if it affected him somehow. He felt his legs move him forwards against his will.
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Post subject: Re: Forest Angels *Mine and Angel12349's rp* Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:52 pm |
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(Awsomeness!!! Looking forward to it)
Jaka glanced up at Dawn beside him only briefly before turning his attention back in front of him. He stepped through the bushes and stood silently beside the body of Trooper, waiting for the others to come. Trooper needed to be mourned and remembered properly, and everyone should be there to do it.
Shar slowed her pace to match Darla's, glad that she had decided to come. She managed to piece together a fragmented smile that didn't really look sincere, but it was the best she could do with how she was feeling. She stepped through the bushes after Jaka and felt tears well up in her eyes again at the sight of Trooper, but she held them back for later.
Karba continued at the back, his eyes flicking between all in the procession in a desperate attempt to try and understand what was going on.
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Post subject: Re: Forest Angels *Mine and Angel12349's rp* Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 3:32 pm |
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Hi, this is me. My other account got deleted by my sister, no I'm naot a fake this is really me  Also, I have a project to work on for school so I won't be able to post until this friday. And I will send you chater 1 of the fan-fic via PM today.
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Post subject: Re: Forest Angels *Mine and Angel12349's rp* Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 10:19 am |
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(  All your posts have gone, did you have them saved otherwise we have lost them. Don't worry I believe it's you, and I loved the first bit of the fanfic)
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Post subject: Re: Forest Angels *Mine and Angel12349's rp* Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 1:35 pm |
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(I had most of them saved, but not all :[. When I send you part of the fan-fic, you can edit them all you want but make sure you use a different color when you do :])
Dawn stood wide eyed at Trooper's body on the ground, tears welled in her eyes. With a sob, Dawn ran over to him, covering his body with hers. "No! Trooper, please my brother, not this!" She yelped, tears soked his bloddy fur, She whimpered holding him as close as she could to his body. "How did this happen?!" She screamed, looking down at him. "What are we gonna tell mom and dad?" She asked sobbing.
Darla lagged behind until she could hear Dawn's heartbroken cries, she walked behind the group, seeing her brother laying their made tears fall down her cheeks. Sobbing quietly she let the rain hit her face, wondering how she would go on with out him.
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Post subject: Re: Forest Angels *Mine and Angel12349's rp* Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 2:50 pm |
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(Could you send me what you have saved because I only have a few. I think we will just have to guess the rest. Oh and I have made new designs for Shar and Karba, they are attached)
Jaka kept his eyes away from Dawn's horrified expression. 'I felt you should have seen this rather than been told about it' he muttered, unsure if Dawn had even heard him over her sobs. He wandered closer to her, standing silently beside her and trying to stop his own tears.
As Karba emerged from the bushes he was met with horrified sobs and the sight of his brother lying dead on the grass. His mouth dropped open in pure shock and he felt his whole body go numb. 'How?' was the only thing he could mutter, too shocked to even cry.
Shar lay her head on Dawn's shoulders, trying her best to comfort her sister. 'I don't know what we will tell them, but we will think of something' she cried in her sister's ear gently, nuzzling her and licking the tears from her face.
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