Holy crud . . . why didn't I read this sooner?
Awesome. Truly awesome! Yes, the cliffhanger . . . nice touch. But why, oh why did Saba have to die?

I do, however, like the way Jenna is portrayed here. Very nice.
(Oh, and BTW, Saba is not my character or my name. That is actually an official name from the WQ credits. It's just that it's hard to figure out which pup she is. But thanks, anyway!)
You are truly an inspiration! I hope that one day I could write with such drama and all. Please keep it up!
*goes off to read the conclusion*
- Juuchan17