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Did you like the story?
Yes 96%  96%  [ 25 ]
No 4%  4%  [ 1 ]
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 7:36 pm 
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This is the best man yeah all of yours are the best I can't wait for more... though this was a very tragic story with emotional development...

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After a long time since I planned I finally managed to finish reading it. It was beautiful. Almost made me cry when I read the lyrics to Celine Dion's song, even though I've listened to it many times before. It just blended perfectly....This has got to be the best Fanfic I've ever read. Magnificent job! Hope there will be more like this one in the near future.


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PostPosted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 1:24 pm 
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One word I can find can describe this fic dude.. INCREDIBLE! I've always wondered how you would've handled this subject and I can say it was quite impressive.. great work and look forward to next time! Ciao!

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I..... I can't even think of what to say...
It was so beautiful, every single sentence, every single moment was captivating! I have never read a more touching story yet in my life... The end... My God, the end... It moved me to tears :cry: , along with the lyrics to "My Heart Will Go On". Absolutely phenominal! I loved everything about it. I'm at a loss of words now... I'm going to remember this story forever! Superior work, well done! :D

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Dude your the god of fan fics !!! I cant read enough of your fan fics!I love when love goes sour, [fave] a broken trust, when things are not as they seem, when a mistake is made, all good things..., must come to an end, and though we be apart!!!!!!!!!!



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 Post subject: Completely agreed!
PostPosted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 12:27 pm 
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Completely agreed dude.. someone tell me if there's anything this dude can't write?! bacause I don't think there IS anything he can't!

Bottom line: YOU ROCK RTW!

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Juuchan17 wrote:
(And welcome back! I've missed ya! I'm still working on my fics, but it's the writer's block again . . . *sigh*)

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writers block huh? (i wonder if it effects RTW?)

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I would think the awnser's probably not..XD

(alright.. back to seriousness everyone! )

One thing that seemed a little weird now that I noticed it was the date this fic was set in..1941! seeing as it was almost 25 years after the orignal storyline went down! I actaully started cracking up as soon as I read that just because it seemed a little out-there but the more I actually thought about it the more sense it made.. don't worry dude! everything's cool here.. just thought that bit was a little interesting..

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Yeah, I thought that was kind of wierd too, but hey this is fiction, some things don't have to make sense!
*does happy fiction freedom dance*
I hope Rotramel comes back soon...

Godspeed, RTW.
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Hey Guys!

I can explain the age thing.
Check this out!

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Outback mongrel could be oldest dog

CANBERRA, Australia -- A 26-year-old mongrel living with an Aboriginal family in Australia's Outback has the potential to become the world's oldest living dog, a newspaper reported Sunday.

Jerry, an Australian cattle dog-bull terrier cross, will next month turn 27 - the equivalent of 189 years for a human - said Royal Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals veterinarian Honey Nelson in Sydney's Daily Telegraph.

"He will be 27 ... years in August - I have no doubt at all," Nelson reportedly said after examining Jerry. "He could push on to 28, going by his good body condition."

The oldest living dog in the 2004 edition of "Guinness World Records" is Butch, a 27-year-old beagle in the U.S. state of Virginia.

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I actually thought that Balto and Jenna should live a long life, so I looked up the oldest dog in the world.

I agree, a stretch, but hey, it's fiction.

As for Baltowolf's question,
YES! Writers block effects even me.
I'm actually trying to work through it right now with "Balto: Two Hearts Racing". I'm about half way done, and *should* have it done in the next few weeks. For those Steele fanatics out there, I'll tell you that Steele is in it (It's kind of a "reflections on the past" story) and he's as rotten as ever!

I also have an idea for a story that will kind of shake up Balto's world.
Those of you that have followed my stories will remember "When a Mistake is Made..." well, let's just say that Balto doesn't know what the end result of that mistake was...

If you don't get it from that hint, I'll tell you.

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it was good, real good. I HATE the stories that have one of the true love people die. . .but this was well-written. You did a good job on it, really. The Only thing I think maybe you could formal-down on is the dialogue, it's really good for a NARRATIVE, but most of the time characters don't use language quite that properly, picture Jenna saying those things, it doesn't QUITE fit. . . but still, this is merely constructive criticism, you did a really good job with it, I'm not demoting it or bashing it. carry on. Oh, would you mind peeking at my two fics about LK and giving your thoughts on them? I'd like to know what you think. it's the What Matters Most and When They Came Home.


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