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That's a good idea, I'll do that in the next few days. Btw, your comic page looks great! I love it! Like Opus said, once it gets inked and colored it'll really blow people away.

Since I'm not an artist, I don't know the best way to actually produce the comic pages... What I'm trying to say is that the artists (You, Opus, ArChip and Wolfjedisamuel) should get together and decide on the best way to actually produce the art. (Whether like an assembly line where each artists has a specific task like line-art, inking or coloring, or whether each artists does their own artworks from start to finish.) I would think the assembly line method would result in more consistent looking art, but that's really for the artists to decide. I just feel like I'm out of my element making technical art decisions...


She looks great! Both of them do! I'm glad to see you making art again and I hope your mom's doing well!

Well everybody, I have more to say on this thread and others, but I had about three hours of sleep last night and it's getting hard to assemble a coherent sentence, so I think I'm gonna call it a night and finish posting tomorrow.

Hi again all! I know I've been out of action for awhile...looking quickly around the board it seems like others have been in the same boat. I was busy the last few weeks, but now I have some time and am working to complete the (hopefully) final edit of the script so we can finish that part of the process. 07xB, hopefully I'll have something sent to you by the end of the day today. I'll also post it online if anyone's interested.

I have a question for y'all:
-I was thinking of possibly changing Griffith's name to something more descriptive. I know "Griffith" has always been the working name but I thought it would be cool if we come up with something that would hint at his affiliation with money. I was thinking to have Griffith be his first name and give him a descriptive last name. A couple of examples of "descriptive" names from the series: Karnage, Cloudkicker. Or maybe people like the name as it is. Anyone have any thoughts/suggestions? The same goes with Jarrett I guess.

Hello Phylogeny! Yeah, we've all been pretty busy also, but hey, we do what we can, right? Feel free to change the names as you see fit, I trust your judgment. I'll make a more detailed post(s) later tonight or tomorrow. I have a lot of catching up to do on the project.

I see your point. It should be something with a double meaning, since he potrays himself as something he's not. Something with a positive meaning and a negative meaning. Or, being he's a conman, maybe having an assumed last name he uses in cons.

As for Jarrett...I'm stumped, this kinda think isn't my strong suit.

How does 'Dollar' sound like? I got the idea after recalling the televangelist 'Creflo Dollar.'

I have a question too, it's prob the same as what every1 asked. When the scripts done, it's going to be given to us artists to be worked on?

Hello everybody here!
Here is the picture to the Ep.1,p.8,when some of cargo falling in the water.
"Molly: Uh-oh.His cargo went bye-bye".

Poor Rebecca! Love it Archip! Are we going off the list that I made of scenes? If so I will get started on it. I'll sketch a real quick layout of what I think that everything should look like and go from there.

@All: I completed some edits to the script of the 2nd pilot and sent something over to 0x7B today. 0x7B, should I go ahead and post it as a PDF or do you want to wait until you've had a chance to look at it/make changes yourself? I don't want to go overboard with putting too many drafts out there. Let me know what you decide.

@Archip: Very nice picture!

Nice art, only thing I can think is maybe change the mouth somewhat, makes her look kinda happy how it is. Other than that, excellent drawing.

Suggestions:

Griffin's last name

"Glibber" to be glib means: to marked by ease and fluency in speaking or writing often to the point of being insincere or deceitful <a glib politician>

"Dollar" idea: um . . . chips, buck, mite, wad, mint, wampum, lucre, coinage

Jarett's suggestion: He is a superstiouscious, violent, vindictive, and destructive. Let me think on this.

I copied that list, thinking how to draw some of these scenes too.Will be glad to see the layouts of some of them, it can help very much now trying to draw Jarret and correct/finish 2nd scetch (scene is not from the list).

p.s.
Only my thoughts,- guess Jarret looks good (on Eslipse's picture), but seems to be veeeeery human-like.Or not?

Where's the list of scenes?

Archip, that is a beautiful illustration and it works well for that scene. I agree that maybe her expression could be changed to make her look just a bit more disgruntled? Also, you draw Molly so perfectly!

JerRocks2Day-
post1169973.html#p1169973 here

Godzillawolf & Syrena-
Ok
Thanks.

I'm sorry, I guess I overlooked this question... Yes, we're going off your list of scenes. Actually, we should prioritize the more pivotal scenes to be done first. Also the artists should get together and divide up the illustrations and decide on what art methods will be used.

About the names... I don't know, I'm not that great at coming up with clever names, but I'll give it some thought.