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Jake Razor · **Posted:** Mon Apr 21, 2008 6:19 pm

Balto_freak wrote:

Well, the next three scenes are going to be building plot, I've decided today, so that reaction may have to wait a while longer. Sorry.

Just a suggestion, sometimes it's good to keep things going on a level plain, so to speak, and then throw in a wild twist. Take, for instance, then ending of my fanfic "Wilderness Hunt Part One." I can't access it right now, but you can look it up or I can bring the section here later if you desire.

Balto_freak · **Joined:** Tue Oct 23, 2007 5:11 pm **Posts:** 369

xXFamous Last WordsXx · **Posted:** Thu Apr 24, 2008 3:29 pm

Wolf_Bassist wrote:

I like what I see here. :thumright:

I agree with Wolf_Bassist here, can't wait to see something happen with this whole "Aleu" thing.

ShebaDove {wolf} · **Posted:** Thu Apr 24, 2008 4:05 pm

Great story! I like having Stella in it, I am one of the few who like her do you?
and I wolld love to see Aleu........
I await the next installment, unfortunately my internet connetion is uncertanfrom early May

Grey Wolf 777 · **Posted:** Thu Apr 24, 2008 4:34 pm

Wow! That was actually very, very good. You sure do know how to make a script for a possible Balto 4. I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of it. Really good job! :thumleft:

Balto_freak · **Joined:** Tue Oct 23, 2007 5:11 pm **Posts:** 369

xXFamous Last WordsXx · **Posted:** Sun Apr 27, 2008 10:33 am

Well I don't read a lot of Balto IV fics, I read more of SteelexJenna fics, but yours is pretty good.

Gemini Syndrome · **Posted:** Sun Apr 27, 2008 7:40 pm

This one's looking fantastic so far! hurry up and get the next scene out!
this is way WAY too good to wait for!

Also I really really REALLY like the script style formating your using here! keep it up!