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Lies....
You lied..
And expected it to be ok...
you acted so inocent..
But I could see right through you..

Everyone seemed so blind...
They couldn't see.
They didn't think with a mind..

They saw you as beautiful..
but inside you were broken,..
I could see it on your face..
And in the words you had spoken..

Please don't expect me to respect you..
I don't care anymore..
You hurt people..

Just know that someone cared..
ENough to calm themselves..
So you wouldn't be scared,...

How could you do this??
I know sometimes I yelled..
But now you ruined it..
And I dont care..

i wrote this poem in the middle of class when my teacher found out about she was pissed, this poem is a kids poem and it's called:


Fire In The Sea.

This is a tale from a long time ago

There was this boy
he was playing with his toy
by the sea he sat
he was kinda fat
then he noticed something in the sea
he wonderd what could that be?

he went closer oh my god
there's fire in the sea
how could that be?

he went to the village to tell everybody
there was to much commotion
could there be more emotion?

he wished somebody or anybody would listen to him
but nobody listened to him
he went back to the fire in the sea
he wounderd how could that be?


By Silver Wolf.

Hurt......
I've been ignored..
I've been hurt..
I've been shoved in the dirt..

I've felt so bad..
I've been so sad..
But noone heard me...

I've been wounded..
I've felt pain..
I've been depressed..
Through disdane..

So don't be too quick..
to say I'm sick..
Cause your wrong...

I've had my good days and bad..
I've been happy I've been sad..
But this is the worst..
Dang I feel like I'm cursed...

I'm hurt....

well heres mine
by my oppinion this poems is not one of my good poems

Dogs Man best friend

Dogs are friendly creatures
Loyal, forgiving helpful
You're sometimes amazed of its beautiful features
When they protect they look dreadful

Makes you feel good when having fun
Cheers you up when youre down
Sticks by you when the world turns its back on you
Only creature that helps in every job

only creature that can

hope you like it

Hmmm..that was pretty good...but you might need to change some words around to make is sound...more..rhymey?? I donno.^^

Empty?
I'm alone...
Noone hears me..
Noone's home....

I feel so empty..
Darkness creeps in..
But for you there's plenty..

How could you be so cold?
Hear me out...
I'm trying my hardest to be bold..

Sometimes I feel happy..
Sometimes a feel sad..
but right now I feel crappy..
You were the only friend I had...

Hear me out..
I'm empty now...

thanx yours good too

I only write animal type poems

Wolves

Peaceful creatures
live a happy life
till man comes and ruins it all
with there dogs ready to hunt them down
no chances of runing around

Abrubt end to the wolves life
the pack try hard as they could
but had no chance
Pups adults elders gone nothing left but one

he tried his best to run
got into a cave relief grew
but had no chance and got blocked
by the stakes in the ground at the end of the cave


Man wolves worst enemy

Ok..I wrote this dumb one at school..tis not directed to anyone

Hi?
Hello..
I'm here..
But I fear..
That you won't hear...
Me..

You don't understand..
I've lend you a hand..
But you don't see where I stand..

And sometimes I cry...at night..
When I fear that you might..
Hate me..

Cause you don't see all the me..
Though I've tried to look you in the eye...
Hi...

Here's mine.

Pain

I've had twenty stitches in my head
I've been hit with a baseball bat
I've also fallen in a thorn bush
And have been scratched by a cat

I've been cut with a knife
I've broken my leg
I've been hit by a car and survived
And attacked by a dog called Meg

But these aren't as painful
Injuries can't hurt me
Because not being loved is more painful
If it happened to you
You would see

Don't leave me

I'm so numb...
you've burried me here
and here I have stayed...
inside my freezing cold grave I have layed,...
And you just left me for the dead.
Help me I can't get you out of my head...

XD heres somthin i just made up i was so bored XD i cant write for my life

no one nothin there is no joy, i feel only pain, no love, no hug, no one to hold me. I am left to be, who is there for me? No one i say, no one, no one no, nobody, no one to hold me, to care, to love

Whoa guys those are great. Black Wolf are you a writer?

A beginner atleast. But thanks.^.^ I needs work.
(ok so this is like a song rather than a poem..)

Left Behind
I've become..
So unbearably numb...
Because I see that you are so loved...
All I've gotten was heartwrenching shoves...
Because noone cares...
I feel absolutely noone there...
But maybe I'm wrong...
I've got family...
Maybe I shouldn't have been waiting so long...
But in the outside world..
Where do I belong??? I'm left behind...
I'm stuck inside,...
And noone seems to care...
I get up and noones there..

I'm left behind...

XD dont even ask y i wrote this, i cant write for my life, plus it doesnt ryme, AND it makes no sense whatsoevuh. I dont think any one will understand it. It has to do with the story i am writing, and uh, iunno if it is inapropriate, but here:

Love has never wanted me, and yet i have taken it.
I fear it will not last long, it slowly crawls father away, each time i see you.
I feel as if you and i will never be
It is love that i desire, but i do not care for it.
Is it me that i should love? Inside it burns me.
I have never loved myself, never have i complimented my reflection, only broken it.
I break the mirrors, smash the glass. Steel surrounds my walls, and my heart.
Is there any love inside my? My heart is cold as stone.
Is it that i only want to lie ontop of you in the dark?
Or is it that i truley love you, i cannot tell.
I have never loved someone. My heart tries to beat and burn through the steel which has eclosed it.
There is no hope. No one for me.
So i sit here, smoking my lungs out, untill i am no more

This is a peice of crap, stupid poem thing XD maybe i should delete it

(Nameless poem...:3)


Life is like a dramatic novel...
It only ends when you are dead and gone...
And when you feel you don't belong...
Remember that you are a part of life...

Life can be tough, and even quite easy...
But sometimes corny, and quiet very cheesy.
When times get rough,
Just get a little tougher.

And know that some day, you won't have to suffer.
Someday you will die, and on that day,
People will gather around your cophin.
"What a great person, we miss her dearly," all the people will say.
When somebody dies, people who love you will soften...

When you are lying inside your death cophin....

There...Not so good at the begining, and not really good anyways... If anyone bothers to check this topic, if you have critiques, I'd like to hear them.

They could be good poems, but the fact that nearly everyone ( and i mean everyone in this topic )of these is reminiscent of evanescnce, or something to do with numbness and pain. Maybe you could try challenging yourself. Try writing a happy poem, or a poem thats not about your mortal rejection from grace.

XD, these sad and painful poems are the easiest to write, so theres no wonder there are so many. It's just kinda boring seeing only this kind of poem though.