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(yeah she does)

"Well," she said unsure," I guess so, it'll be a secret." Nightstar's grateful gaze met Silversnow's unsure one.

The white puppy smiled. "Thanks, Silversnow. You are my best friend ever!" And then she poked Silversnow with a golden-colored paw in order to start a game of tag.

She watched as Nightstar leapt away and gave her a few seconds to make it fair. She then bounde towards Nightstar, easily tagging and tripping her in the process while Nightstar was turning. She smiled, a small giggle escaping as she ran through some tall grass, all the sudden she was falling! She hit ground with a thud, letting out a grunt. She sttod up, shaking dirt from her pelt and ignoring the pain in her paw. She stared up at the hole, which was providinig light, she saw Nightstar's white fur, and the worried expression on her face as she stared down.

"Silversnow!" Nightstar cried, a terrible, overwhelming rush of worry pulsing through her veins, "Are you OK?" Without even awaiting her friend's answer, she continued. "Help. Right, I need to get help...uh..." She ran off, finding a new speed in order to return Silversnow to safety. She galloped into the nursery. "Mom! Dawn! Silversnow...she's stuck in a hole and I can't get her out!" "My pup!" Shouted Dawn, "Oh, no! Is she OK?" "I think so," said little Nightstar. "Can you lead us to her?" Asked Nightstar's mom, Starmagna. "Yeah," Nightstar replied quickly, bolting out of the den, followed by the two other wolves.

I sat in the hole, staring up at the light, hoping someone would come soon. The pain in my paw was getting worse and I looked down to see it twisted and covered with blood. When I looked up again, Starmagma and my mom were there. I lept up and let out a whimper as my paw touched ground. "I got help!" Nightstar called from above. I held up my paw for them to see, pointing out the obvious, " I can't climb out, I think it's broken," I said in a small, pained voice.

"Nightstar, get Boulder", commanded Starmagna. Nightstar sprang away as Dawn looked desperately down at her pup. "Silversnow? Are you ok, honey?" Dawn asked.

"No, you saw my paw didn't you?" I said as I stared at her worried face. I hobbled closer to the slope, the steep,steep slope that led to the top. I knew I couldn't climb up it, but how was I gonna get out? I thought as despair settled over me like a thick blanket. "Are you sure you cant climb out?" she said, sounding scared. "Im sure,I said, it was as if her fear was a disease, it made me scared to. Was I ever gonna get out?

((you do know we're writing in 3rd person, not 1st, right?))

Nightstar came galloping back to the hole. "Boulder says....he's coming...ina minute...." she panted. And sure enough, Boulder trotted to the hole where Silversnow was stuck. And behind him cam Eninai, the elderly leader of Tribe of the North, and Reflection, a much younger hunter who was next in line for leadership. "Where is the pup?" Boulder asked. "In the hole," Explained Dawn, still worried. "Right. Reflection, you're the smallest, besides Nightstar, who is too young for this task (Nightstar have a small "hmmph!" of disapproval), see how far in you can get your head. Try and reach Silversnow. Silversnow, you might need to jump!" he added more loudly. Reflection reached in cautiously, Dawn and Starmagna on either side to grab her if she fell.

(what's the difference?)

"I-i- think so," I said dreading what would happen. Silversnow saw Reflection reachiing for me. She waited till she was as far as she could go and jumped. She felt her secure grib around her scruff as she tried to lift her up. Silversnow then felt the donward pull of gravity, tugging at me, and the upward force that was Reflection. She was worried. Was Reflection strong enough?

((you kept switching, it makes it confusing. Plus, since their are multiple authors using different characters in an RP, it makes more sense when written in 3rd person.))

But Starmagna and Dawn had caught hold of Reflection's tail and where pulling her up once more, ignoring gravity to bring the pup out of the hole. Nightstar jumped in excitement as the wolves pulled her friend for out of the hole.

Silversnow sank to the ground, feeling sick with pain. She felt herself being lifted up and placed on her legs. She hobbled to Boulder's den, with the help of Nightstar. She yawned as she sat down. She was sooooo tired. Her eyes slowly closed. And then, SNORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(and sorry)

((its ok))

Nightstar covered her ears with her paws and Boulder wore a strange expression. He told Nightstar she could leave, and she did so gratefully. He ears were saved! And of course, outside, she ran into another pup who was just 2 months older than she. Ohzu was a brown pup with golden eyes. And Nightstar, though she wouldn't even be apprentice age for another 3 weeks, liked the pup. A little too much.

Silversnow blimked happily, staring up at the pup who stood before her. He was gray, and fuzzy. She blinked a few times and sat up. As soom as she did, the pain in her paw hit her. It looked fine now, but where was she. Groggily her memories began to return. The pup before her stutterd,"Uh, I-i, took a wrong turn, uh, yeah, i'll just go." and dashed out. Nightstar then came in.

Nightstar skipped into the den. "Silversnow! Guess what, guess what!" She chided.

"What?" Silversnow asked sleepily. She yawned wide, curling her tongue and sighed. She shook her head to clear it.