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Spark
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jun 25, 2006 8:45 pm |
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Heres my poem.
The Fight
A deep breathing sound arose from the forest.
The snow is slushed by feet of the wolf.
A chomping sound in the distance.
A tongue races over fangs.
More slushing, more chomping.
The wolf lows itself, the deer continues chomping.
The stillness breaks.
The wolf leaping through the air, the deer kicking wildly, the snow flying.
Jaws strong as steel clip together, hooves like iron slap the air.
Jaws are muted by flesh, hooves are muted by flesh.
The wolf gasps, the deer gasps.
Jaws cling harder, hooves press harder.
The snow is slushed by feet of the wolf, the snow is slushed by feet of the deer.
The wolf almost falls, the deer almost falls.
But both are fighters, and stay up.
The wolf twists hard, the deer slaps hard.
But the hoof slaps air, the wolf is out of the way.
The wolf twists harder and harder, the hoof has nothing to slap but air and snow.
The wolf barely stands up, the deer barely stands up. But both are fighters, so they stay up.
The wolf twists as hard as he can, the deer slaps as hard as he can, but the hoof slaps nothing.
Finally, the wolf felt like falling, the deer felt like falling, but the fighters stood.
The wolf gave one last twist hoping the deer would fall. The deer fell.
But the wolf's work was not over yet.
He struggled to give one last twist hoping the deer would die. It did.
The wolf howled in triumph.
The wolf fell. From exhaustion and injured ribs.
The wolf would live to see another day. But the deer wouldn't.
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I know, a really creative name for a scorpion... I was ten, okay?
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BlackwolfWSP
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jun 25, 2006 10:04 pm |
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Joined: Thu Aug 11, 2005 12:27 pm Posts: 1108 Location: Misery
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I love the end of that poem, BlackShimmer! It's hilarious!
-A wierd little funny-ish poem...-ish...-lol
I hear a sound,
I turn around
I see a sight,
Two wolf cubs fight!
I smell a scent,
A skunky stench!
I feel a feeling,
A banana peeling!
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WhiteWolf--(WSP)
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Post subject: Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 7:28 am |
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Joined: Sat Dec 24, 2005 11:36 am Posts: 1070
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DarkHusky wrote: WhiteWolf-WSP wrote: DarkHusky wrote: Haha Awesome poems buds! Keep it up!  WOW!!! Man, im really sorry for posting so much!!!...  I was having trouble sending it.... if a mod can delete the first one and the last one... i like the second one better.... Sorry for taking up so much space...  haha i noticed. ah its ok..i mean u didnt intentionally do it. haha. 
hehe ya.... i didnt intentionally do it....lol
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LunaWolfSpirit
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Post subject: Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 7:37 am |
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Joined: Fri Dec 30, 2005 5:22 pm Posts: 591 Location: Deep in an Arctic forest, hunting with her pack, on no map!
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~HOme.~
As i search for my lost pack,
I think back to why i left.
The days passed so quickly,
but not one gos by without a thought of you.
My mother, my pack,
My family, what will you do?
When i search under fallen logs,
I fee hot tears under my eyes.
I smell fresh sents,
Only to follow again.
I sigh an continue on,
I wonder why i left....
I hear a strong howl of prayer,
I reconize your voice.
I am finally home!
You open yourselves to my again!
I Am home!!!
~Wolf Cuz LUna~
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Spark
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 1:00 pm |
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Ecliptica wrote: Astrology Board Of The Sacred Moons
A board spins fast to slow 12 months the board will spin around 1 month will be chosen To be destend to shine the full moonlite of the sacred moon chosen
The path is not clear The path is long Across the moon thy one shall walk Past the fountian of silver spring Through the forest of the moonlite dreams
To the month chosen The moon will shine The moon will ingrave the symble on that month To the sign the astrology board of the sacred moon lands on
To each sign there is a vision A vision clear as ice A story A legend Will be born
The night at the moons awaken Thy eye will see all Everything around Will gloaw and reflect thy moon shine back
Though time and space The astrology board of the sacred moons Will turn and turn Change and change The board will never fade For the months will never end
Even if there is no life in the Galaxy The months will change The astrology baord of the sacred moons Will bless thy months with a difrent moon crest each year This is a never ending cycle The cycle is called the moon cycle The peace needed is the astrology board of the sacred moons.
Writin By Ecliptica.
Bravo! Bravo! Awesome! *claps and makes a monkey sound* That is one of the best poems I've read!
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I know, a really creative name for a scorpion... I was ten, okay?
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Ecliptica
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2006 2:23 pm |
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Joined: Thu May 11, 2006 9:19 pm Posts: 1761 Location: Canada
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Thanks you for the complents^^
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Ecliptica
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 2:38 pm |
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Joined: Thu May 11, 2006 9:19 pm Posts: 1761 Location: Canada
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Ecliptica wrote: Church Or Hell
A church a place of god or sin Ones soul cannot really tell For sin has been commited On this very floor that god is supossed to protect Supossed to bless with the paint of happyness and faith
Along time ago the sin The blood of the sacred one was spiled on this very floor For all to see Then marked with the stone of rest
As the Sacred one of the moon The Sun And of earth The three sacred animals were victom to a false faith
There blood was spiled by the dagger of life The first animal to fade to ash Was the unicorn for it was the sacred animal of the earth Next was the lion for it was the sacred animal of the sun Finaly was the Wolf for it was the sacred animal of the moon
The dagger spiled there blood on the tarnished floor The red cold hearted sin of the sacred animals fate They fallowd the false faith They fallowd god but they were turned to ash Because of this faith that has been fake since the beginning of time
The sacred animals were nailed to crosses There blood driped on the floor like rain The little girl would dance in the rain of blood She would sing the song of sin and eternal hell Her black eyes and her evil expressions would drive the world insain
The cycle has been complete The blood of the sacred animals The sin commitited on the place of holy blessing Were all the keys to open the gate to the demonic realm A hell for all to feel and see
Hell arose this nice calm place Now all that I see is hell all around me Blood being spilt Life being saceficed
All of this began When a false faith was born When the church with the holy cross Was not really a chruch but the way to eternal hell
So now I ask is it Church or Hell?
Writin By Ecliptica.
This poem is how I feel about churches, because of a reasson that I will not share because it will only mess and horrofy the minds of people, it will bring you into my world of a tarnished truth.
Holy crap... I never realized how dark this was.
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Ecliptica
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 11:43 am |
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Joined: Thu May 11, 2006 9:19 pm Posts: 1761 Location: Canada
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Whitewolf(uk) wrote: It is kinda dark...but still awesome, nice Eclip. 
Thanks I think^^........ Everytime I read it I get a bad feeling.. hmmmm...
_________________ Heaven is said to be the most euphoric happyness, but so is love, what if there one in the same? if so then lovers die together in a second heaven^^

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