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(Sounds good, can't wait to read it )

Jaka sat there, not knowing what to do. 'But...I don't...I didn't want this, I just wanted a family' he whispered so no one could hear. He watched, wide eyed, as the two females fought.
Shar snarled. 'Dawn, you are just so prissy and 'oh look at me I'm the best', it really annoys me' she growled, and then leapt into the fray, snapping at her sister's neck and legs.
Karba stood up, and took in a deep breath. 'EVERYONE, STOP NOW!' he yelled, his lips pulled back into a snarl. He waited for everyone to quieten down before continuing 'I can't believe you all, you are fighting over a MUTT, yes he happens to be the only male not from our family, but there are others, so stop fighting NOW or I will kick all of you from the pack and none of you will see Jaka EVER.'

(Btw I am looking forward to reading the first bit of your fanfic, just in case you forgot, I am like this whenever someone writes a story, my friend did and I didn't stop nagging her to read it )

Shar stomped off, back towards the den they slept in last night. Who does she think she is, this is ridiculous, Jaka should be mine, why is it that I never get what I want she thought angrily, hot tears rushing to her eyes.
Karba scowled. He turned to Jaka. 'Go and find Dawn, bring her back here, I need a meeting with everyone, Trooper can you go and get Shar' he said, and shot a glare at Darla that said run away and I will beat you to within an inch of your life.
Jaka nodded, and set off to look for Dawn. He though he heard a roar, and in a panic he rushed towards it. What he saw almost made him throw up, Dawn was lying against a rock, injured, and a huge black bear was moving towards her. A growl erupted from Jaka's throat without him meaning to, and his eyes blazed in anger. He walked up to the bear, who turned to him and roared, and Jaka growled back. The bear dropped to all fours, and Jaka rushed at him, leaping on to its back and tearing at the bear's throat. The bear roared angrily, reaching up to swipe at Jaka, and with burst of speed he didn't know he had, Jaka clambered off its back an underneath it. He tore at the bear's belly, and all the time he was thinking what am I doing, this isn't me, I am not controlling my body. The bear reared up again, and Jaka took his chance. He darted out, and then slammed into the bear, sending it rolling onto its back. But after it fell it carried on rolling, as they were on a slight slope, and then all of a sudden it disappeared over the edge of a cliff. (Meh, couldn't think of another way to kill it) Jaka rushed over to Dawn, nudging her gently with his nose.

(The character thing sounds cool, and YES I would LOVE to help you make this into a fanfic, I love this rp sooooo much, and I have already started to draw up Brahma, I was going to give him a proper character page so you could do the same with all the other characters, and it's a shame about your other fanfic)

Shar looked up, startled, she hadn't heard Trooper walk up to her. She nodded solemnly, trying to blink her tears away. She got up slowly, and buried her head in her brother's shoulder. 'Why did he have to come anyway, we were fine without him' she sobbed. As Darla approached she shot her a smile, whilst pretending to sob even louder.
'Oh thank goodness you are alright' he said, but saw how bruised and battered she was and gulped. 'You are going to be fine, we need to get you somewhere safe' he said, and thought for a few moments. The den isn't right, I don't want to take her to where there are others, but where then he thought, and then he suddenly thought of something. I can take her to the cherry tree by the lake, where I first saw Tinel, that is very safe and quiet. 'Come on Dawn, I am going to take you somewhere safe' he said, gently easing her onto his back. When he was sure she was secure, he started to slowly walk towards the lake.
Karba sighed, this pack was falling apart, maybe they shouldn't have left home so early.

(What age are all of them again, is it like a year old or something)

(We can make a shared username, but I think it would be easier not to because it would mean that we could never be on at the same time, and having separate ones means that we can pm each other. I had an idea on how we write it, we take turns writing the original draft of a chapter (so I do 1 chapter, you do 1 chapter, I do 1 chapter...etc), and we swap ideas on what to put in it first, and then we keep sending it to each other and making little changes, spelling checks etc. I don't mind what we call the fan fic, but I think we should keep the Forest Angel's name, at least as a working title. We need to make a list of all the characters so far, and then split it up between us for designing/character pages, and maybe change a few character's names. And with the starting point, it should probably start before Angel is abandoned, that way it introduces it well, but we can talk about that later)

Shar nodded, still pretending to be sobbing, and then started to head towards Karba. Now we can get rid of that little...eugh I don't even have a name for him, he just waltzes in here and tries to take over she thought angrily, but inside she knew the truth was not that Jaka was bad, it was her and Darla, they had fought Dawn and tried to get rid of Jaka. No matter, soon we won't have to worry about him.
Karba just nodded as he watched Darla walk off into the woods. 'Maybe we should just stay as a family, or maybe even go back home' he muttered, but even saying the thought out-loud didn't make it seem any less stupid.
Jaka flinched as Darla yelled at him. He was trying to make sense of everything, but nothing was clear anymore. Does Dawn hate me? And why does Shar and Darla hate me? Am I being kicked out of the pack, and why won't Dawn come with me, I only want to help her he thought, and almost instinctively he curled himself into a tight little ball. He could feel tears come to his eyes, and his body started to shake.

(Usernames yep, that sounds good
Characters what I meant was maybe changing the names of the characters that weren't ours, just so that no one gets upset, or we could ask them if we could use them
Name sounds good to me
Writing your idea sounds good but what exactly do you mean, do we write it up as a fanfic and post it, or do we write it on word or something
Beginning I am going to save the posts as well, so that we both have a copy. And we can look at the rp, but as a good introduction I think we should start with how Angel gets kicked out, so everyone knows why she is looking for a pack
Character pages we could do renders as well, I am not very good at them yet but I'm getting better, and we should do character pages for our own characters as well, I am going to post Brahma's up soon
Other when we have got going on the fanfic, would we post it on the main BS website, or on the forums under Balto fanfics or other fanfics)

Karba jumped, he hadn't heard Trooper sit next to him. 'We all need to go home, we were stupid to think we could survive on our own without mum and dad's help' he said, and sighed when he saw Dawn and Darla.
Shar looked at Dawn in shock. Mauled by a bear, we didn't want it to get that bad she thought.
Jaka uncurled himself for a few seconds to watch Dawn leave. 'Don't go, I need you, I...I love you' he whispered, but she was already gone. The bitter cold wind whipped his face, pulling his tears away harshly and making his eyes water.

(The renders are good, I do have a first attempt at Brahma (literally first attempt, my first ever render), and I have photoshop so I don't think I need Gimp. I think maybe with Angel you should change her colours slightly, otherwise people might not see any difference.
Character pages: I wasn't saying don't free draw, but renders are easier and quicker and you can always swap the pictures when you have done a good free draw, I myself am rubbish at free drawing
Writing: Should I be the writer, I have a lot of spare time, and I like your idea but it is basically the same as mine , are we posting on the forums or on the main site though
Other: I want to get the fanfic started as soon as possible, but I want to at least get the main character's pages up first (Brahma/Angel/Calliban) for the first part of the fanfic)

Karba nodded, and walked after his brother and sisters.
Shar didn't say anything as she walked at the back of the procession.
Jaka uncurled himself, the wind had died down and didn't sting his eyes anymore. I have to go after her, otherwise I will never see her again, I couldn't live without her he thought, and stood up almost boldly, but still feeling awful. He stared in the direction Darla and Dawn had disappeared in, and ran after the group. It wasn't long before he spotted them, and he called 'Dawn, wait!'

(So whoes character pages should I put up, obviously Brahma and Calliban, but anyone else in the fanfic that wasn't private, and who will do the first bit of writing)
Karba ran up to his mother, oblivious of the commotion behind him. 'Mum!' he called, burying his head into her fur, 'I've missed you so much.'
Shar looked a little confused, and then understood what Darla was trying to do. I don't want to kill him she thought, and I can't let Darla kill him. She ran over to Darla and Jaka, pulling her sister away from Jaka by grabbing her scruff.
Jaka was bowled over instantly, and lay there panting as Darla snapped at him. When Shar came over he nearly started to cry, knowing he was going to die, and he shut his eyes. But he felt the weight of Darla decrease slightly, and when he opened his eyes he saw Shar trying to tug Darla off him.
Brahma walked out of the cave. 'Did I hear Trooper and Karba' he said, grinning as he saw his two sons. 'My boys!' he said, and playfully batted Trooper, and then Karba. 'Where are your sisters, I hope they are ok.'