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Great story, Huttserwolf! You should DEFINATELY continue it! I really liked the names you introduced, both personal names and names for different social ranks in the pack. Well done! Please keep writing! I look forward to reading the rest!

But, yes, I must agree that you should move your story to your own topic. At least that way more people will know about it!!

Sounds great Lonewolf_fanwriter!
I think it'll be good.
I'm just now getting to read "A New Life", so I'll let you know what I think of it as soon as I finish it.
I'm sure it'll be good. (as always)
So you guys liked "When a Mistake is Made" huh?
I was a little afraid of the fan reaction to Balto doing that, but....
I decided to write it anyway.
Great job so far Lonewolf, and I look forward to reading your furture stories!
By the way, I posted my "humanized" version of your story in it's own topic. Should be pretty easy to find. lol
Let me know what you think...
Again, great job, and keep up the great work!

Okay, I've been real busy lately, but I'll post the first chapter asap. By the way, I'm calling it Balto: Betrayal. This should be interesting...

Well, it took me two days, actually more like three hours in two days, to figure this out, but here is the first chapter of Balto: Betrayal. I think I will have Jenna actually cheat on Balto. It makes for a better plot and better complications, both physical and relationship-wise.
Anyway, enjoy, and tell me what you think. I'll respond asap.

To save space on the forums, this fanfic was deleted. But you can read it on the site, in the Fan Fiction section!

LOOKS GREAT!
I like it, it does make you question Jenna's character a bit, hope that gets fixed lol, but...
Wow, it's gonna be a powerful one.
I see you used Applegate.
That's fine by the way.
I only have one suggestion....
Dog's don't really get "married" they just have mates.
Maybe you should change Jenna's remark to...
"I have a mate", or something like that.
It doesn't sound quite so....
silly.
Other than that though, great job, keep up the work, and it's going to kill me to wait for the next parts.
Keep Writing and SEMPER FIDELIS!
- PFC Anthony E. Rotramel, USMC
(Rotramel USMC)

Few words... MORE! MORE! MORE! Need I say more...?

please please pleeassse write more. You left us off at the worst time! Very interesting.

and uh sorry....but what exactly is applegate?

I personally think you should write it

Okay, responding to four posts:
Rotramel: Thanks for the comment. Um, is Applegate real, or did you make it up. If you did, I appologize. That was the first town name that came to my mind. Also, I did realize that slight error, so I'll change Jenna's remark.
Keep up the good work!
Ninetalesuk: Okay, don't worry I'm writing more as we speak.
Huttserwolf: Yeah, I tend to do cliffhangers alot, sorry! Applegate is a town, but now that I think about it, Rotramel might have made it up. Whoops! How stupid my am.
Kodi: Great, 'cause I'm going to. I did a lot of creative thinking, and I think I know where to go with this.

Whew! Is that everyone? Good. Now then, BACK TO WRITING!!!
Oh wait, one more thing, I may have to edit it some. I'll keep you posted!

Alright that's wonderful and I can't wait to start reading it!

Excellent! Hurry up... we all can't wait!

If there is a town near Nome called Applegate, I don't know about it.
I made that one up, but you can use it.
It's fine with me, on one condition....
KEEP WRITING!

Why dont you use an actual place in balto 1.. Like Nenana,
or have him pulling cod for the fishers in dutch harbour, witch is at the tip of southern alaska, where fishermen crabfish in the bering sea.

Jeez, i feel like a teacher. ahhh!

I like it....its got a really good plot and heaps of potential a bit sad but i think you should make a fanfic of it