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Post subject:  Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 6:08 pm |
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silver wolf wrote: Suka wrote: My teacher took a poll today on all the student on why some of them hated poetry so much, and here's what she came up with:
1.) It forces the reader the think "outside the box"
2.) The content matter is almost always...cheesy.
3.) It's confusing to read and understand
4.) Some students think that poetry HAS TO rhyme
5.) The construction of a poem is too hard
Those were the top 5 reasons... Pethetic reassions LOL!!!!!! Hahaha, yeah!! I had to laugh at numbers 1 and 4 in particular...
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Post subject: Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 6:56 pm |
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silver wolf wrote: Suka wrote: My teacher took a poll today on all the student on why some of them hated poetry so much, and here's what she came up with:
1.) It forces the reader the think "outside the box"
2.) The content matter is almost always...cheesy.
3.) It's confusing to read and understand
4.) Some students think that poetry HAS TO rhyme
5.) The construction of a poem is too hard
Those were the top 5 reasons... Pethetic reassions LOL!!!!!! yea  ...i know that poety doesn't have to ryme,but probaly 90% of mine will, becasue i just realy like the way it sounds.....but yea, that is funny
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Post subject: Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 8:06 pm |
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That's what I hate...People think poetry has to rhyme. It doesn't! Those are all stupid reasons, and no wonder some people are so boring in writing, they don't like to "think outside the box". It's mostly about cheesey stuff? Grr...>< This is why I never show anyone at my school my poetry, except my one friend who always finds her way to look at my writings...-_- But people will laugh because my stuff is stupid...-_- Mostly cheesy..I just know they will...
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silver wolf
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Post subject: Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 10:16 pm |
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Suka wrote: silver wolf wrote: Suka wrote: My teacher took a poll today on all the student on why some of them hated poetry so much, and here's what she came up with:
1.) It forces the reader the think "outside the box"
2.) The content matter is almost always...cheesy.
3.) It's confusing to read and understand
4.) Some students think that poetry HAS TO rhyme
5.) The construction of a poem is too hard
Those were the top 5 reasons... Pethetic reassions LOL!!!!!! Hahaha, yeah!! I had to laugh at numbers 1 and 4 in particular... LOL!!!!!!!! yeah me too those are the ones that stood out the most LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post subject: Posted: Fri May 05, 2006 3:38 am |
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Suka wrote: silver wolf wrote: Suka wrote: My teacher took a poll today on all the student on why some of them hated poetry so much, and here's what she came up with:
1.) It forces the reader the think "outside the box"
2.) The content matter is almost always...cheesy.
3.) It's confusing to read and understand
4.) Some students think that poetry HAS TO rhyme
5.) The construction of a poem is too hard
Those were the top 5 reasons... Pethetic reassions LOL!!!!!! Hahaha, yeah!! I had to laugh at numbers 1 and 4 in particular... Hehe, I don't have to worry about number one, I think out of the box all the time, lol And I know that the poem doesn't have to ryme, but I personally think it sounds better  
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Post subject: Posted: Fri May 05, 2006 3:59 am |
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Dreaming Wolf wrote: Suka wrote: silver wolf wrote: Suka wrote: My teacher took a poll today on all the student on why some of them hated poetry so much, and here's what she came up with:
1.) It forces the reader the think "outside the box"
2.) The content matter is almost always...cheesy.
3.) It's confusing to read and understand
4.) Some students think that poetry HAS TO rhyme
5.) The construction of a poem is too hard
Those were the top 5 reasons... Pethetic reassions LOL!!!!!! Hahaha, yeah!! I had to laugh at numbers 1 and 4 in particular... Hehe, I don't have to worry about number one, I think out of the box all the time, lol And I know that the poem doesn't have to ryme, but I personally think it sounds better Ok now thats a positive aditude, well said.
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Sita~Liger
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Post subject: Posted: Fri May 05, 2006 9:05 pm |
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BlackwolfWSP wrote: Well, though you didn't mean to, Sita, in a way what you said came out a little rude. Like you were saying that she didn't do something enough...or something...I dunno.... Don't worry.. I dunno what I'm saying. ^^ But I think it's a beautifully written poem, a lil' sad, but hey! ^^ wait what?..what did i do?..*lowers ears* and i made one ill just post my new one later
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Post subject: Posted: Sat May 06, 2006 1:17 am |
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Sita~Liger wrote: BlackwolfWSP wrote: Well, though you didn't mean to, Sita, in a way what you said came out a little rude. Like you were saying that she didn't do something enough...or something...I dunno.... Don't worry.. I dunno what I'm saying. ^^ But I think it's a beautifully written poem, a lil' sad, but hey! ^^ wait what?..what did i do?..*lowers ears* and i made one ill just post my new one later What happand?
I never saw anything wrong with your post, don't feel sorry for your post couse it didn't sound rude and im not sure what she was talking about but don't feel bad couse someone said that it was rude.
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Post subject: Posted: Sat May 06, 2006 10:27 am |
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Black Shimmer wrote: Sita~Liger wrote: Black Shimmer wrote: This really isn't my best, but you have to know that I was half asleep when I wrote this.....I was also really pissed off at someone XP ***************** The pain-filled sorrows, Caressing the guilt of your sensitive heart The gentle whispers, Repeating cruel words inside your head You dare not listen My gloomy eyes, With tears streaming down my face The shining blade, The blade of my anger pierces your spirit Pale Sorrows Your broken spirit, Filled with nothing but pale sorrows Searching, It's hard for you to find them Do they even exist? Though the pale sorrows cease to exist They remind you of the apology you have missed When will you say sorry?  that is like what i write BS..haha cpt i usually go more in depth Well, maybe could you give me a little advice then? I don' see anything general about it. It creates a lot of imagery.
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Post subject: Posted: Mon May 08, 2006 10:47 am |
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HydraPhalanx wrote:
Very Beutiful, I really loved them.
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Emotion Clash
So many emotions are running through me
All clashing and forming as one egenced me
Taking my life away
Down the silver road I lay
Lost in thought lost in the middle of the clashing emotions
Pain so dark so deep
The dark has me raped in a cocune of hate
Of lifeless dreams
Combined with the eternal flames of hell and of sin
Sin witch man have comittied
Ending life for entertanment
For our own depressing needs
Not right but we do it anyway
Not even the purest prisims
That fall only when the sky is dark
The silver droplets are not silver anymore
They make no splashes if blinding life anymore
The droplets are now blood
The blood of the ones we hurt
For the feeling of fun
Not even the beautiful howl of the wolf
Can bring back whats lost
All the wolf can do is sit and howl
Sit and be painted like everything eles
With blood
The war inside of me
Is over powering me
Taking my life away
Taking it to hell
For the sin
The eternal sin
Life is ment to be lived
Not taking away
Only when the time is right do you fall
Under the soil you'll sleep
Forever
The result is death
For the Emotion Clash.
Writin
By Silver Wolf.
This poem is very sad, not one hint of kindnes is in these words.
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Post subject: Posted: Fri May 19, 2006 5:24 am |
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Sita~Liger wrote: Black Shimmer wrote: This really isn't my best, but you have to know that I was half asleep when I wrote this.....I was also really pissed off at someone XP ***************** The pain-filled sorrows, Caressing the guilt of your sensitive heart The gentle whispers, Repeating cruel words inside your head You dare not listen My gloomy eyes, With tears streaming down my face The shining blade, The blade of my anger pierces your spirit Pale Sorrows Your broken spirit, Filled with nothing but pale sorrows Searching, It's hard for you to find them Do they even exist? Though the pale sorrows cease to exist They remind you of the apology you have missed When will you say sorry? that is like what i write BS..haha cpt i usually go more in depth When I said you sounded a little rude it was when I was talking about the thing I quoted above. It'd be better if you gave her some advice rather than comparing your poetry to hers. That was all I was saying...It just, someone can take what you said a wrong way...I know I would if that was my poem. I mean, if you're gonna say that you "go more in depth" with your poems, try and show her or give her some advice as how she could improve. Like BlackShimmer asked earlier. What you said was like an insult to her poem, in my opinion. I dunno if BlackShimmer feels that way. But I'm just saying that you should watch what you say in response to people's good work.
But...nevermind...I'm bound to have not made sense, or got something wrong....
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Post subject: Posted: Fri May 19, 2006 7:31 am |
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I wrote this a long time ago:
Boo bah beep boo blee blah bee
Bah boo boo bah beek bork ee
Keek kak coe no c o t
For no nee gah kree pore dee
I dunno, I was bored
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