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Cobaltié
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Post subject: Re: Kiona and Achak Fanfic Teaser/Contest! WINNER POSTED!  Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 6:11 am |
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Aw, just as I was about to edit my entry too with new arts and ideas since my one sucked ;(. Lucky Tikky tho, congrats!
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Post subject: Re: Kiona and Achak Fanfic Teaser/Contest! WINNER POSTED! Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 10:24 pm |
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Chapter four released! See first post!
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Post subject: Re: Kiona and Achak Fanfic Teaser! NEW CHAPTER! (October 4th) Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 10:05 am |
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Really nice preview. I would like to read the whole story when it comes out. When it does, let me know. And sorry I couldn't look at the pictures.  I'm sending this message from school and the page was blocked. I'll look at them when I get home.
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Post subject: Re: Kiona and Achak Fanfic! CHAPTER 6 TEASER! (November 17th) Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 8:51 pm |
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CHAPTER 6 TEASER! (Nov. 17th)
It was then the red female was briefly distracted as pain shot through her. The next pup was quickly on its way, forcing Kiona to focus more on it. Olathe’s calm soothing voice helped at least some, telling her to calm her breathing and stop struggling. With a strained cry, soon after there was a new pup brought into the world. Instinctively, the hybrid turned to check on it, even as exhausted as she was becoming, but barely moved before a paw came to keep her down. It confused and distressed the female. Why was the older wolf keeping her from her newborn? Then she heard it…or lack of hearing something. Usually pups would immediately start crying out once they hit open air. But the silence that surrounded the cave was deafening. Kiona’s body went rigid.
No…oh no… Thought the bright silver-colored wolf, as her blue eyes stared down at the second newborn cubs still body. Oh please not again. Inwardly hoping for the best, the older female bent down to the smaller’s body, gently nudging it with her nose, with no response. Acting quickly, she then began to lick at it, trying to stimulate the tiny form. Now Kiona was beginning to struggle again, and Olathe tried to keep her still.
“Ayashi, quickly, come hold Kiona down.” The poor dear, having to go through all this. It was all so unfair.
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Post subject: Re: Kiona and Achak Fanfic! CHAPTER 6 TEASER! (November 17th) Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 8:59 pm |
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You already know what my opinion on this is.
<3<3<3:D:D:D
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Awsome job. 
