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That was really good, Kaso!! I'm really liking this story!! Keep it up!!

And here's a little heads up: There will be some homosexuality throughout some of this fanfic. If you are offended by gay's in any way, then when it comes to that part, just stop from there. And just so you know, I'm gay. That's why There is homosexuality in some parts of the story. I'm not any good at writing female and male love stories. Anyways:

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Hunter had taken the time to track dow some food. He had found a scent trail of some moose, and he wasn't going to give this one up. Hunter followed the scent and hoove marks until he came to a qiet clearing. The scent was even stronger in this part. Hunter crouched low, ready to attack. He could see the moose grazing on the tall grass. As soon as the moose's attention was cught by a quiant little butterfly, Hunter sprag and landed immediatly on the Moose's neck. Hunter bit into the side, trying to reach the throat. It was enough to make the moose thrash and run. But Hunter stayed on the side and began moving, bit by bit, to the throat. And when he did, Hunter bit down hard. This was the easiest, if not customary, way to kill prey such as a moose. Hunter could feel the bones crack as he squeezed harder. And soon, The moose lay dead on the ground. Hunter threw the moose over his shoulder and began carrying it across the forest. He planned on sharing some with the wolf to try and make him understand that he could trust him.

Kruz muscles were sore and his legs could barely move. He could feel every pulse of his heart surging through his body. The fact that he was weak and in pain made him whimper pathetically. He had never felt like this before because he never got to experience it. He was kind of hoping that he would never experience this pain either. But here he was, alone and wounded. Kruz knew that he was practically at the Panther's mercy. He wouldn't take that lightly like he had with Bider.

Hunter dragged the moose in through the trees. He carried it over to where Kruz was laying and set it down. Hunter looked down at Kruz with a smile. Kruz looked up and tried to smile. But his jaws was cracked and his muscle was strained. Hunter took notice this quickly.

"Oh, You can't eat can you?" He asked. Kruz shook his head and gave another small whimper as he felt his stomach churn. he was hungry, but how could he eat in this state. Hunter nodded and sighed. "Here open your mouth," Hunter said. Kruz gave the Panther a confused look as the panther took his jaw and moved Kruz's open with it. "Hope you don't mind a little panther saliva on your food," Hunter stated, pickng up a small piece of the meat and chewed it. Kruz now understood. hunter was masturcating his food so that he could eat. Kruz didn't care much, he was desperate for food. Hunter finished chewing and dropped the small piece of meat into Kruz's mouth, then he gently stroked kruz's throat so that he wouldn't choke. This was going to take a while.

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Yeah Another little bit, but I'll get back to you.

I Giess most of you hate me now for the whole Gay thing right?

I don't hate you, I just don't know what to say. I'm not a big fan of homosexuality, but I'll keep reading this 'till I'm offended . I really enjoyed the last part, keep writing!

I don't hate you either. Homosexuals are humans just like we are. Please continue this. I'll keep reading too. I don't offend that easily

Yay, Thanks for your support.

Here's more:

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The feeding process had taken a while. Hunter had to take a few trips own to the river to get some water for Kruz. The meat had tasted a little funny due to the saliva on it. But Kruz didn't mind, he was getting fed and that was all that mattered to him.

Hunter had been able to save some meat for himself. He bolted it down as if he hadn't eaten in months. Even though he had just eaten the day before.

Hunter looked at the helpless wolf. Kruz had curled up to rest. Hunter smiled warmly. He was hopng that Kruz would have just a little more trust for him. Hunter padded over to Kruz, then he looked to the sky. No wonder Kruz had settled to sleep. It was dusk, the feeding had taken longer than expected. Hunter felt a slight, cold breeze in the air. Kruz stirre slightly to curl up tighter. Hunter frowned. Autumn was moving in and it was getting colder. Hunter didn't want Kruz to get cold, especially in his condition. Hunter wrapped one long arm around the wolf and lay ontop of him. The usual cuddle for a panther.

Kruz shuddered as he felt a furry arm wrapping itself around his stomach. And soon, he felt an entire furry body on top of him. Kruz at first felt akward, but for some reason, he liked being held like this by another male. He had always felt uncomfertable, cuddling with another female. This made him feel even more awkward. But soon, Kruz adjusted and felt completely confertable in the panther's arms.

Together they slept.
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Progres is slow but, I'll get more.

I think I know who our little couple is going to be . That was good, Kaso!!

I think I do too. Keep it up Kaso!

Yeah it's kinda easy to find out.

But I have a few plot twists that could fix that.

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Meanwhile, back in the pack.


The wind swept quietly through the trees. All was silent. The stream could be heard gurgling softly. None of the pack members spoke. It had been another day that their rightful alpha did not return. Many still mourned for their previous alpha. Others remained silent and prayed the rightful heir would return.


"What do you mean I can't have the position as alpha!!" Bider yelled. "I Killed Strider and his son is gone, who else will rule!?". A bright brown wolf standing before Bider smirked. "I will, in the absence of our leader, I am to take control," he said. Bider scoffed, "But he is dead!". The other wolf shook his head. " I am aware of the fact. But do not speak of our past leader, I speak of his son." He began. Bider growled, "Explain yourself,". The wolf nodded, "Gladly. You see You may have killed our previous leader, but his son is to take over after him. He has come of age and is eligible to rule. As long as he lives, we serve only him," The wolf explained. Bider snarled, "Then so be it," he began. "I will come back with his head and take my rightful place as the alpha!" Bider growled, he stepped out of the clearing and sprinted off into the woods.


The brown wolf sighed and shook his head. ***** it Kiou, why do you always have to give away the answer. He thought. Kiou mentally chastised himself for putting Kruz in trouble. Out of the corner of the clearing, a silver female crept into the clearing. It was Luna. A worried look consumed her face. "What did he say?" She asked. Kiou sighed, "He is going to find Kruz to kill him and take place as the pack's alpha," he explained. Luna gasped, "No..." she shuddered. Luna bowed her head as she began to cry softly. Kiou placed a soft paw on her shoulder. "I'm sorry...there is nothing I can do," He said softly.


At the River:


Kruz's eyes fluttered open to the bright sun. It was well past midday. His muzzle was buried inward to the panther's chest. Kruz yawned and felt the Panther stir. His jaw was surprisingly functional. Kruz moved one leg to see if he could stand today. But he let out a slight yelp of pain which woke the dark panther next to him.


Hunter's heard a soft yelp and opened the eye's immediatly. He looked around frantically, only to find that there was nothing wrong. He sighed and let out a huge yawn. Hunter looked down and the wolf beneath him and smiled, he was awake already. "Good morning," Hunter greeted the wolf and smiled warmly. Kruz did the same, "Good...morning," he replied. Hunter stepped off of Kruz and stretched his legs. "Great to hear you speaking already," he said. Hunter walked to the river's edge and took a long drink, then he went back to Kruz. "Anyways...I'm Hunter, care to tell me your name?" He asked. Kruz smiled and looked up at Hunter. "I'm....Kruz," he said weakly. Maybe I'm not as well as I think he thought, letting out a soft sigh. Hunter smiled and sat down in front of the wolf. "Kruz...nice to meet you" he said. Kruz smiled, laying his head back down and closing his eyes. He didn't want to exhaust too much energy. Hunter turned his attention to the sounds of the day. For some reason, it was awfully quiet. A bit too Quiet. Hunter began to wonder why.


Kruz spent most of the day resting and sleeping while Hunter entertained himself with the creatures around, chasing them or teasing them. But hunter did not cease to wonder why it was so quiet. He didn't mind the peace for once, but it struck him as an abnormailty to the entire forest. Best to ignore it he thought.


Kruz ran through complete darkness, stumbling and tripping over his own two front paws. Behind him was Bider, angrily chasing him snarling and yelling. The yelling and snarling began to fade. Kruz began to slow, panting heavily. He looked around into the darkness, seeing nothing. And then, he cought the grey form of his father on the ground. Kruz ran happily to his father, who seemed to be sleeping. but Kruz stopped a foot away, stepping in a pool of a crimson fluid. "Dad..." he spoke softly. But no response. His father was dead.

The memory replayed itself in kruz's mind for what seemed to be forever.

I always like a good twist in book plots ^^. This story is really good so far, Kaso!! I'm enjoying it .

Same goes for me! Great job Kaso!

This is going well.

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Hunter could only watch as Kruz struggled in his sleep. He kicked and murmured, he was stuck in his nightmare. Hunter was worried for the wolf, he gently placed a paw on Kruz's forehead and stroked it gently. Then he placed his head on Kruz's chest. Immediatly, Kruz grasped Hunter's forehead and whispered into his ear gently: "I love you dad...just please...wake up," he whispered and began to nuzzle the panther's head softly.


Hunter didn't want to see the wolf in pain anymore. He slipped out of Kruz's arms and cleanched him in his own. He whispered softly into Kruz's ear, "It's just a dream...wake up," he said.


In his dream, Kruz was being held by his father who had reluctantly, woke up. Kruz cried and cried into his father's pelt. But soon, his father dissapeard and took the form of Hunter. Kruz's eyes opened and he looked into the panther's deep, black chest. He shuddered. whipering softly as he did so.


Hunter finally felt Kruz awaken and bury his face into his chest. Something bothered the wolf and he didn't know what, but how he wanted to know. Hunter gently placed Kruz back down and looked him with soft eyes.


"Are you ok?" Hunter asked, a hint of worry could have been dectected in his tone. Kruz looked at the panther and wiped a tear from his eye.


"It's nothing," he replied. Hunter gave a look of disbelief. How could nothing be wrong. Kruz had just called Hunter his father and pleaded him to wake up. Hunter wanted to know why. He wanted an explination to Kruz's actions. And maybe, he wanted to know more about the wolf's past. Just so that he could help him deal with whatever was bothering him.


"Please tell me.." Hunter begged. But Kruz turned his head to the side and looked at the peacful lake in front of him. Hunter sighed and placed his head on his forepaws. A sudden voice startled him. "My father...was killed...two days ago...," Kruz began. Hunter looked up and scurried closer to Kruz with interest. "And the killer...wanted me dead as well," he continued. Kruz could feel tears welling up in his eyes as he spoke. Hunter placed a paw on Kruz's shoulder. "So thats why...I ran...I didn't want to accept it..." Kruz said, his voice broken by soft sobs.


It took Hunter a time to analyze. But he soon understood. Kruz had gotten falsley exiled by a murderer and was experiencing loss for his father and entire family. Hunter could relate, because he didn't ever lose anyone. He had just grown up, and now he lived away from his family. Hunter still felt sorry for the poor wolf. He must've felt lonely, being away from home and all.


Kruz began to cry softly. Hunter placed a paw around Kruz's throat and stomach. He flipped him over in his arms and placed him closely to his chest, hushing him as best he could. "Shhhh.. it's ok," he spoke softly. Hunter soon said something that he meant. "You've got me...I promise...I'll never leave you," he said.


Kruz heard the panther's soft words and wrapped his paws around the Panther's back, holding him close. He didn't want to let go. Kruz just couldn't. He was sad and needed someone to be there for him.


It took Kruz a while too stop crying. But he eventually did. Hunter had lay on his back and let the wolf rest on his chest. And still, he didn't let go.
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Ah, male romace. I like this part.

Awww, even if I don't really like gay stories, this was really cute!! Hunter seems like a really nice panter. I don't know why, but I'm crying XD. You have a true talent for writing stories, Kaso .

I agree with Ashur. You are talented Kaso. Hunter is really nice, even if he is a panther.

Awww, thanks. You guys are making me blush.

Here, for your great support.

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Hunter awakened to a faint sound. Footsteps. Angry growls could be heard from a distance. Hunter wanted to get up and search. But he was still holding Kruz and did not want to disturb his friend's peacful slumber. But he soon became worried and had to do something, the footsteps were headed in their direction. Hunter gently shook Kruz's shoulder, "Hey, Kruz....wake up," he said softly. When words didn't seem to stirr the wolf, hunter gently licked the tip of Kruz's nose. Kruz's nose figited and twitched. He opened one eye and looked sleepily at Hunter. Hunter smiled warmly. But his smile did not last for long. A rustle was heard in the bushes, hunter became completely alert as he picked Kruz off of him and gently set him down. Hunter sniffed the air ravenously to find the source. He found it, but the target could not be seen.


Kruz yawned as Hunter placed him off his chest and onto the ground. He gave a wide yawn and inhaled the fresh, morning air. He gave hunter a confused look before finally standing sucessfully. He was glad to see that his legs were working fine now. Kruz turned his attention back to Hunter. "Hey, whats wrong?" Kruz asked.

Hunter did not look away from the bush. He kept his full attention on the target and did not dare to speak. Kruz had gotten the vibe that someone was watching them. And he began to sniff the air. Immediatly, Kruz crouched low and spoke quietly, "He's here...oh god no...he's here,". Silence followed for moments.


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Sorry but I've got to go to Karate. Hyaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!