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Tex got up and shook the dirt off playfully running after her, he eventually steered her toward his intentional place. It was a little ledge with a small cave, it looked over the territories of his pack, now also shared by Scarlet. He sat at the edge triumphed over what was part of him. He loves where he lives, and takes pride in his home lands. Looking down at the trees and the streams, and ponds, he couldn't help but feel amazed. He looked back at Scarlet to see if she had the same awe that he did.

Wolf Name-Scarlet
Pack-Hidden Shadows

I walked up to him and looked at the amazing view.I smiled."It's beautiful,"I say.To me it was romantci..But everything is romantic about him....I love everything about him.I smiled and laid down for a minuet.Looking at the amazing view.

Name: Tex
Pack: Hidden Shadows

He smiled at Scarlet. "You see that tallest tree of in the distance, it's way out there, but that's where our territory ends. Beyond that tree is a river, we can't see it at the moment, but that's the river that separats the western border of us two packs." He layed down next to her, "I think that we would have an advantage point there. The wolves in our pack are very familiar with the river and we often hop the rocks, where we never see any wolves from the other pack there. It may be a good place to fight if this does break out into a war." Tex tried not to look worried but smiled to lighten things up. "So what'd you think? If we wait this is also the best place to see stars!" Tex loves the stars, he would go up here every night if he could, it was so peaceful and he felt above all.

Wolf Name-Scarlet
Pack-Hidden Shadows

I smiled..."It's beautiful,"I say.I looked up and smirked..I loomed at him and smiled..I was happy..I actually smile here...I never smiled at my.dads pack..

He just stared at her with a small but definitely noticeable smile. He laid his head down on his paws and looked down below to see if he noticed anything unusual. He couldn't see much past the thick trees but trusted that everything was okay.

Scarlet

She smiled and rolled on her back gazing up at the stars.It was beautiful..She soon fell asleep.But not wanting too.

Texas watched Scarlet as she soon fell asleep. He felt the weight of his eyes begin to build. The last he remembered of the night was how beautiful Scarlet look withe the stars behind her.

Scarlet

She curled in a ball and slept until late afternoon.She has not slept like this in a long time.And misses sleeping in.Her father would have been mad at her for sleeping i ..She would have been punished for this.

Peppercorn
Dark Secrets
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My stupid brother had ran off before I even reached where the dens were dug into the ground in a large, crude circle. I saw his brownish fur blur as he dashed out from his own sleeping quarters. 'He must have thought I was going to start some mess,' I though and smirked. The dry dirt from the ground dusted across my paws as I continued forward to my den, sliding into the comfortable space with ease. It was large enough for me to stand, with my knees bent and back arched that is, so I could stand up and switch into more comfortable positions when I needed to. Finally, after I was content with being curled into a ball with my back facing the den entrance, I closed my eyes and lied my head on my paws. I wasn't tired, not really, but I guessed that I should some rest before we all had to face the wrath of our Alpha, who was very angry that his daughter spoke back to him and ran off to join the enemy's pack.

Maximus
Dark Secrets
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There was no sign of Pepper in sight. Weird. I had just got word from another fighter that he was standing a few feet off in front of the Alpha's daughter not too long ago...I shrugged it off. 'No matter. I'm glad I didn't run into him anyway.'
The coast was clear of Scar, too, so I decided I would go off into the no wolf's land for a hunt, since my "fellow pack hunters" had forbade me on going with them on today's hunt. A sigh passed my lips and I trotted slowly out of the pack's boundaries and into the pine forests. Immediately, the strong scent of conifers, our wolves and those of the Hidden Shadows' assaulted my nose. 'Guess I'd better go and find something then,' I thought and forced myself deeper into the forests; I really wasn't feeling this hunting-by-myself-thing anymore.

There are many reasons why this roleplay is not advanced, and I would really appreciate you not putting that in the title when it is not.

First off, an Advanced RP must have a plot of two paragraphs, not one short paragraph. It is a rule, not a suggestion.

Secondly, while there is no rule about post length in Advanced RPs, it's pretty safe to assume that an Advanced RP will have longer and more detailed posts than a normal rp. I am seeing a lack in paragraph-long posts (even a few one liners...) that would constitute the rp as advanced. Wolfymutt, this is not aimed at you since all of your posts have been a paragraph long. Looking at the other two members, though, and I see no advanced qualities at all.

Lastly, has it not been established that the proper roleplaying for AS is third person, past tense, in paragraph form? Putting a name and location in front of every first person, present tense post is confusing and unnecessary. Your post should establish who your character is and where they are through your writing. Doing this takes away opportunity to describe your character and the setting, hence the excessively short posts. It is also completely confusing when all roleplayers are not using the same style. That is the reason we all roleplay the same here; it makes it uniform for every roleplay and every post.

Please either improve your posting or remove Advanced from your title. And, also, please keep in mind what I have said about keeping all posts the same. I'd recommend reading over the 'What Type Of Roleplay Should This Be?' in my rp guide, found under the Idea section.

To get a better idea of what is expected of Advanced Roleplays, check out these ones: Untamed Spirit, Bloody Battle, Rejection, How Could You Leave Me?, and (not to toot my horn but...) Hide and Seek, Born With Power, Grown Into Heroes, and The Roommates.

To me it is advanced....I am on my tablet a lot so it is hard to type more than a paragraph.And I am very sorry about the one liners..I have writers block a lot when role playing.


I am just gonna make a new one tomorrow and have ot BE MORE advanced....Everything will stay the same.Even the plot but I may add on to it.And if you two would lile me to keep your character on the ranks plese lemme know..And I will also PM and put it on here that the blog is up..

I'm sorry for the inconvenience.

It's perfectly all right! Roleplaying is a learning experience, after all.

Even if this is advanced for you personally, it's not advanced compared to other roleplays on AS. That's all. It's okay if you aren't quite advanced yet; you will get there eventually.

Once upon a time, back when I was a young and active roleplayer, (why does that seem like decades ago?) there was such a thing as Semi-Advanced that was sort of a middle step between a normal rp and an Advanced RP. It was sort of something the rp members came up with themselves and died out as members left, but it is still perfectly valid. More information about it can be found on my guide. This might be more the type of rp you are looking for rather than jumping right into Advanced.

(Yeah sorry.. I did slack in the last few posts, and will do what I can to get a complete paragraph.)

Name: Texas
Pack: Hidden Shadows

Texas was up long before Scarlet, but knowing that she must have been tired from the last two days experience let her rest. He was content with watching the passing birds. His ears would flicker at the movements around him and he would smile from time to time. He also kept watch to see if he could see any signs of the ever moving heard through the trees, he always tried to be ahead of the packs main source of food. With no luck he switched to something easier, searching the cave behind them. It was small, but could be a good den for a wolf with newly born pups. It was out of the way of any real danger, and would provide a beautiful view for growing pups. As he walked out he noticed Scarlet waking up, "Afternoon! Ready to explore some more?" he said playfully.

Actually Black Rose do you think we could do one?And you could give me pointers along the way??