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this is something I wrote a while ago:
Where Were You



Where were you when I was in my darkest hour

Beaten, cut, scared, & always put down

But even when I was in the tallest tower

You were always there to get me down




After every battle, after every war

We would always stick together

Even if we were beaten & sore

So next time we meet remember this

That wherever we are we will never be missed




Cotton Grass-BP

No Fear
Have you ever looked death in the eye
Were hurt & saw people walk on by
Have you been alone with no body around
Or beaten hard & thrown to the ground

And if you have experienced things like this
You feel thankful to see the morning bliss
So whenever your down & feeling blue
Remember that good things will always happen to you

Cotton Grass.
-Some inspiration I got from Balto.

The day you were born we were proud parents.
I made a secrete promise,
A promise that was meant to me kept
But when you were stolen,
That promise was broken
From that night on your father and I wept

Grieving over what’s not with us
We remember you in our hearts,
And even though the pain smarts
We remember you day by day
Little by little we carried on

You knew of which I spoke
You never took your father’s advice as a joke
So why didn’t you listen
If you did you’d still be here today
Now a two month old pup is what we’re missin

Your father and I are sorry it had to end this way
We hope to see you again some day
Many night’s we’ll pray
You listen for us ok
We’ll listen for you.

Now with a grieving heart
I feel as if I never played my part
Bandit, I was your mother and failed to protect
And it was you who paid the price
I feel as small as mice.

Please forgive me, it wasn’t meant to go down this way
Come home some day
So we can be one family
Your father, me and you
But until then this is not a good by but farewell for now.
We miss and love you

Was It Love? Or A Lie?

I said hi
You were hiding was your reply
I sat and looked
I felt there was a hidden pain

Where? no clue
I just thought I was going insain
I felt my blood run thin

When you said your hid
I asked what was hid?
Your reply
Something that I cannot tell you

I asked why? feeling pain rain from the sky
You said it was something that is about you
I grew more and more close as to my movment
I felt something painfull hid behind your heart

I said please tell and I won't sell
Your reply was you can't
I felt hurt for the lack of trust

Do you trust me was my pain filled cry
You lay silent as I asked agian feeling more pain agian and agian
Please tell me with tear filled eyes and a pain filled heart

I sat and waited but I knew something tainted
I knew if I was not told what was hid in the darkness
My blood would be drawn
It would flow in a stream from my left whrist

I said agian feeling more pain and a Blood temptation within
Please tell me, please
More tears fell from my eyes
The tears mixed with the blood that was spilt

I ask once agian holding the blade within my grasp
The blade made contact with my whrist
More blood spiled more pain it was filled
More tears fell
My blood coverd up my soul
My blood coverd up my vision and my heart

I fall to my kneez
My blood droplets hiting the ground in three's
Tell me I screamed with little hope left
I raise my blade to my neck and press
Feeling the cold blood that was once warm trickle down

I lay a rose on the ground
Deeper I press
More blood trickled
I looked down at the rose
Then at you who was fading

Back at the rose seeing my trickled blood
Drip on the rose and roll off
I gaze up at the moon and say

Was it love? or a lie?
After that was said the blade was run across spiling more

I fall and see the rose
I turned more black with each drop

I think once agian before my last breath

Was it love? or a lie?



Writen
By Ecliptica

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I wrote this to what im feeling, something happend like this, and well pain is exreamly deadly, same with never knowing.

Sad and dark, yes, I am not in a light mood and won't be for a long while.

I wrote one earlier

Your fault? don't think so, the only fault you have is you make me happy^^ but thanks^^

AHH!!! I hate mood swings lol......

A Fading Dream.

Once I was alone
I never thought id escape this hell
But one day I met you
We spoke and you saved me

You unlocked the lock of my cage
My soul
My heart
Was final free
I was free from the shakles of hate
Of dark determination

I was saved
I was saved from this hell
From my kin taking his rage upon me
Fights always ended with bloodshed
Always mine was spilt

But you
You unlocked me
You gave me strangth
You put me together
You were the missing peice of my story

You were the missing peice to me and to my life
My dream was the created
I had to fill it in
I had you to thank for making me whole

I was happy and so much more
Not fake but real for once
My vision was a bit blury with tears
But not tears of pain like useral
Tears of happyness and everlasting light
They splashed and hit the ground

I look up into your eyes
I saw the sparkle and fill with tears aswell
They filled and spiled like a fountian of dreams
Spilled over the earth and coats it with happyness

A day of rain brings a rainbow
A rainbow of splashing happyness acrosse the brightend sky
Your tears and your love would shatter the darkness to dust

Night came
The full moon high in the darkend sky
Pitch black
Each star a dream the lived on
A wish never incincerated

Your touch agenced me filled with your warmpth
Filled with pure love
Each touch filled with happyness
Each time you held me
I felt safe
I felt secure
More then that
I was whole

One
You held me tight
We both felt our hearts beating as one
I thought that is was a dream
I thought it was too good to be true
But I felt it

I was reality
Or atleast it was

A lie was said
A minipulation took place
A flame of hate started growing in your heart
The flame got stronger
More ferice
More rage was poored into it
The flame turned black

It scorched my heart
It scorched my soul
A wound was made
The wound got bigger as the flame of darkness grew

I fought agenced it
I was getting more burnt
I could smell my soul burning
I could feel my heart giving into the flame

I still fought
Hurting myself in the prosses
I felt true darkness
The wolf of the dark
A demon of pure hatered of pure evil

I faced that demon
I fought that wolf head on
Days and days the battle lasted
I final won
The wolf's heart stoped

I knew I won
I never thought I would feel or see the wolf of the dark
But I was wrong

Another lie
Another minipulation took place under the full moon
Sering the moons color
To a dark blood red

The wolf of dark was back
The flame roard more powerfull then ever
The lie the minipulation
Was a jump start
The wolf of the dark's heart started agian
It's evil tone

This time
The story usally ends with the lightside winning
But this is the first which ended with the darkness ontop
Sering and shattering the one whom fought
Whom's blood was shed for you
Whoms love was for you

But your darkside took over
And insinerated me with its crimzon black flames
The one whom was the sinner
The one who started the darkside
Laughed in the backround
Knowing he won
Knowing that he turned his soul mate agenced the other
Shattering his heart
Shattering his soul

The final thought that crossed my mind was
I hope your happy now
You were sucsessfull
And now im just

A fading Dream.


Writen
By Ecliptica.


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Sad yes, it as once light and full of happyness, but someone made sure it turned out like hell, true events true story, true dream......

Thanks DH *hugs*

wow .....a realy nice poem....good word usage....and it realy bring across the emotions, feelings, and events that happen in this story...*shakes hand* but a very nice poem

Is this one good?



Outlaws


Standin' bold upon a cliff,
his head and tail raised to the wind,
his ears and nostrils couldn't be more alert,
his golden fur was touched by the setting sunlight,
his eyes blacker than the night itself.

Trottin' up the ridge,
his head and tail lowered to the wind,
his ears were back but yet they were catchin' the sound and his nostrils were flarin',
his silver fur was touched by the rising moonlight,
his eyes lighter than even the sand.

So the silver stands beside the gold,
both stand alert,
with heads and tails raised to the wind,
and swivelin' ears and flarin' nostrils,
so completely different,
yet so much the same.

They stand there together,
bold and strong and bright,
as the sunlight sets and the moonlight rises,
and the hours come and go,
as the moon reaches the top of the sky,
the gold moves a little,
so does the silver.

Down they go down the ridge,
gallopin' like the wind,
the clouds begin to cover the moon,
soon followed by poundin' rain,
both slip,
but regain.

Soon they reach the bottom of the ridge,
they tromp around,
partially blind,
soon they find a cave and they gallop towards it,
once under shelter,
the two fall to the ground in exhaustion,
followed by a long sleep.

They awake hours later,
the moonlight is settin',
and the sunlight is risin',
they get to their legs and trot out into the open,
the sunlight gleams down so brightly,
the pair is blinded for a second,
but their sight is soon regained.

They don't return to the cliff,
instead they trot off across the plains,
with the heavy brush scrapin' their hide,
soon blood is shed,
but they must leave the mountains behind,
for men are always after the two outlaws,
they're off in search for a place that is safe from men.

The reason the gold and the silver travel together is unknown,
but one thing is known about them,
they are on the run,
theives and murderers they are,
well at least through the eyes of men,
but theft and murder are common in the kingdom of animals,
these two stud horses are outlaws on the run.

Yellow Jell-o,
So hollow and mellow.
It's so yellow,
Eat a Yellow Jell-o!

I wrote that poem when I was in 5th grade.
I used to be a cute little tyke back then.

You think it's good? Thank you! I'll tell you one thing, it's a trillion times better than the first poem I posted, awful! *shudders*

He's right, they are all beautful, so do not stop writing them GRR!! lol keep it up^^

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Lonely Slumber Of Silence

A sound
A wave crashing agenced a darkned cliff
The ocean cold and dark
The moons praise and reflection
Can be seen in the sky and on the darkend water

Cold as ice
The water becomes at night
Colder and colder

The sound of the forest
The creatures
The plants
The life

Every sound so beautful and so pure
Full of happyness
Full of mystery and wonder
Minds get lost in ancent forest of dreams

They wonder and wonder
They look one way
They see life, they see love and much more
Emotions of positivity lingers through every tree
In every body of water
Through the blades of the grase
Through the morning drop of of silver water
That the storm left the night before

The full moon high in the sky
One look up
Your mind wonders through the constilation and planetes
Through the entire universe
You creave for adventure
Your heart fills with curiousity

You run and chase your dreams
You chase and satisfy your creaving for the unkown

Everything seems so perfect
So beautful
So vibrint
So sering and splashing with happyness
Splashing the happyness all around
Like a kid and a paint brush

But as you look
As you wonder
You lose something
You lose your voice
You lose yourself

You lose the very beauty that keeps you going
To some
They may never lose there grasp
To many they do

Without a voice
Without the dancing rythom of the forest
Without the voice inside
Telling you to fight

Insted
The voice tells you nothing
The voice fades
Then your heart will fade
Then your soul
Then finaly the grasp
The gravity that pulls your life to earth
That pulls your soul and conects it to
Your heart
Your mind
Your body

Shatters
The tears begin to fall
The freeze into sering ice
Then shatter to ice dust
Winter has finaly arived

Each breath you take
You see a warm mist
You see your life

You look back
You remember
That when the voice faded
You wrote in the sands of time
That you loved that special one
But a tear falls
And that was all you could do

Now later on through time and space
Winter has fallen upon your world
It's saying is
Your world is done
The new world begins

Broken inside
Your fiber and every part of you
Shatterd like a glass rose
Another tear falls and turns to dust

You look at the train tracks
The snow falling upon you and coating the world with ice and the saying

You walk along the tracks
Surrounded by trees
That fade before your very eyes
You keep walking
More and more begins to fade
You look back
And you know in your heart and soul
That there is no turning back

The walk continues but never ends
More and more fade
Till there is nothing exept

The Lonely Slumber Of Silence..........


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I love poems based on truth, but this one to me is painfull, I wrote it because I lost my voice and cannot speak, I try and want to, but can't, so I can't say anything to anyone, not even a love one, I don't know when my voice will come back, but I don't think anytime soon, so for that, this poem is what I feel right now, and probably for along time.....

Nice poen!^_^ Eclipta

Thanks^^

This is more like a song, at least that's what I first wrote it for.


Cheating


It's happening today, it's all around us now, then I hear myself think, I'm wondering how, it got this way. You hear it on the radio, on TV, at the mall, sometimes I ponder why they even try at all. (Chorus--> Cheating, it's like a disease, it's everywhere, it brings you to your knees, it hurts inside and out to find, that for someone else they left you behind)

You feel like you can't trust, like you can't let someone in, they might seem nice but what happens when, you find her with another guy, she doesn't know you know, then you catch him in the act and then you watch him go (chorus)

While all that's happening to them, I'm walking home with you, we're one couple in not many who promise to stay true. I'll be a blanket over you, to shield you from that harm, to keep you from that pain out there, the kind that has no charm.


I've done others but I posted this one first. Hope you like it.