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 Post subject: Re: Wolf Anatomy *Am I doinng it right?*
PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 4:02 pm 
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much better. Just work on the back legs more. :)

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 2:28 pm 
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Can I use one of your line arts?

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I did, this is just to show my drawings instead of drawing an entire pic every time I work on it, and yeah bb9000, you can use it, it's on Draco's topic too.

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Here, how's this, I've been practicing


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 Post subject: Re: Wolf Anatomy *Am I doinng it right?*
PostPosted: Mon Mar 30, 2009 7:22 am 
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Here, how's this, I've been practicing

ohhh 8D this one is very good confronted to one of your old ones^^
I have just a critic: the head is a bit bigger if you see ;] but for the rest, I think it's ok =D


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For me the head is fine... I like it. It's cute :wink:


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whats the bump on his back leg? shouldn't that be smaller?

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You doing a lot better. There are still a few things though.
The head on that one is big compared to the body
and the back legs are off. The part where the thigh comes in should be the center of the hock. The hock should be more of an angle instead of sticking off so much.

Here's an example (It would be better, but I don't have my tablet)


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 11:47 am 
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that's ironic that you would say that, that is the part I have been working on all week, I hit it perfectly twice but the bad thing was outta like 14 trys >.< I messed up the back leg here too, But I like the neck


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here's one that I colored in, how is it?


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here's 1 I did with the wolf;s leg done the right way.


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PostPosted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 12:31 pm 
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Wow this last one is fab. The legs look fine much better ;)

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Hmmm...the snout sticks out at an odd angle, like it is too low when juxtaposed with the eyes. If you look at a wolf, the noses are not much more than a small inch beneath the eyes. The paws are too square, the neck is too narrow where it connects to the base of the head. The ears are fine, but I would lower them more so that the base of the ears are slightly above the eyes or level with the brow.

Notice, the only thing I did was lower the ears, and raise the muzzle, draw an extra line on the neck, and round out the paws. I had to move the eye to make the snout symetrical, but I drew nothing else on the drawing.

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There are a few more things, but I wont exhaust you with them. ;] All and all, you are doing much better than you were. Your progress is apparent and very obvious. Good job!




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Hey and how about drawing paws like this?

P.S.: Don't forget that canines has got 5 fingers (The 5th one is unuseful)


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