Animation Source Forums

oh, its a good thing they have sneak peeks at the back of the books and I just finished New Prophecy Sunset. Here's Firestorm's page -> http://sixnewadventures.deviantart.com/ ... -278294868

(Sorry I didn't reply yesterday guys XP My computer crashed and then I had to run a ton of errands -_-")
Alright so i'll start the RP.

Cloudfur pushed her way out of the warrior's den and stretched. She padded over to a sunny rock and started grooming herself. She was about to dose off again when she heard Firestar call for a clan meeting. Cloudfur smiled to herself when she realized that this was the meeting when her apprentice would be made a warrior. "Firepaw!" Cloudfur called as she spotted her apprentice emerging from her den. Firepaw raced across the clearing to Cloudfur's side. Her fur was smooth and silky, showing that she had groomed herself. "Excited?" Cloudfur asked when she noticed Firepaw digging her claws into the ground.

(sure, its okay )

"I couldn't be more." Firepaw said, her eyes flashing with excitement. "Let's go." she ran out of the den with Cloudfur following, as Firestar yowled the familiar words. Cats everywhere were beginning to gather to see Firepaw finally being made a warrior. As she sat by Firestar, a pain in her side told her that her wounds from the last battle from ShadowClan were beginning to play up again. She had two scars on her side, and two on her muzzle. She could never forget the horror she had felt when the ShadowClan deputy had attacked her and given her those scars.

(I put up Firestrom's brother Lynxheart http://sixnewadventures.deviantart.com/#/d4lt3rp)

Cloudfur watched Firepaw sit beside Firestar as she waited to receive her warrior name. As she watched her apprentice, Cloudfur saw her wince in pain. Poor Firepaw, Cloudfur thought. She should have never gotten those scars. Cloudfur caught Firepaw's eye and gave her a nod of encouragement. As Firepaw turned away to groom a patch of fur, Cloudfur caught sight of Emberpatch and Talonclaw. She felt her heart twinge in sadness and a bit of jealousy. Don't be mouse-brained Cloudfur thought to herself. She's your best friend; you should be happy for her, not jealous! Cloudfur dug her claws into the ground and focused on the ceremony.

Firestorm couldn't help but meet Emberpatch's muzzle with a purr. "Thank you, Talonclaw." she said to him. She saw Cloudfur coming towards her and felt happy inside of her. She was a warrior. She had achieved everything she had ever worked for. Then, as she saw a brother and sister greet each other, she felt a sharp pang in her heart as she thought about her brother, Lynxpaw. I wish you could have been here. she thought sadly.

Cloudfur let out a purr as she approached Firestorm. "You're finally a warrior!" She said, nuzzling her shoulder. "You definitely deserve to be one." As Cloudfur moved aside to let the other clanmates congratulate her, she spotted her sister Moonstep. "Hey!" Cloudfur said bounding over to her. "Want to go hunting with me?" Cloudfur said as she reached her half-sister's side. "Not right now Cloudfur, I think I am going to take a short nap." Cloudfur watched her sibling pad into the warrior's den with a sigh. We never do anything together anymore, she thought. As she turned to go back to Firestorm and Emberpatch, Eaglefur blocked her way. "What do you want?" Cloudfur said to him with an exasperated sigh. "What, I can't just say hi?" Eaglefur said with a cocky grin. Cloudfur pushed past him with a growl, but as she did so, she saw something flash across Eaglefur's face. Was that sadness? Cloudfur thoguht as she padded back to her friends. Probably just because his plan to annoy me didn't work, Cloudfur concluded as she pushed the thoughts to the back of her mind.

Firestorm thought about her brother, who had joined RiverClan after the battle. He had told her that because his best friend had fathered two kits, who didn't have a father now, he would care for them, as Duststripe had died protecting him. Firestorm blinked her tears away. Why did you have to leave? She was angry at her brother, but then realized that it was not Duststripe or Lynxpaw she was angry at, it was herself. She wished she had persuaded him harder to stay. But, then a thought flickered across her mind, making her smile. I'll bet Leopardstar has a handful with Lynxpaw. she thought. I may see him at the Gathering.

Cloudfur sighed when she saw Emberpatch was talking with Talonclaw and Firestorm was still surrounded by her clanmates. She pushed her way through the thorn barrier and into the forest. She climbed to the top of the ravine and walked into the trees, the sun warming her back. She stopped in the middle of the clearing and opened her mouth to let the scents of the forest wash over her scent glands. She pricked her ears as she smelled a mouse, and spun around to see it scrambling around the base of a tree. She dropped into a hunter's crouch and slowly pulled herself forward. She was about to pounce when the bushes behind her rustled; sending the mouse into a hole at the base of the tree. "Really Eaglefur?!" Cloudfur yelled as she spotted the dark colored tom emerging from the bushes. "Can't you just leave me alone for once? Don't you have anything better to do?! You just cost me my prey! Maybe you should stop being such a mouse-brain and actually pay attention for once!" Cloudfur spun on her hind legs and raced away through the trees, not even waiting for Eaglefur to reply.

Firestorm's ears picked up the sound of Emberpatch leaving the camp. Odd. she said to herself. She followed Emberpatch to the ravine, and heard her voice harden. She sniffed, and picked up Eaglefur's scent. Firestorm ran to the place where Emberpatch was talking to Eaglefur. She walked up to them. "He does need help." she said quietly. "Cloudfur was my mentor. I can help you."

Cloudfur ran until she couldn't breath. She collapsed beside a fallen log and laid there until she caught her breath. She was shaking from fury and she couldn't think straight. "Why can't he just LEAVE. ME. ALONE??!!" She screamed into the empty air. She clawed the ground and growled at no one in particular.