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Wolfhusky
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Post subject: Re: Gone With the Wolves(Balto Rp *NEW*) Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:20 am |
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Sorry  I'm not mormally that bad
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Silent_Cola
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Post subject: Re: Gone With the Wolves(Balto Rp *NEW*) Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:04 am |
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Joined: Tue Nov 21, 2006 8:35 pm Posts: 642 Location: On WolfQuest or Balto Source, or... or... or... sleeping.
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Tadie--> Perfect.
Wolfhusky--> Ah it's ok, just work on it.
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Tadie
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Post subject: Re: Gone With the Wolves(Balto Rp *NEW*) Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:21 am |
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So we just need an alpha male?
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balto21
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Post subject: "Deadly Grotto Pack" Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 5:41 am |
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May i
Name Sword Age 3 yrs position n/a Gnder male Appearence his muzzle is a light white he has a green eyes and a scar just above one of them but noone knows where he got it from since he has'ent told anyone about it Personality Sword is a fight first ask questions later kind of wolf that has goten him in trouble with the pack in the past so he trys to listen to people but if he does not agree with you he will let you know he is very cold hearted to everyone apart from snowflake History he has had a pretty bad life with his farther being killed by a group of wolf dogs in result he hates the very name of them his morther hated him as soon as he was born and would not let him eat her milk thankfully snowflakes morther let him have her milk and he was keepet alive but his morther disowned him so to him she is as good as dead Rp example he opened his eyes and looked at around and smiled his crooky smile and stood up 'Another great moruning to do that every I wont or shuold I say listen to our alpha bark his orders' he said to himself he rooled his eyes it was luckly he was not the leading type or he would have killed him and toke over a long time ago they was one good thing he would get to see snowflake he smiled as he said her name he allways had a crush on her but he would'nt dare tell her because he was scared of what she would say and he didnt wanna end they friendship if he could'nt have her as a girlfriend he would lover her as a friend and that way he would get to see her face everyday he walks to snowflake den as he gets they he fells the felling he had been getting for awhile which he hated it made him fell weak he cleared his throut 'Snowflake would you like to go on a walk with me' sword asked
Name snowfalke Age 3yrs position n/a Gender female Appearence she is a pretty black wolf with a dark muzzle and blue eyes that seem to go into your very soul personality she is very mortherly and caring to small pup's she listens to everybodys point of view it dos'ent matter if you are a wolf dog or a pure breed wolf or dog she will treat you as a living creature she and sword have aguements but she loves him with all her heart but she feels that he dos'ent fell the same way History she has had a pretty much good life apart form the fact that her farther was killed by a hunter before she was born but she does not let that drag her down she puts a smile on everything but dont ever get on her bad side because she is ruthless im a fight she may be knid but she has a bad bite she was saden by the fact that sword's morther disowned him but she trys her best to help him Rp example she opened her eyes at the sound of a throut being cleared and the she smiled as she heared the voice of her crush 'Snowflake would you like to come on a walk with me' he asked her she smiled and walked out side trying not to wake her morther as she got outside she smiled at him 'Its a date' said said smileing at him he blushes and smiles back weakly and the two walk together an awkard silence filed the air 'So how has your morther been snowflake' he asked her sleepishly she smiled she loved this side of him the side the other pack did not get to see the kind gentle sword not the cold hearted and hard sword which she hated seeing but said nothing about 'She is doing fine thank you she is trying to get your morther to take you back' said snowflake she heared him growl at the sound of his morther she lowered her eyes 'I'm sorry' said said he smiled at her 'Its ok she wont take me back thanks for trying' said sword she smiled wakly and then pinned him 'Tag your it' she said and ran of with sword close behined
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Tadie
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Post subject: Re: Gone With the Wolves(Balto Rp *NEW*) Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 8:39 am |
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Well, i'm not the owner of this RP, but you should punctuate and capitolize.
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Silent_Cola
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Post subject: Re: Gone With the Wolves(Balto Rp *NEW*) Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 8:46 am |
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Tadie hit the nail on the head. You can only join when you fix all of your capitalization and punctuation errors. Sorry.
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balto21
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Post subject: Re: Gone With the Wolves(Balto Rp *NEW*) Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 11:55 am |
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Joined: Tue Sep 23, 2008 10:49 am Posts: 38284 Location: Looking after my cat and dog
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Name Sword Age 3 years old position n/a Gnder male Appearence His muzzle is a light white he has a green eyes and a scar just above one of them but noone knows where he got it from since he has'ent told anyone about it Personality Sword is a fight first ask questions later kind of wolf that has goten him in trouble with the pack in the past so he trys to listen to people but if he does not agree with you he will let you know he is very cold hearted to everyone apart from Snowflake History He has had a pretty bad life with his farther being killed by a group of wolf dogs in result he hates the very name of them his morther hated him as soon as he was born and would not let him eat her milk thankfully snowflakes morther let him have her milk and he was keepet alive but his morther disowned him so to him she is as good as dead Rp Example he opened his eyes and looked at around and smiled his crooky smile and stood up 'Another great moruning to do that every I wont or shuold I say listen to our alpha bark his orders' he said to himself he rooled his eyes it was luckly he was not the leading type or he would have killed him and toke over a long time ago they was one good thing he would get to see snowflake he smiled as he said her name he allways had a crush on her but he would'nt dare tell her because he was scared of what she would say and he didnt wanna end they friendship if he could'nt have her as a girlfriend he would lover her as a friend and that way he would get to see her face everyday he walks to snowflake den as he gets they he fells the felling he had been getting for awhile which he hated it made him fell weak he cleared his throut 'Snowflake would you like to go on a walk with me' sword asked Name Snowfalke Age 3 years old position n/a Gender Female Appearence She is a pretty black wolf with a dark muzzle and blue eyes that seem to go into your very soul personality She is very mortherly and caring to small pup's she listens to everybodys point of view it dos'ent matter if you are a wolf dog or a pure breed wolf or dog she will treat you as a living creature she and sword have aguements but she loves him with all her heart but she feels that he dos'ent fell the same way History She has had a pretty much good life apart form the fact that her farther was killed by a hunter before she was born but she does not let that drag her down she puts a smile on everything but dont ever get on her bad side because she is ruthless im a fight she may be knid but she has a bad bite she was saden by the fact that sword's morther disowned him but she trys her best to help him Rp Example She opened her eyes at the sound of a throut being cleared and the she smiled as she heared the voice of her crush 'Snowflake would you like to come on a walk with me' he asked her she smiled and walked out side trying not to wake her morther as she got outside she smiled at him 'Its a date' said said smileing at him he blushes and smiles back weakly and the two walk together an awkard silence filed the air 'So how has your morther been snowflake' he asked her sleepishly she smiled she loved this side of him the side the other pack did not get to see the kind gentle sword not the cold hearted and hard sword which she hated seeing but said nothing about 'She is doing fine thank you she is trying to get your morther to take you back' said snowflake she heared him growl at the sound of his morther she lowered her eyes 'I'm sorry' said said he smiled at her 'Its ok she wont take me back thanks for trying' said sword she smiled wakly and then pinned him 'Tag your it' she said and ran of with sword close behined Name Dark Age 3 years old position Wants to be alpha Gender Male Appearence Covered in scars but still very handsome and he knows it personality He is the closest you will ever get to evil he hates all wolf dogs and he dos'ent know it but he is sword's step brother if he ever found out he would kill sword because in his mind he is the strongest wolf and he likes to play the field he moves to another she wolf if he gets bored of one History He has never known his farther of morther he was raised by another pack but he killed wolf that disagreed with him and was banished all he wants in his life is a mate that is not boreing and with power love does not come into it if the she wolf is boreing he will find some one elsa Rp Example Dark open his dark blue eyes and stands up carefull not to wake the she wolf that was laying next to him she was his mate but she was being to make him bored out his mind he wanted a mate that would not be boreing he sighed and walked out he was a bit of a player a handsome one at that he smiled to himself and walks over to the river for a drink he has heard of a pack needing an alpha male as soon as the alpha female looks at me i will have it in the bag as long as she is not a wolf dog the one thing he hated the most was wolf dogs he hated them with all his being he would hunt them untill he died he growled and started to run to the place where the female was and he silencely prayed that she would not be boreing that she be a least a good to talk to (Better or not) 
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Tadie
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Post subject: Re: Gone With the Wolves(Balto Rp *NEW*) Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 11:56 am |
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You still havn't done punctuation. Nor did you read the rules.
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Gearback Tribal
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Post subject: Re: Gone With the Wolves(Balto Rp *NEW*) Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 1:57 pm |
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Can we leave that to the owner of this RP please?
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Silent_Cola
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Post subject: Re: Gone With the Wolves(Balto Rp *NEW*) Posted: Mon Apr 27, 2009 7:31 pm |
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No, Tadie is right. Look, until you cane copy and paste the form into a post, READ THE FREAKING RULES, and work on your spelling and punctuation, I'm not going to accept you!
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