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(That's fine, but what about characters from the first rp like Renesmey (sp), and the rest made by other people unless we don't give them character pages)

Karba watched as everything unfolded behind him, but he was too far away to stop it. He stood there in shock, unable to move.
Shar started to run after Darla, but tripped on an old root and went sprawling to the floor. She lay there, whimpering, as Darla closed in on Dawn. I'm sorry Dawn she thought.
Brahma ran over with Angel, his fear and surprise at how his children were acting stopped him from intervening.
In one movement, Jaka rolled to his front and stood up. He saw red, and charged at Darla, ramming her from the side. He knocked her to the ground and stood over her, pinning her down with his weight and snapping at her neck. 'You...leave...her...ALONE!' he growled between each bite.

(Yeh sounds good, but it would have to be a little more descriptive than just what you did, but they were just examples so it doesn't really matter. So the stories would be like brief histories for them just to show you their lives, but how they meet would be in the actual fanfic. I was re-reading the first rp and they meet because Brahma's leg was hurting him again, all the dogs had already met and they had a deer, so we could extend the hunting scene/the meeting scene etc, and we should send each other the links for each character's character page. Also right at the end of the rp I found I have made a mistake, we said that Ginger ran off with Caliban to get married, but we can just say that he left her for dead or she found a better guy or something.
I did a really good render of Angel and Brahma, but that was before you changed her design, all I did was make her colours lighter but I will post it up.
Oh and I am going to do Jaka a character page as well.)

Karba bowed his head. This wasn't the way it was meant to happen, we were meant to find a den and start a pack, none of this would have happened if Jaka hadn't come along he thought sadly, shaking his head.
Brahma darted forwards, rushing past Angel towards his daughter.
Shar watching in amazement and shock as Jaka turned on Darla. Her mind was trying to find sense in all of this, it just seemed so wrong. He is only protecting Dawn, but he isn't a killer, he wouldn't kill Darla...would he? she thought.
Jaka felt something tugging on his fur, and through the burning red he could hear and see he heard that beautiful voice, the one that had always kept him strong and good. He stopped snapping at Darla, and watched as she lay there gasping. He turned his head around and saw Dawn tugging on him, begging him not to kill Darla. 'Why not?' he whispered, his voice cracking with tears, 'she was trying to kill you.'

(I suppose, but we can always add in other characters, so we could change Ginger into a wolf or something, or the deer could already be dead and they just found it, and they would be all 'ewww, yuck, gross' it could be funny . But hey it is up to you. That is a good idea to make all our posts more descriptive, and I will post up the render...right now.)

Karba looked up at his brother, all his emotions he felt had drained away, he felt hollow and empty. He nodded slowly at his brother's words, but refused to believe them, family didn't cause all this, it was impossible. He stared out into the darkness of the woods, night was falling again, so soon. He started to think about all that had happened since they left home, and if anything could have been changed. If Jaka hadn't come with us, how would this have ended up? he wondered.

Jaka was a little stung by Darla's words, even though she was not talking to him. He felt a shred of comfort as Dawn walked over to him, the softness of her fur brushing against his own dark red wiry fur almost made him tingle in delight, but this was a sad occasion. 'I love you to, I always have' he whispered back to Dawn, putting his head close to hers and without anyone seeing he gave her the tinniest lick on the cheek. He stood, watching Darla just in case, and feeling that he needed to be Dawn's protector right now, friend and lover could come later. He didn't move when Angel came to take Dawn away, if she wanted to be somewhere, then no force on earth could move her, that much he had learnt.

Brahma had stopped a short distance away, listening to everything. Age had made his wiser and mellow, and he knew when to watch, and when to interfere. He walked slowly over to Angel, and placed a paw on hers. 'Our children have been through a lot Angel, and they are old enough to know about love because they are experiencing it right now' he said softly and gently, staring his mate deep in the eyes. 'You won't lose her, this is her choice.'

(Sorry but I meant to post up the render but I was a) at the wrong computer, b) had to go somewhere before I could swap computers.
Here it is though, and I threw in one I did of Brahma and Shar just so you can see)

'Angel, I more or less went through the same thing, I was in love with a wolfess when I was very young, but she was very beautiful and popular soall the other young males had fallen for her too, my dad told me I was too young and to grow up and get my head out of the clouds, I never even got to speak to her' Brahma said, 'but she was never as beautiful as you.' He took a few step forwards and positioned himself between Darla and Jaka, pushing his daughter back with one paw. 'Darla' he said sternly, 'you are happy, happy without him, all he has brought you is misery, he destroyed your pack, you don't need him.'
'Maybe' Jaka replied to Dawn. He stumbled slightly when Darla shoved him, but tried not to show how nervous and angry he was. When he heard Brahma's words his fury bubbled, threatening to spill out, but he knew he was just trying to calm Darla down and get her to stop. 'We should go' he said, to no one in particular but loud enough so that everyone could hear.

(I don't know how to do it on another program, but I have photoshop, it might work on another program but you get the polygonal lasso tool, select the area you want, and then fill it with the right colour, I also trace round the outside of things like the outline and extra bits of fur or lines that are important)

'It's ok Angel' Brahma whispered softly into his mate's ear. He knew this was a hard time, it was far him as well, but it was their choice, they chose their own path. He watched Jaka and Darla closely, looking for signs of conflict.
'They will be ok, but we should leave now, we can come back later to see them, or you could by yourself, I get a feeling I'm not wanted here' Jaka said in a low voice. He walked up to Angel and Brahma, trying not to show his fear, and slowly spoke to them. 'I wish to...to...to take your daughter Dawn with me, as...well...hopefully my future mate, if that is ok with you' he said.

(I could send you a tutorial with screenshots on how to render in a pm, but it is actually quite simple, and I haven't even started Brahma's story yet, I am making everyone's character pages first)

Brahma nodded at Jaka. 'I am happy that you two feel you should be together, but...' he started, and put his head close to Jaka's so no one else could hear. 'But if you let anything happen to her, or if you hurt her, then I will hunt you down and kill you myself, you have my word. And never, I mean never, show your face at my den again, I will not consider you my son-in-law, but I will consider you my daughter's mate' he whispered, and then stood up straight again. 'Go now, my daughter, I will miss you' he said, giving Dawn a quick lick.
Jaka listened to Brahma's words without changing his expression, he knew threats would come and he had worked himself up to accepting them. If it meant he could be with Dawn, he would listen to as many threats as needed. 'We will go, thank you' he said, bowing his head at Brahma and Angel. He walked towards Dawn, feeling everyone watch him as he went, but he ignored it, he was the outcast now, the one no one wanted except Dawn. 'Come on then, let's go' he said to Dawn.
Karba watched everything silently. He was still a bit confused as to how all this had happened, one moment everyone hated one another and now Dawn and Jaka were mates and were leaving. I can't just let my sister go off by herself, Jaka isn't the strongest wolf, they could get hurt he thought. He watched them wander into the forest, and then he began to follow them slowly.

(I use the mouse for rendering except to draw around the outlines of the characters, but tell you what, if you give me a detailed description of what they all look like then I will render them for you, you just write out the description for them. Also will you link all the character pages you do, and I will do the same.)

Jaka looked down at Dawn, suddenly realising this wasn't games like before, they really were alone. 'I suppose we could go back to the den we found before, it seemed nice and dry and safe' he said, giving Dawn a quick lick on the top of her head. He took a deep breath to calm his nerves, and watched the crimson sun set through the trees. Very soon the darkness that he had come to know so well because of being left alone by his parents a lot would claim the forest, and he would be left to protect Dawn. He feared for her life more than anything, and he would fight to the death to save her, a life was valuable.
Karba spotted Jaka and Dawn up ahead, but tried to stay hidden. He wanted to go with them, he felt he needed to, Jaka was not as strong as him, sure his heart was in the right place, but you couldn't win a battle with just heart. He watched them talk, keeping his breathing and movements quiet. They needed a den, night was approaching quickly and that was when the real dangers came out.