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PostPosted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 6:26 pm 
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Wow. Sounds neet....But sorta....weird....but still cool


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 1:43 pm 
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Please continue please it's really good so far!

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 3:40 pm 
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*SheWolf* wrote:
Coninuing chapter one:

"Jenna!?" Balto says aloud as he sniffs the area. "I know that I havent been around to see her lately...but this!?" Balto says as he jumps out of the opened window to go fallow the scent of Jenna. After fallowing her scent, he finally spots her! She doesnt seem to be alone though...somebodies with her! While spying on Jenna's conversation, Balto now realizes who it is! 'Steele!' Balto thought as he bares his fangs but is no noticed by Steele.

"What are you doing here still, wolf dog!?" Steele snapped as his lovely wife Jenna comes up from behind him, being side by side. "Jenna! What are you doing with HIM!?" Balto bellowed as Jenna feels a bit guilty in the inside. "I thought that you were banned from the town of Nome!" Balto took his eyes off her then to his big time rival.

"Is that any of your business filth!" Steele snarls as he and Balto get ready to fight. "Hey, Hey boys...I'll chose who I want to be with." Jenna chimes in as Balto raises his wolf ears up in hope. "I want..." Jenna pauses as he looks to her husband then to Steele. "I want Steele!" She finally finishes her sentance as Balto's ears have gone all the way down in sorrow. "B-B-But why do you want this loser!?" Balto spat as water fills his eyes.

<End of Chapter one>


Chapter two: Broken hearted

As Balto ran so fast with tears coming out of his eyes(heading back to his boat), Kodi notices his father going home being very upset. "Wander whats going on with him?" Kodi asks himself aloud as he goes off to meet him. "DAD!DAD!" Kodi barks as he kept on coming towards his dad. "What's the matter?" Kodi asks, sees his father all torn up inside. "K-Kodi?" He stammered as he whipes away his tears.
"Alright dad..whats going on here?" he asks again as Balto tries to find his voice so that he could talk again. "Y-y-Your mom s-s-split up with m-me!" balto starts bailing again as Kodi looks very shocked.


well im gonna start this chapter agian soon...

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