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rockyjet~ginga
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Post subject: Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 5:28 pm |
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What character do you want to use? just wondering. And if she says no or doesn't respond you can use one of mine if you're desperate.
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Olivia_the_Harper
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 11:44 am |
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Ok, next part! And by the way, Darsham is PAMPLE'S Character! I got permission from her to use Darsham. And of course, don't use Darsham without permission.
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Daddy and I walked into the cave. It was dark, and it had this wild, uncivilized wolf smell to it.
I was a little hungry, so I looked around for a foodbowl. I looked everywhere, but I couldn't find one. So I went to where the HUGE pack was, and shouted across "WHERE'S THE FOOD BOWL!?"
My voice echoed all through the cave, and everyone went silent, except some pups that just woke up.
Everyone bursted out laughing, and the pups were yapping at me, in a "Get out of our territory!" kind of way.
"That ain't the way it works around here, kid," said a wolf. The wolf was a very dark grey, almost black, with white stockings and a white snout. One eye was golden amber, and the other was sky blue. (I don't know his actual eye color, andt I doubt this is it, but whatev!).
"Darsham's right. We don't depend out humans to get our food. Every day, we go out, find an animal, chase it down, attack it until it dies, then we eat its flesh," said Aniu.
"Well, that's mean!" I exclaimed, shocked at the fact of killing an innocent animal and eating it.
"Well, you might as well get used to it!" said one of the pups. The pup was all grey, and she had brown eyes.
"By the way, I'm Mala," the pup said.
"And I'm Tala!" another pup said her paw, pushing Mala's snout to the ground. She looked just like Mala, but she had Blue eyes instead.
"Hey! Why did you push me down!?" Mala exclaimed to Tala.
" 'Cause you were in the way," Tala answered in a sassy, obnocious (sp?) way.
"Oh, you're gonna be sassy, huh?" said Mala, bowing down and wagging her tail.
"Put up your dukes!" said Tala.
Tala and Mala wrestled and nipped, and the other pups gathered around in a circle saying "Fight! Fight!" The sight terrified me. I never had siblings, so I'd never seen a fight before, even if it was play-fight.
"Getting back to the subject of food, let's get some brunch!" exclaimed Aniu.
Tala and Mala paused, Tala still having Mala's ear in her mouth. Tala let go and ran out the cave, as did the rest of the pack.
I decided I should go out, too. The sunlight stung my eyes, forcing my to squint.
"Alright, Avalanche. Today, you'll babysit the pups, and tomorrow, you'll hunt with us," Aniu said in a comanding tone.
Daddy, the pups, and I stayed behind while the pack ran off in the forest.
"Who are you, and what are you doing here?" asked Tala, in a slightly agressive voice, as if she was impersonating an alpha wolf.
"Nero and I are living here for the rest of our lives-" Daddy said, interupted by me.
"But Daddy, will we ever visit the farm?" I asked.
"Yes, Nero, we wi-" Daddy was interupted by Mala.
"What's a farm?" Mala asked, puzzled.
"Well, why don't Nero and I show you right now?" Daddy replied in a cool fashion.
Daddy looked in the direction of the farm and said "Follow me, pups."
_________________ I'm a Bambi fanatic. Deal with it.
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Last edited by Olivia_the_Harper on Thu Jun 15, 2006 10:06 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 10:42 am |
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Next part!
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We walked and walked through the woods, which seemed more welcoming this time...as a matter of fact, I realized how beautiful the forest was-even the smells were more welcoming this time. Most scents were wild, but some were sweet, and some spicy. It turned out to be a nice medly.
We finally arrived at the farm, and the pups all gazed in awe.
"So this is a farm!" cried Tala, intrigued by the sights.
"What do they do at this "farm" you speak of?" an all white puppy with blue eyes asked. (Her name is Hiti, which is an Eskimo name).
"They take care of animals for money," Daddy replied.
"What's money?" asked Mala.
"It's what humans used to get things," I told Mala. I thought I would say something, and the pups looked at me.
"Wow, I didn't know you could talk!" said Tala, amazed.
"Well of course I can talk!" I said, getting slightly defensive.
"Wow, what's this?" a grey pup with brown stockings and brown eyes (her name is Winona, which is Native American for "firstborn daughter", which describes her) asked, looking at a cow.
"That's a cow. It's basically a buffalo that lives on a farm," Daddy answered.
"And that white wooly thing over there? That's a sheep," Daddy said, pointing out a sheep.
I heard a scream coming from the house. I looked to where it was coming from, and it was one of our humans.
"WOLF PUPPIES!" she screamed.
Another one of our humans ran out on the porch with a rifle that was aimed at us.
"RUN! RUN FOR THE FOREST!" Daddy shouted, if not screamed.
We ran as fast as we culd, booms sounding and dirt flying where the bullets hit.
We leaped into the trees, panting and catching our breath.
Daddy and I looked around to see if all the pups were alright, nobody seemed to be hurt, except one pup who was limping. He was a brown pup (his name is Bear), and his eyes were golden.
"What happened?" Daddy asked with a worried tone.
"I fell down and sprained my leg while running," the brown pup replied, who sounded hurt.
"It'll be fine in a few days," Daddy said, followed by a sigh of relief.
We remained silent until we heard a howl from Aniu pierce the quiet like a spear. Daddy and I were confused and didn't know what the howl meant, that is until the pups shouted "Food!" and ran in the direction of the sound. Even the limping pup could run as fast as the others.
Daddy and I followed the pups, who I think I should call my siblings now.
_________________ I'm a Bambi fanatic. Deal with it.
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rockyjet~ginga
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 6:07 am |
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Olivia_loves_Link wrote: Well, I guess nobody cares about the second part. I'll just stop the fanfic there.
Olivia, (and I know this goes a few months back) We LOVE your stories. A LOT of people do. We want you to continue really badly if you have an idea. Because you said "no one cares about the rest. I'll stop there", the time to close it is if it's been weeks and you didn't get a single reply. That should be done only if it's been that long. Just wanted to say that because your stories are pretty popular and they're better-written every time. If people comment the first part and say they like it, then by all means continue. 
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rockyjet~ginga
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 9:34 am |
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DarkHusky wrote: Continue continue!!!!!!!!!! *chants* WE WANT MORE WE WANT MORE 
YEAH! *dhants with DarkHusky* 
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rockyjet~ginga
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 11:28 am |
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Olivia_loves_Link wrote: You're all making me feel better...nobody replies to my fanfictions on Balto Source.
No one replies to ANYTHING of mine. Don't feel bad 
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Arrowe
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jun 24, 2006 7:57 pm |
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Oooh, sounds very interesting! Continue, please; this is another great fan fiction! Amazing writing there.
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