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It looks like you're doing a fantastic job on it so far,I hope when you finish it,you put it on the market,because I look forward to reading it. :D :lol:

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Looks very interesting. But one thing is i think you should put something as to why that particular wolf is so important to her. What significance does it have to her life so that this wolf is the one that haunts her. Why this wolf? If you answer this question i think your pretty much set for the rest of it.
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Wow. That sounds very interesting!! I'd definitely read it if it was ever published!! Wait -- even if it wasn't published, I'd still read it!! :D

Just one thing. You might want to work more on the wolf's first impression on Nire Flow. Somehow, I don't think a simple sentence such as "I didn't kill her" is going to impress your audience -- even if it came from the spirit of a wolf. Oh, and another thing....it'd be cool too if one of your characters is a medium. And -- WTF am I saying?! This isn't MY book!! Heh, sorry. Got caught up with myself...again. :roll:

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It's fine; that's why I posted it! ;) So, whaat do you mean by medium?
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Like someone who acts as a conduit. Who taps into a spirit world and lets spirits talk through them. Or more basically, its kinda like a translator.
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oh, okay; gotcha. ;)
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Really good! I like how you intrigued me.

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Sound's good, how are you doing? if it gets published i will buy it.
I'm writing a book too, it's called Wolfsong:http://baltosource.timduru.org/board/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=15691&start=0&st=0&sk=t&sd=a
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