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Whoah! I like it! XD I think I'm the only reader who knows his name xDDD

Very good Clay. I love Starlett. XD

Great!I love your fan fics!Well...your fanfic sometime...oh!Do you rember it?Balto and Steele:Story of Steele:Fan fic of the weeeeeeek!×D

I’ve finally read „Doberman”. Well, it’s quite unusual story, for You, at least so far. I like it. Maybe not as much as my favourite LNT, but it’s very good and it’s an interesting change in your writings. As I’ve already written – I very like your style, that changed a bit in D. Short and clear sentences, well fitted to intense narration (esp. description of Rocco’s life – both a bit dark-humoured and gloomy at the same time). Plot maybe not so surprising (but which love-story is surprising?), but appealing – I got like your characters, esp. Starlett. One thing I might find flawing is that Rocco focus-shift was very sudden and we haven’t seen a process of waking his basic emotions, but I understand that story was design to be short and clear. As for that, it’s very good.

Ps.
Still waiting for longer part of LNT2 to savour with a bigger bone;)

Awesome fics, Clay. I've read em all, you've got a fan.
Have you ever tried something called the "Retroperspective Technique"?

Isn't that exactly why the retroperspective technique is such a good thing? ^^ I mean; it makes the story longer, and if it's well written, may increase the reader's desire to read through all of it.
If it's not well written, it's a pretty good turn-off as well xD

Yeah, someone does…
Upping this topic, hoping for more of all, but especially more of LNT2 soon