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Yay! Like this story so I like to see more! Keep up the good work up though!!

sorry about the absence, but the new part will be up tommorow!

I'll wait!

New part!

Jenna droped her tail. Roxy Stared at her like she was crazy. Then Balto spoke up. " Roxy, what's wrong with me being with Jenna?" " Shut the hell up mutt, this is between me and my sister! And Jenna, your crazy if you think I will aprove of this!" "Aprove of what?" Meca said walking over. "My stupid sister has gone off the deep end. She THINKS she's going to be a hybrid's mate." Roxy said growling. " Oh my god, Jenna that's disgusting! Are you nuts?" Meca said eying Balto." Oh my god, what would her pups be like?" "Who knows, this is really disturbing Jenna, your insane!" Roxy said. "Roxy, Meca-" "Shut up ya talking mud ball, what GRAVE did they dig you out of anyway?!" Meca said laughing with a grin that made Balto think of Steele." He needs to crawl back in it. He's not a dog, not a wolf. He doesn't BELONG anywhere, and especially with my little stupid sister." Balto started to growl. Jenna then looked up and got right in her sister's face. " You know Roxy, your just like our mom! The LEAST you could do is try to understand! You don't even know him, and already you want to kill him! The last time I saw you, you wern't this bad, now your just being a Bitch!" Jenna said totally out of character. Balto was shocked. But suddenly he saw Roxy turn violent. She slapped Jenna across the face to the ground, and put her front paws on her chest. Then said "What did you just call me? I'll kill you and him if I feel like it, and there won't be a ***** thing anyone can do. You should be thankful he's not all over the floor in pieces right now." She said growling. She then got up and left. "Let's find the team and go, it smells like mutt in here. I can't have his GRAVE STENCH in my fur. Meca followed. Balto watched Roxy go. " She may look like Jen, but she's not like her at all. This could be a problem..."

that's all for today!

new part is up. read!

WOW ! This is cooler then this!-> !

Next Part!

Roxy walked of, strutting like the show girl she was. She went back to Steele, who called for her. They lay down together, with Steele holding one leg over Roxy, as if to be claiming her. Roxy was in heat, and with Steele as her mate, he had to see to it that no male came near her. She than told Steele about what happened.

(Kaltag and Nerra)
" Nerra! hey!" Kaltag yelled running over. She turned and saw him, then she turned away. " Hey Nerra, didn't you hear me?" Kaltag asked confused. " I'm sorry, do I know you?" Nerra said a little irritatedly. "Oh, I'm sorry, name's Kaltag. Hi!" "Oh, hi. Well what did you want?"


I'll finish in a moment!

read the story! it's posted in sections!

write more!!!!the suspence is killing me!!!!!!!!!

this fic has good potential.

I will try to update today or monday, tommorrow is my b- day, so I may not be on!

thanks

Happy B-Day! And I hope the next part is up soon!

Kaltag and Nerra

"Well, I was wondering if maybe you wanted to,-" "Actually I can't" Nerra said to Kaltag in a worried yet quick voice. "Listen, I have to go, I'll talk to you later, ok?" Nerra said and ran off before Kaltag could stop her. Kaltag, walked off, curious about why Nerra ran away.

Balto and Jenna

"Jen, are you alright?" Balto said trying to comfort Jenna.

I swear, I have writer's block, I'll finish this part tommorow, I promise!

hey! it's a brief update, read it!