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Post subject: Re: Balto IV: JoR  Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 11:01 am |
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Post subject: Re: Balto IV: JoR Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 10:33 pm |
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Well written. Some of the jokes/insinuations are too adult for the target audience of the Balto movies, but speaking as an adult I think it's great.  I like where it's heading and I like that you've brought Aleu back.
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Post subject: Re: Balto IV: JoR Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 4:19 pm |
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Post subject: Re: Balto IV: JoR Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 3:38 pm |
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Balto_freak wrote: Lone Wolf_fanwriter wrote: I like where this is going. The dialogue is very believable, and this could easily be made into Balto 2.5 or 4 (or even a re-done Balto 3). Steele's dialogue just makes the scene in most cases, though the dog with a Chicago accent made me laugh.  Keep it up! -LWf Well, what do you mean by "just makes the scene"? lol ^^ What I meant was that it is often Steele's dialogue that helps the most to paint a picture of what's happening, becuase he's just so blunt. "Makes the scene" was meant litterally: Steele's dialogue really makes (creates) the scene (in the mind's eye). I hope that cleared things up. -LWf
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Post subject: Re: Balto IV: JoR Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 4:17 pm |
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Post subject: Re: Balto IV: JoR Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 5:26 pm |
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Post subject: Re: Balto IV: JoR Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 9:06 pm |
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