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Not really. As long as it stays "family friendly".

I have been working on the script for the idea I had, and I was woundering about how long should it be. I am going through my notes and so far I have about half of 'scene 1' done (I have the story blocked out, just a few minor detalies to hammer out). So I was just wanting to make sure that I got it done correctly. Thanks

Depends, it's hard to say...
Can you remind me what was your idea?

Sure thing, it's Una Vacanza Inattesa (Italian for 'A Unexpected Vacation')

Baloo,Kit, Rebecca, Molly and Wildcat are all over worked, their many recent adventures have really wiped them out. So when Rebecca finds out about this great new tropical vaction spot she suggest to the group that they should go; this way they can all get away from it all , relax and reconnect a bit. Molly and Wildcat are automatically all for it! But Kit isn't very sure on the idea; and Baloo isn't happy about the idea at all(there is something going on he doesn't want to miss).

After a long struggle with Baloo; Rebecca somehow manges to get him to agree on going. Once there Rebecca makes a few rules about the trip 1-No flying, 2-No adventures, 3-Don't brake the rules. This only makes Baloo even more annoyed.

Thankfully after a few days everyone(including Baloo) calms downs and started to enjoy the trip. But things turn south when Don Karnge shows up. The group learns that a secret location on the island had a tresure that Don is after, and if in the wrong hands there could be a lot of trouble brought upon the island. Much to Baloo's joy Rebecca calls off the rules and they began to look for the tresure before Don can.

I'm not sure if Baloo would object to those rules. After all, he's all about having fun, relaxing, and doing nothing; he's also torn between having fun and doing the right thing.

Maybe he would have a small issue with no flying for recreation purposes; if it was for work, he wouldn't mind not flying.

True.