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,,I found out on the hard way that monsters are real.Do you know Alastair , the king of hell? Almost killed me,, She licked her paw

,,You mean that he walks free? ON EARTH?!,,-Bella gasped.

,, oh don't mind that,, she said licking her paw ,,He teased me , I killed him.He's dead , bye bye young hellhound,, she said smirking

Bella calmed down, then she smiled. "You know what? You're awesome." She looked around her, then she said, "Enough with the talking. I have a mission here." Then she stood up and took out her knife.

,,Yup , me too ,, said Ranni and shook her fur.,,see ya around,, she said and walked in the opposite direction sniffing the ground searching for the creature's scent

Bella left too.She walked with her nose in the air.Suddenly she felt the smell of blood. ,,You're mine now, toothy.,,-she has thought.

Ranni kept her nose on the ground tracking this horrible smell. ,,Sulfur ,, she thought and walked forward

Bella walked ahead. (ele vaneaza aceeasi creatura? XD)

This topic is on the wrong board. It belongs on the General Private Roleplaying board.

I understand that maybe the two of you are new, but you should know that all rp posts must be over one line long. You can find the rest of the rules here. You may also find that these two topics can help with your rping, so give them a read: Official Roleplay Guides and Rose's Roleplaying Guide.

All roleplays, even private ones, should have a plot and character bios on the first page. The links above will help you create those. They will also help you learn how to lengthen your posts using description instead of just dialogue along with creating characters that will really help create a better story. I good example can be found here.

Also, you both need to work a bit on your punctuation. For example, this:



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(Pai Ranni vaneaza un demon XD Bella vaneaza un vampir?)

(a XD kay )) )
Suddenly, she has stopped.The creature was sleeping in a cave. ,,It seems that she ate a lot before the bedtime ...,,-Bella thought.

Ranni followed the sulfur scent until she reached her target.A red-eyed demon walking around a tree.It was a crossroads demon.She took out the dagger and approached slowly.

Bella approached slowly and quietly.When she was ready to cut the monster's head off, she opened her eyes.The vampire stood up and she showed her fangs. ,,Food ...,,-the vampire said.Bella jumped on her and she opened the monster's mouth.Bella shed the dead man's blood in the vampire's throat.

Ranni attacked the demon.He started to yell and threw Ranni from his back.Ranni jumped on his again nad jammed the special bladed dagger right into his spline.Red pufs of smoke were coming out of the demon's wound and Ranni knew he was dead.She took her dagger back and wiped it on the demon's fur. *That was too easy * She thought and walked back into the forest.

The vampire fainted.Bella took her in her shelter, she tied her by a chair, then she waited until the vampire woke up. ,,'Morning, toothy! Tell me where is your nest or I will torture you.,,-Bella said grinning. ,,First, I'm not Toothy ...My name's Claire.And what are you talking 'bout?,,.When Claire saw that she had blood on her fur, she screamed. ,,Is that mine?!,,