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Wow, awesomeness, Suka!

I like the way you had the break-in scene being less like a break and enter and more like an infiltration. It's going along nicely!

Hmm, melikes!

I love the new chapters!

I find it an interesting change you did to Janet from our RP too.


Can't wait to read the next chapter(s)!

Few words can express how much aw I'm in after reading the new chapters. A very nice job, Suka!

It surprises me when the fact that this all use to be a RP is brought up in my mind; you guys all did a marvelous job with the concept of the scene. It's unfortunate that I'm no longer able to read the original posts because I would have loved to see the differences.

There's probably no reason to bring this up because I know you know of the existence of some tiny typoes. No worries though.

There is, however, one tiny sentence near the beginning of "Red-Flag Sale" that has me puzzled: "Once a gem shatters, there’s little to no hope for an anthro to gain his magic ability back again."
((insert removed text that lead into a premature idea XD))


I'm really excited to see the release of the upcoming chapters!

Thanks you again, everyone, for your input!! Your feedback is what's really keeping this project motivated, and once more, I'm sorry for any delay in release plans. I'll have the next few chapters up soon!!



These parts were actually written before we had our discussions; I've considered going back to edit that statement before realizing something crucial... and all of you have noticed already, it's all told from Selgar's point of view, meaning thus far, we can only know as much as Selgar knows concerning the shattering of magical gems (which, so far, isn't much). But I'll be sure to have all made clear in the later chapters. Thanks for pointing it out!!

P.S. Don't forget to check out the newly added concept arts!! :]

Concept art which I find to be great! I mean, I won't call you the best artist in the world, but they're nice! ^^

Concept art? O.o What concept art?

*edit* Nevermind, I found them. Looking now =3

*2nd edit* They're great! Agreeing with Swords too, but I think they're great sketches!

Concerning the sketches, it wasn't so much the little teeth I put in than it is the head shape; sharks tend to have a more triangular-shaped head while dolphins have a noticeably longer snout the sticks out more. And arms and legs are such a pain... which is why I normally don't draw full body drawings.

Anyway. They're just sketches.

I'll have the next couple of chapters out this week. Sorry for any delay.

Ah yes, that is true. Well, thanks for clearing that up for me! ^^

And that's fine. If you wish to take your time, go ahead. It shows that you're putting a lot of careful work into it!

Still, I can't wait for the next chapter(s) to come out! XD

Mo' chaptas!! :] Just as a quick heads-up, though. Chapter 5 is around the time I start heading in my own direction with this. You may still remember snippets about it from the original RP, but if any of you remember, I played Arcus and the story's kinda told by Selgar, which makes it a little difficult to scene-shift. XD Also, I had to... "mold" a few characters around to better fit the story. I sincerely hope it fits. You'll know what I mean when you read.

Thank you all for your patience! I'll start work immediately on the next ones...




[Chapter 05 taken down. Thank you for your interest.]

Man, Suka, those chapters owned! Intense, riveting, making the reader desperately anxious to find out what happens next, it was great!

And I gotta agree with Selgar there, a 50 year-old woman holding an Uzi submachine gun? Not only would that look ridiculous, that even SOUNDS ridiculous! XD I wouldn't take it too seriously at first, myself.

Gee, thanks Swords!! :] Yeah, these chapters were a lot of fun, but it'll get a lot more intense soon.

By the way, you might notice that I may've been typing these pretty quick. If any of you spot any typos or plot errors, I'd appreciate it if you'd point them out. Thanks again!!

Agreeing with Swords. These chapters were great! I'll point out any spelling errors later.

*goes to compose, inspired*

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