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Chinook lefted his back leg up towrads his neck, sctaching away a flee that was on him. He put his white colored foot down when Noel padded over towards him. "Uhhh, hiya Noel." he said simply, not bothering to do anything else. He didnt have a clue that she liked him.

Clip layed on the old ranch houses porch, board. She got up, and streatched, and started to prance over to where the cows were kept. thesaw Bessie talking to Lexie and smiled, and sat down watching the two animals in enjoyment.

Valto layed in his dog house.

Lexie raced next to a small calf "Hey!" He smiled, Lexie picked up speed "Hey kid!" She zoomed off, leaving the calf in a daze."Bye guys!" She strode off, out of the feilds and into the main area."Umm...h-hey Valto." She smiled nervously, it was realy a fake smile.Her tail wagged slightly as she looked at him.He was slightly taller than she was, and had more muscle.But she was never scared of him ike Noel was, his structure scared her itself.But Lexie still liked him...

Dark woke up another day nothing new slash would probley here in a minate he didnt like her he didnt mind anybody eals here but here ever if he never showed it he walked out and saw the others

'Good mourning guys hows it going' he asked



Slash woke up an smiled another day she would get to talk to slash he was so hot she was going to make him her mate she know it she smiled and closed her eyes to get a bit more beauty rest

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"Hey." She smiled, looking down at the ground.Her eyes wanted to look back up at Valto..but she knew he didn't feel the same about her..

Noel sighed, looking glum 'How am I going to get threw him?' She smiled again before he could look back at her "Hey..I'm gonna go for a walk at the meadow..do you want to come?" She asked, the Meadow was the top spot for couples, all love birds went there.'This should be a hint!' She shrugged, looking at him.

Dark smiled he know they wanted to be alone, so he got up.

I'm going to check on things cant be too carefull you know, I will see you guys later'.

He smiled and left and started to go out


Slash woke up and started to look for dark and found him with two of the other, she frowned but raced out to block him going anywhere.

'Hi dark your looking handsome today....will you do everyday anyway.' she giggled


Dark sighed and mouthed a 'Help me'

Tomy giggled "Hey Slash!Um..I think Hannah needed you for some Prada Bag fittings!" She lied, turning back to Valto.

Slash looked disappointed and dark mouthed 'I own you' to tomy, and smiled at her then looked back at slash.

'Bad luck slash and i was really looking forward to talking to you' he lied.


'Awww me to anyway bye dark' she said then went off.


Dark smiled and then looked back at tomy.

Tomy rolled her eyes "You owe me to much!Now start running before she comes back." She smiled, giggling again.Tomy pulled out her I-Pod, playing My World By Sick Puppies "Welcome to my world..where everyone I've ever need, always end up leavin me alone.Another leason burned, drowin in the ashes..kicking..screaming." She sang along, she was a beautiful singer realy, she turned back to Valto "Whats up?" She asked, sitting down.

'You just saved my life back they of course i own you big,' He smiled and stood up and started to walk away


Minwhile slash was not happy, she had missit her chance to speak to speak to dark

'Why does all the bad things happen to me, have i done' she yelled to noone