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balto31
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Post subject: Posted: Mon May 08, 2006 10:23 pm |
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The story was very good, the only part that got me angry  was when Drake sentenced Jenna to be banished, that was the sad part in your story, also the ending was sad  . I really thought you were going to kill Aleu again. I can't wait for the next fanfic.
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Balto123
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Post subject: Posted: Tue May 09, 2006 4:17 am |
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You had me thinking Aleu had died twice, and Shadow!  Really sad that Lighting and Trinea died, as I've liked these characters from the beginning and loved them immensely.  But that's what you do best ROT, playing on our emotions and setting up even your own long term characters for a fall.
Your fics are amazing, and I too cannot wait for your next one. Hopefully, Drake will get what's coming to him, and Jenna and Balto will be reunited.
Balto123
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Ninetalesuk
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Post subject: Posted: Tue May 09, 2006 4:05 pm |
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Still won't change my mind... I hate Drake... hate him, hate him, hate him. Get my message?
This is gonna take a while... a month maybe? And what about the Outbreak story?
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Lone Wolf_fanwriter
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Post subject: Posted: Tue May 09, 2006 4:20 pm |
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Dear Aniu, you've barely finished one story and already working on the next?
Wow, you're commited!
And yes, you had me thinking that you killed Aleu, twice! The first time was the most convincing though. Great job!
Oh, and I do hope Drake gets what's coming to him. He deserves it.
...But what will Balto have to do with this? And how will he survive without Jenna?
And how in the name of Aniu can you do that to Jenna?!
Sorry. Your stories touch my heart every time, and inspire me in most cases. Esspecially this one. I didn't cry...but I came close.
May you write on forever!
-LWf
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silver_balto
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Post subject: Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 4:37 pm |
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Your 22th fic? Congrats Rotramel, I just only have 21 under my name
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Coaster
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Post subject: Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 8:17 pm |
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Rotramel, this story really played with my emotions. I enjoyed the story very much. Keep up the good work! I look foward to reading your next story.
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WhiteLightning
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Post subject: Re: A note from the writer... Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 8:14 pm |
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Rotramel the Writer wrote: Greetings! Glad to see you enjoyed the ending of this story. I want to know something... How many of you thought that I was really going to kill Aleu, not once, but twice in this story? I can understand your newfound hatred of Drake, but I ask you this... What would you have done different in his position? The law IS the law after all, and a judge can't make exceptions based on his relationship with the accused, indeed can't even let this enter into his mind. Don't worry though, Drake is about to undergo a change, Balto is going to orchestrate a series of events that will let Drake know exactly how Jenna felt, and maybe then he will understand. I have a title for my next Fic, it will be #23, "Balto: Though We Be Apart". This will continue a bit about the story lines from where "...Must Come to an End" left off. Of course there's Balto and Jenna's problem to reslove, but also Saba's new job as Alpha, Aleu's new job as a mother and not leading everyone, Tim and Trina, and Blaize and Astarre's continuing relationship. Should be another good one! I plan to start it either tonight or tomorrow. I guess that's all I have for now. Thank you for all the kind reviews, and have a great day!
- Rotramel the Writer i loved the story! i thought you were going to kill aleu twice in this story too. you have a gift of writing! i can't wait for you'r next one! (i have a devil/angel argument) devil:read it again!!!!! angel: no dont listen to him.
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Timbre
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 11:53 pm |
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I, for one, am very exited to hear that. I can hardly wait! I hope you didn't change Drake getting what's coming to him.  That prequel to WQ sounds really neat! It always bugged me that they skipped that whole part. Hope to see Though We Be Apart soon. 
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lightwolf21
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Post subject: just my opinion Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 10:35 am |
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Best story series, ever!!! 
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