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Post subject: Re: Wolf Anatomy *Am I doinng it right?* Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 7:22 am |
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zasha10 wrote: Here, how's this, I've been practicing ohhh 8D this one is very good confronted to one of your old ones^^ I have just a critic: the head is a bit bigger if you see ;] but for the rest, I think it's ok =D
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Post subject: Re: Wolf Anatomy *Am I doinng it right?* Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 12:46 pm |
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Hmmm...the snout sticks out at an odd angle, like it is too low when juxtaposed with the eyes. If you look at a wolf, the noses are not much more than a small inch beneath the eyes. The paws are too square, the neck is too narrow where it connects to the base of the head. The ears are fine, but I would lower them more so that the base of the ears are slightly above the eyes or level with the brow. Notice, the only thing I did was lower the ears, and raise the muzzle, draw an extra line on the neck, and round out the paws. I had to move the eye to make the snout symetrical, but I drew nothing else on the drawing. Attachment:
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There are a few more things, but I wont exhaust you with them. ;] All and all, you are doing much better than you were. Your progress is apparent and very obvious. Good job!
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